Surlie FF: Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye... - Page 2

SHREEEE BEHEN KAHAN THI AAAP AB TAK 😭😭😭😭

I have a lot to say but abhi kaam is too much.. Read this in haste

Lemme come back in the evening with my garam chai ki pyaali, will re-read & then, give my detailed feedback

Originally posted by: Gags05

Yahan ghar basa nai hai.. tum aa jao lootne pehle 😂😂

They should first come in one frame together...You know I searched the entire internet for their pics and frames together for my story, and there's hardly any..

Galti se Holi episode me kuch tha..

Basically first show me toh kuch progress dikhaein, phir we get inspired, apne dimaag ke ghode daudane ke liye 😂😂

And Sunaina.. Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai, tum bhi kaamal likhogi.. Give it a try na.. 🤗

arey Chaand Taare ke liye inspiration nahi hai but ladoo peda ke liye toh Agaslie ne kafi diya tha. ITV mein us se jyada nahi dikha sakte na . Phir bhi Sai Adrija really did a very commendable and convincing job at portraying the physical attraction between Agastya Imlie.

Ladoo peda ki making ke liye kithe opportunities the like their first jhopdi romance when Agastya cooked food for Imlie, Intoxicated Agastya trying to kiss Imlie( didi Tera devar diwana episode) , When Agsatya became masked man and kidnapped Imlie and our favorite lorry romance

Take creative liberty

Wohooo one more writer emerging from our AT group🤩

Loved loved the start of the story the way you have described surya's character here is just❤

Reading Surya imlie stuff gave me those goosebumps wala feel which i wanted to feel while watching there scenes in show well show ke writers ne toh kuch khaas nahi diya but your write up giving that kind of feel

Already excited for next chapter.. Update soon🤩

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

you wrote what I exactly wanted to write for the review.

It had full mysterious plus forbidden romance wali feeling set in purwaiya that we had gotten accustomed to during masked man Track.

Loved the way you beautifully described dainty Imlie and how Surya was feeling strange connection With her

Also I got emotional whenever Surya referred Agastya as his little brother 🥺

I was so emotional writing Surya pov... Show mein i wanted his turmoil over losing Agastya and the opportunity to really get to know his family... So will try to focus on that

Don't expect ladoo peda jalebi from this story...

And Gags is right, I see a writer hidden in there, do write some cute ladoo peda jalebi stuff na...

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Wohooo one more writer emerging from our AT group🤩

Loved loved the start of the story the way you have described surya's character here is just❤

Reading Surya imlie stuff gave me those goosebumps wala feel which i wanted to feel while watching there scenes in show well show ke writers ne toh kuch khaas nahi diya but your write up giving that kind of feel

Already excited for next chapter.. Update soon🤩

Haye... Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: hurrom

Nice......amazing.... .yaar.....update soon....

Pakka pakka, super soon

Lagta hai crowd funding karke khud hi show banana padega. Gajab talent hai yahaan. Have you girls ever considered freelancing

This is so beautifully written Shree. We never got to know or see Surya’s perspective.The whole back story of him moving from Hyderabad to Purvaiya is brilliant. The details are so well captured, I could actually visualise the story.

Bas ab Jaldi jaldi part 2 le aao

Phew, what a long day

Finally got to re-read your story and damn, how did you pull it off, Shree?

As pointed out by Ren & Gags, your story's got major mystery novel vibes. The village setup and the way you shed light on Surya's character, top-notch. Reading from his POV? Best part, hands down.

Him coming to Purvaiya to investigate on Agastya's case was absolutely genius, Shree. Chummeshwari plotline

I know, we all had our major meltdowns over him, but it's hard to overlook how he treated Imlie in those early episodes. The way she suffered because of his blind love for Malti, was just too much. But but..I'm relieved there's no mention of her or her sanki gunda husband in this part. Yayy!! (Fingers crossed they stay out of the picture in future parts. But I got full trust, even if you decide to bring them, you'll handle it like a pro and do justice to the story and its potential )

I'm so glad there's no pre-consumed hatred, no suspicion, nothing from Surya's side on their first meet. It was all natural..his protective instincts & the connection he felt.. Waah waah kya likha hai

As for those pain-inducing DDKP episodes I've skipped (that Gags keeps taunting me for. ), I'm just gonna imagine that the story unfolded exactly how you described before Imlie and Surya got married. (They aren't married yet naa?)

Now, when are you going to update the story???? Bring on the next parts already

Originally posted by: sai2311

This is so beautifully written Shree. We never got to know or see Surya’s perspective.The whole back story of him moving from Hyderabad to Purvaiya is brilliant. The details are so well captured, I could actually visualise the story.

Bas ab Jaldi jaldi part 2 le aao

That's the goal, to show his perspective.. glad you enjoyed it...

And freelance to nhi but as a news editor I get to refine my language daily, so really enjoy that...