Phew, what a long day
Finally got to re-read your story and damn, how did you pull it off, Shree?
As pointed out by Ren & Gags, your story's got major mystery novel vibes. The village setup and the way you shed light on Surya's character, top-notch. Reading from his POV? Best part, hands down.
Him coming to Purvaiya to investigate on Agastya's case was absolutely genius, Shree. Chummeshwari plotline
I know, we all had our major meltdowns over him, but it's hard to overlook how he treated Imlie in those early episodes. The way she suffered because of his blind love for Malti, was just too much. But but..I'm relieved there's no mention of her or her sanki gunda husband in this part. Yayy!! (Fingers crossed they stay out of the picture in future parts. But I got full trust, even if you decide to bring them, you'll handle it like a pro and do justice to the story and its potential )
I'm so glad there's no pre-consumed hatred, no suspicion, nothing from Surya's side on their first meet. It was all natural..his protective instincts & the connection he felt.. Waah waah kya likha hai
As for those pain-inducing DDKP episodes I've skipped (that Gags keeps taunting me for.
), I'm just gonna imagine that the story unfolded exactly how you described before Imlie and Surya got married. (They aren't married yet naa?)
Now, when are you going to update the story???? Bring on the next parts already
Aww.. you guys made my day... No Balti/reddys in my version... Full on chaudhary drama... 
ha, yahan they're not married abhi... Working on the next two parts, will post super soon 
Btw, tum agla part kab likh rahi ho? No bhatkoing from topic, jaldi jaldi likho 
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