Surlie FF: Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye... - Page 10

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

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yeh tum Alka maa ji jaise kutil baatein kyon kar rahi hai

Cos...cos...I am getting bored in office.. 😂

And I can't read Shree ka update yet.. 🥹

Isliye doing keede..

Stories main ab Imlie kuch jalak milegi.....Amazingly written..... Friday ko last episode dekungi...par story padi hain....awesome.....pls story khatam karna....... Kiu kuch writers show end ki bad stories bhi beech main chodke cale jate hai.....

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

Itna Acha likhogi toh mujhe Agastya imlie se jyada Surya imlie se pyar ho jayega. Why you couldn't write for the show 😕

loved how beautifully you described the Imlie serene beauty while sitting under banyan tree and Surya getting mesmerized for a moment .

Now who could be this enemy who is Now targeting Imlie.

Yeh Surya imlie dono ke dil meim thoda toh dhak dhak ho raha hai

Will be waiting to see how Surya " wild cat " will react to the proposal of alliance between them

Uff!! This means so much to me... ❤️

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

I am loving this story ♥....

Thanks for giving it a read, glad you like it... ❤️

Originally posted by: Gags05

@bold - mereko laga u already loved SurLie after reading my FF... 🥹

Apparently not! 😭😭😭

Ari o pagli, main tum same hi to hain bhool gyi

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Originally posted by: Gags05

Kya likh deti ho yaar tum.. Har chapter is better than the one before.. How are u managing that bro??

Kya bolun main... Let me share examples of some of the best phrases, and lines that I loved...

1. Tears welled up in Surya’s eyes, blurring his vision as he walked out of the police chowki.

2. Beneath the sprawling canopy of the ancient and gnarled banyan tree in the angan, which now seemed like her placeof solace, sat the only woman in the world, who had managed to fill Surya’s heart with dread!

3. Her crisp white saree, flowed around her slender frame like a waterfall, a stark contrast to the vibrant green and stormy black that surrounded her. Tears, glistening like stolen diamonds, flowed unchecked down her porcelain cheeks. (Ye 2. and 3. chummeshwari hai ok!!)

4. A desperate struggle ensued, a flurry of limbs and glinting steel. (typical comic books description)

5. Dadi asked busting in, a whirlwind of colourful silk and nervous energy. Her normally neatly styled hair was sticking out in a comical fashion. (Kya mast describe ki ho Daadi ko aur unki entry ko!)

6. This whole ‘let’s leave Surya home alone with Imlie’ scheme is really getting old now (Wow! didn't expect him to be so direct... Also that movie, ice-cream and everything reminded me of that episode of IPK when Arnav tries to take Khushi out for a date, and she brings along the entire fam-jam! )

Sach kehti hun Shree.. This story is weaving a very different Imlieverse for me.. I know you are taking plots from the show itself, still you are making it very much your own... It's kind of a mix of Agatha Christie+ Chacha Chawdhary + Bridget Jones + Sherlock + Anuja Chauhan..

Kaaaaafi cozyy.. Bdw thanks for giving the disclaimer of DDP.. Isliye I was prepared for much worse.. But kuch laga hi nai..

And now since the sorrow is over, eagerly waiting for the tashan to begin.. from both ends..

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Yaaaar Gags, tum kyun ho itni sweetu pyaaru!! Ek hi dil hai, kitni baar jeetogi... have this huge loki style grin on my face right now... ❤️

Originally posted by: hurrom

Stories main ab Imlie kuch jalak milegi.....Amazingly written..... Friday ko last episode dekungi...par story padi hain....awesome.....pls story khatam karna....... Kiu kuch writers show end ki bad stories bhi beech main chodke cale jate hai.....

Pakka promise, will definitely finish this one... ❤️

Shreeeeee.... BRO... sorry I took time to get back to this one. Pehle hi padh toh lia tha but you know how life gets busy LOL.

I absolutely love how descriptive you get in your sentences. Literally makes me feel like I am reading a nail biting suspense novel. NGL, I am loving the shifting dynamic between Surya and Imlie. How Imlie ke emotions went from hate and disgust to gratitude and worry (great use of the tree in the angan btw). Surya ka attraction towards Imlie (her simplicity, and her kindness) makes my expectations rise LOL. It is nice to see him notice small things about her and get impacted by her. *Alexa play pehla pehla pyar hai*

Loving Dadi and Sonali jiji playing cupid and how Surya is smart enough to understand their actions (atleast you are showing him as a worthy cop lol). It will be interesting to see if Surya actively goes along with their plans, or let's them continue with their attempts at bringing them close just to see where it goes or tells them point blank to put a full stop to it as there is no future of Imlie and Surya.

