Kya likh deti ho yaar tum.. Har chapter is better than the one before.. How are u managing that bro??
Kya bolun main... Let me share examples of some of the best phrases, and lines that I loved...
1. Tears welled up in Surya’s eyes, blurring his vision as he walked out of the police chowki.
2. Beneath the sprawling canopy of the ancient and gnarled banyan tree in the angan, which now seemed like her placeof solace, sat the only woman in the world, who had managed to fill Surya’s heart with dread!
3. Her crisp white saree, flowed around her slender frame like a waterfall, a stark contrast to the vibrant green and stormy black that surrounded her. Tears, glistening like stolen diamonds, flowed unchecked down her porcelain cheeks. (Ye 2. and 3. chummeshwari hai ok!!)
4. A desperate struggle ensued, a flurry of limbs and glinting steel. (typical comic books description)
5. Dadi asked busting in, a whirlwind of colourful silk and nervous energy. Her normally neatly styled hair was sticking out in a comical fashion. (Kya mast describe ki ho Daadi ko aur unki entry ko!)
6. This whole ‘let’s leave Surya home alone with Imlie’ scheme is really getting old now (Wow! didn't expect him to be so direct... Also that movie, ice-cream and everything reminded me of that episode of IPK when Arnav tries to take Khushi out for a date, and she brings along the entire fam-jam! 
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Sach kehti hun Shree.. This story is weaving a very different Imlieverse for me.. I know you are taking plots from the show itself, still you are making it very much your own... It's kind of a mix of Agatha Christie+ Chacha Chawdhary + Bridget Jones + Sherlock + Anuja Chauhan..
Kaaaaafi cozyy.. Bdw thanks for giving the disclaimer of DDP.. Isliye I was prepared for much worse.. But kuch laga hi nai.. 
And now since the sorrow is over, eagerly waiting for the tashan to begin.. from both ends.. 
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