Surlie FF: Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye... - Page 5

beautifully written

This is how it should have been in the show too . Surya investigating Agastya death in detail would have been a major emotional track and side by side the increasing attraction from Surya towards Imlie would a paved way for great angsty love story

Chaudharys being supportive of Imlie was also great addition.

Eager to know the enemy of Agastya who conspired his death and how Surya Imlie catches him.

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Firstly so Black vest made entry here

Superb update shree loved Surya and Chaudhry family interactions.. Imlie obviously won't trust him easily lol bahot papad belne padenge bande ko

Poor Surya pehle hi din khatti imlie ne tikha khila diya and Surya feeling some strange connection with imlie

Can't wait for story to progress and imlie Surya story to start.. Loved the update .. Will be Waiting for the next part🤩

Black Ganji🔥

Black ganji is ishq... 🖤

So happy that you enjoyed the update... Will try to upload next part super soon

Originally posted by: PSharada

Wow this is so awesome Shree. You definitely are writing the thriller element superb - I am now quite intrigued as to how you are going to present Agastya’s accident and his death here.

If only the writers were competent we would not have gotten the pathetic Raghu track. Looking forward to the next chapter.

BTW this is not Agastya with memory loss right. Bekaar main I don’t want to get my hopes you see.

Glad you like the updates so far

No no, this is not Agastya... Its Surya hi

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

beautifully written

This is how it should have been in the show too . Surya investigating Agastya death in detail would have been a major emotional track and side by side the increasing attraction from Surya towards Imlie would a paved way for great angsty love story

Chaudharys being supportive of Imlie was also great addition.

Eager to know the enemy of Agastya who conspired his death and how Surya Imlie catches him.

All your kind words made my day ❤️... Yes, Chaudhary's not backing Imlie after Agastya dies was a major bone of contention for me... It felt like a glitch in their reality...

Yaar the way you write, it feels like a warm cozy hug..

You really are making me want to pick up an Agatha Christie..

Itna cute hai sab kuch..

Imlie's eyes piercing through him all the time across the room, and him getting the jitters... *chef's kiss*

The way she made him eat extra chilli wala khana, and then her getting warning glares from both Daadiamma and Sonali jiji.. Bhai waah!

SPR and your obsession with his black ganji..

And the way he called her a *Pretty Witch*... (You know what, I love reading romcoms setup in small cozy towns about witches )

I won't mind if you write chapters and chapters and chapters of this story.. Let Auggy ka case be the first one, which they work on together, and uske baad let Imlie become a reporter and assist Surya in new cases.. Their romance can build onto in the background.. Like the series Castle, or Lucifer..

(Hamar SKR, koi Tom Ellis se kam hai Ke!)

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Originally posted by: Gags05

Yaar the way you write, it feels like a warm cozy hug..

You really are making me want to pick up an Agatha Christie..

Itna cute hai sab kuch..

Imlie's eyes piercing through him all the time across the room, and him getting the jitters... *chef's kiss*

The way she made him eat extra chilli wala khana, and then her getting warning glares from both Daadiamma and Sonali jiji.. Bhai waah!

SPR and your obsession with his black ganji..

And the way he called her a *Pretty Witch*... (You know what, I love reading romcoms setup in small cozy towns about witches )

I won't mind if you write chapters and chapters and chapters of this story.. Let Auggy ka case be the first one, which they work on together, and uske baad let Imlie become a reporter and assist Surya in new cases.. Their romance can build onto in the background.. Like the series Castle, or Lucifer..

(Hamar SKR, koi Tom Ellis se kam hai Ke!)

https://tenor.com/bpyWl.gif

That's such a hugeeee compliment!!! Go read some Agatha!

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#BlackGanjiSupremacy

Honestly, if I can imagine anyone in India doing a Lucifer remake, has to be Barun or Sai... Only these two have that effortless swagger!

I would have written chapters and chapters of this, but I'm currently working on a little something inspired by my colleagues and my bizzare daily life.. a media industry centric romcom of sorts.. and with office, I hardly get any time to write... So for now it'll be finite, but kal kisne dekha hai...

Originally posted by: Mrs_Darcy_Shree

That's such a hugeeee compliment!!! Go read some Agatha!

https://tenor.com/n6evU6N32Uy.gif

#BlackGanjiSupremacy

Honestly, if I can imagine anyone in India doing a Lucifer remake, has to be Barun or Sai... Only these two have that effortless swagger!

I would have written chapters and chapters of this, but I'm currently working on a little something inspired by my colleagues and my bizzare daily life.. a media industry centric romcom of sorts.. and with office, I hardly get any time to write... So for now it'll be finite, but kal kisne dekha hai...

I will come to your book signing Shree..

Originally posted by: Gags05

I will come to your book signing Shree..

Fingers crossed!!

Thank you for writing this Shree. This is the Surya I wanted. An intelligent and street smart officer. Alas, we never saw him working at all.

I must say, you write with such detailing that I can actually visualise the scene. Keep it coming bro. I am loving it.

Originally posted by: sai2311

Thank you for writing this Shree. This is the Surya I wanted. An intelligent and street smart officer. Alas, we never saw him working at all.

I must say, you write with such detailing that I can actually visualise the scene. Keep it coming bro. I am loving it.

Same bro, jitna iss aadmi ko street smart dikhaya hai, uss hisab se to isse award winning cop hona chahiye tha...

So happy that you're enjoying the updates