I am so invested in this story Imlie ka falling in love phase will be super interesting. Here there is no Reddy family or Anjali jinko Surya oppose kar karke hume melt karega na. Are you planning to show Dadi force Imlie to agree to marry Surya? I hope the accidental death of Agastya due to mistaken identity does not act as a reason for Surya's guilt. I hope both our leads are able to rise beyond these circumstances and fall in love with each other for who they are.

Lastly, Gul should have hired you to write the show, Bas keh dia!!

Originally posted by: joliefemme

Shreeeeee.... BRO... sorry I took time to get back to this one. Pehle hi padh toh lia tha but you know how life gets busy LOL.

I absolutely love how descriptive you get in your sentences. Literally makes me feel like I am reading a nail biting suspense novel. NGL, I am loving the shifting dynamic between Surya and Imlie. How Imlie ke emotions went from hate and disgust to gratitude and worry (great use of the tree in the angan btw). Surya ka attraction towards Imlie (her simplicity, and her kindness) makes my expectations rise LOL. It is nice to see him notice small things about her and get impacted by her. *Alexa play pehla pehla pyar hai*

Loving Dadi and Sonali jiji playing cupid and how Surya is smart enough to understand their actions (atleast you are showing him as a worthy cop lol). It will be interesting to see if Surya actively goes along with their plans, or let's them continue with their attempts at bringing them close just to see where it goes or tells them point blank to put a full stop to it as there is no future of Imlie and Surya.

I am so invested in this story Imlie ka falling in love phase will be super interesting. Here there is no Reddy family or Anjali jinko Surya oppose kar karke hume melt karega na. Are you planning to show Dadi force Imlie to agree to marry Surya? I hope the accidental death of Agastya due to mistaken identity does not act as a reason for Surya's guilt. I hope both our leads are able to rise beyond these circumstances and fall in love with each other for who they are.

Lastly, Gul should have hired you to write the show, Bas keh dia!!

Trust me, I get it.. wrote this update itni mushkil se time nikal nikal k coz of how hectic office is aaj kal...

So glad that you're enjoying the progression... ❤️ One of my biggest complaints with the writers was that they showed Surya to be a smart man but a duffer cop, made no sense...

No force or pressure or guilt leading to marriage here... Only gradual falling in love... why and how, you'll know soon enough...

Originally posted by: joliefemme

Shreeeeee.... BRO... sorry I took time to get back to this one. Pehle hi padh toh lia tha but you know how life gets busy LOL.

I absolutely love how descriptive you get in your sentences. Literally makes me feel like I am reading a nail biting suspense novel. NGL, I am loving the shifting dynamic between Surya and Imlie. How Imlie ke emotions went from hate and disgust to gratitude and worry (great use of the tree in the angan btw). Surya ka attraction towards Imlie (her simplicity, and her kindness) makes my expectations rise LOL. It is nice to see him notice small things about her and get impacted by her. *Alexa play pehla pehla pyar hai*

Loving Dadi and Sonali jiji playing cupid and how Surya is smart enough to understand their actions (atleast you are showing him as a worthy cop lol). It will be interesting to see if Surya actively goes along with their plans, or let's them continue with their attempts at bringing them close just to see where it goes or tells them point blank to put a full stop to it as there is no future of Imlie and Surya.

I am so invested in this story Imlie ka falling in love phase will be super interesting. Here there is no Reddy family or Anjali jinko Surya oppose kar karke hume melt karega na. Are you planning to show Dadi force Imlie to agree to marry Surya? I hope the accidental death of Agastya due to mistaken identity does not act as a reason for Surya's guilt. I hope both our leads are able to rise beyond these circumstances and fall in love with each other for who they are.

Lastly, Gul should have hired you to write the show, Bas keh dia!!

Show ke khatam hone pe bhi.. Shree ka this FF makes me feel so happy happy.. I can imagine everything.. cos that's how brilliantly she writes ❤️

@Shree - pls ya 10-20 chapters se pehle mat rukna