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Posted: 7 months ago
#31

Thanks for your words of appreciation guys, truly means a lot... smiley27


Will try to not make you guys wait too long for updates... Agla part is 60% complete btw smiley2


Most of my focus will remain on Surlie... And sparks will fly from both ends soon... No extra slowburn, no unnecessary family drama... smiley9 haan bas Auggy k death ka DDP sehna padega thoda thoda smiley19 not like any of us can ever move on from him

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Posted: 7 months ago
#32

Shree yaaaar...your writing is truly exquisite smiley42


I'm not surprised anymore by how you breathe life into your characters. Their actions, reactions, and dialogues are impeccably true to their personalities. Han bas this part was so full of DDKP.. But yeah, I understand its necessity smiley19


I'm hopeful that the upcoming chapters will be lighter, and we'll get to see the sparks fly between Surlie.. Can't wait to read more behen.. Just give me the next part already 😭


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PS: Special mention to the dialogue that stole my heart, liver, lungs, kidney...

"I don't have a family.. I've been on my own for as long as I can remember".. Haaye. Jo thandak mili hai mere kaleje ko. Good riddance. smiley42


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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: YourSia

PS: Special mention to the dialogue that stole my heart, liver, lungs, kidney...

"I don't have a family.. I've been on my own for as long as I can remember".. Haaye. Jo thandak mili hai mere kaleje ko. Good riddance. smiley42


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Haina! Mujhe bhi sab Reddys ko ikkathe gayab karke bada maza aaya


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Posted: 6 months ago
#34

Moved to private blog. If you're interested in the story, please PM me for invite and access.

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Posted: 6 months ago
#35

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How can Shree write and not include Surya in that black vest right? NSP Gang assemble.

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I am already feeling so much chemistry between the two, when Imlie made him eat spicy food or him feeling her piercing gaze on him. Considering Imlie ki life is in danger, I believe we have a lot of Surya saving her moments. Yayyy, I cannot wait for more of this. Atleast you will write a better love story than the writers of Imlie

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Posted: 6 months ago
#36

Originally posted by: joliefemme

Love It GIF - Love It Perfecto GIFs


How can Shree write and not include Surya in that black vest right? NSP Gang assemble.

What A Man GIF - What A Man Man Manly GIFs


I am already feeling so much chemistry between the two, when Imlie made him eat spicy food or him feeling her piercing gaze on him. Considering Imlie ki life is in danger, I believe we have a lot of Surya saving her moments. Yayyy, I cannot wait for more of this. Atleast you will write a better love story than the writers of Imlie


Ganji scene k bina kuch adhoora reh jaata smiley37


Uff!!! All your compliments make me blush....


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Posted: 6 months ago
#37

Firstly so Black vest made entry heresmiley36 smiley42


Superb update shreesmiley32 loved Surya and Chaudhry family interactions.. Imlie obviously won't trust him easily lol bahot papad belne padenge bande kosmiley36


Poor Surya pehle hi din khatti imlie ne tikha khila diya smiley36 and Surya feeling some strange connection with imliesmiley42


Can't wait for story to progress and imlie Surya story to start.. Loved the update .. Will be Waiting for the next part🤩


Black Ganji🔥

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Posted: 6 months ago
#38

Amazing... Awesome......smiley27.reading this in the middle of court case.....Thanks for tagging me.. smiley1

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: hurrom

Amazing... Awesome......smiley27.reading this in the middle of court case.....Thanks for tagging me.. smiley1


So sweet of you ❤️

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Posted: 6 months ago
#40

Wow this is so awesome Shree. You definitely are writing the thriller element superb - I am now quite intrigued as to how you are going to present Agastya’s accident and his death here.


If only the writers were competent we would not have gotten the pathetic Raghu track. Looking forward to the next chapter.

BTW this is not Agastya with memory loss right. Bekaar main I don’t want to get my hopes you see.

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