Surlie FF: Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye... - Page 12

Shree Behen,

What to say. I read the last 2 parts together as I kind of forgot to read it because of my busy hectic life last week. Sigh - itna dukh dard peeda. I so wish the writers wrote Surya ka introduction the way you have written - an orphan who comes in the lives of Chaudharys after Agastya is killed. I really don't know why Reddy were introduced and what they added to the story and characters.

I loved the way you have sketched the interactions of Surya and Dadi, Surya and Imlie and Surya and Arjun. And your description of pain Imlie had in her heart after Agastya passed away.

Behen you have a tough job on your hands. How are you even going to make Imlie move on if at all she moves on? Surya ka phir bhi I can understand as you have said - Imlie has the radiance which fills the room and it is no wonder that Surya is also getting a little bit affected by her, her happiness and her sadness. But your Imlie is also like the show ka Imlie - a jogan to her August babu.

We did not get Agastya coming back in show but please hamre khatir get Agastya babu back in this FF at least and then I can totally hit a delete button of what was shown in the show and replace it with what you have written here. A sincere request.

Shree girl I have a few questions for you...

1. Itna acha kaise likh leti ho.

2. Why haven't you published a novel yet, you are insanely talented.

3. Ab tak kahan thi tum

4. Where do you find the time to write such brilliant updates and so frequently.

Now now now.... Let me start by telling you, you are the best fiction writer I have read in years on IF. Every part you write, it gets better than the previous. I don't know how you manage to do it but I literally end up visualizing the scenes while I am reading. There are very few writers who possess this magic.

I don't know how you felt about this part but this was too much DDP inducing bro. I mean just hearing Imlie talking about babu, her love for him, their memories, HIM <3 That man even after death and the show continues to make us cry...

I am loving to see a good bonding between Surya and Imlie, one that was not forced by tricks played by Dadi ma but because both have lost someone who was near to them. My Surya helped her out of her panic attacks. He is quick thinking and knows how to get a reaction from her. I loved how the rains and the music also helped set the whole vibe of their bonding. I can't wait to see how Surya rises to the ocassion and helps Imlie live her life without her babu, fulfill her dreams and just be happy....

You know what you are doing so I will just enjoy the ride. Also, I was not expecting this much DDP yaar. I again shed tears reading this part. The writers in Imlie could never ever touch what you have managed to write. Take a bow Shree!!!

Originally posted by: PSharada

Shree Behen,

What to say. I read the last 2 parts together as I kind of forgot to read it because of my busy hectic life last week. Sigh - itna dukh dard peeda. I so wish the writers wrote Surya ka introduction the way you have written - an orphan who comes in the lives of Chaudharys after Agastya is killed. I really don't know why Reddy were introduced and what they added to the story and characters.

I loved the way you have sketched the interactions of Surya and Dadi, Surya and Imlie and Surya and Arjun. And your description of pain Imlie had in her heart after Agastya passed away.

Behen you have a tough job on your hands. How are you even going to make Imlie move on if at all she moves on? Surya ka phir bhi I can understand as you have said - Imlie has the radiance which fills the room and it is no wonder that Surya is also getting a little bit affected by her, her happiness and her sadness. But your Imlie is also like the show ka Imlie - a jogan to her August babu.

We did not get Agastya coming back in show but please hamre khatir get Agastya babu back in this FF at least and then I can totally hit a delete button of what was shown in the show and replace it with what you have written here. A sincere request.

Will have to disappoint you on that one front coz Agastya really is gone here as well... But what I really aim to do here is show a gradual falling in love without any forced or guilt-ridden angle... Maybe some cupid-playing here and there but no other pressure...

Surya as a character had a lot to be explored which couldn't be done because of the forced revamp... I'll try to keep all that away and give an organic second chance love story

Originally posted by: joliefemme

Shree girl I have a few questions for you...

1. Itna acha kaise likh leti ho.

2. Why haven't you published a novel yet, you are insanely talented.

3. Ab tak kahan thi tum

4. Where do you find the time to write such brilliant updates and so frequently.

Now now now.... Let me start by telling you, you are the best fiction writer I have read in years on IF. Every part you write, it gets better than the previous. I don't know how you manage to do it but I literally end up visualizing the scenes while I am reading. There are very few writers who possess this magic.

I don't know how you felt about this part but this was too much DDP inducing bro. I mean just hearing Imlie talking about babu, her love for him, their memories, HIM <3 That man even after death and the show continues to make us cry...

I am loving to see a good bonding between Surya and Imlie, one that was not forced by tricks played by Dadi ma but because both have lost someone who was near to them. My Surya helped her out of her panic attacks. He is quick thinking and knows how to get a reaction from her. I loved how the rains and the music also helped set the whole vibe of their bonding. I can't wait to see how Surya rises to the ocassion and helps Imlie live her life without her babu, fulfill her dreams and just be happy....

You know what you are doing so I will just enjoy the ride. Also, I was not expecting this much DDP yaar. I again shed tears reading this part. The writers in Imlie could never ever touch what you have managed to write. Take a bow Shree!!!

Tum, Gags and baaki sab bhi aise mujhe pump karti rehti ho apne khoobsurat compliments se and I end up working a little harder to meet the expectations...

But honestly... This subject of second chance at love is very personal to me for certain reasons so I'm trying to do justice to it as much as I can...

The premise Imlie3 set, however DDP inducing, had immense potential even after confirming Auggy's death but it was the execution and writing that lacked... And wo mujhe khatakta rahega till I get some sort of closure through this FF... Coz Auggy ka closure I sort of got with the second last episode but Surlie story felt thoda incomplete...

Baki Radharani ki kripa bani rahe n story aage b sahi se continue ho sake...

Shree sorry not getting enough time as i m stuck with something but i have read all the updates and they are super aawesome keep it Up girl ❤

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Shree sorry not getting enough time as i m stuck with something but i have read all the updates and they are super aawesome keep it Up girl ❤

Yay!!! 🎉😘

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Knock knock...

Next chapter pls?

Originally posted by: Gags05

Knock knock...

Next chapter pls?

On it bro! Garmi mein dimag slow ho gya hai

Updating soon...

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