This is amazing Sarcy
. But, I have one thing to say, you should edit out a part:
She lost a love; She didn't she the friendship she found
Instead you should write:
She lost a hope; She didn't see the emotion/good will/ heart/ warmth she found
An absolutely gorgeous experimental piece, love the parallels and introspection. Hopefully reel Imlie experiences this without taking 50 steps back.
This drabble is everything I had seen and felt during the scene but could never put so beautifully in words like you did :)
Hi Sarcy, I love this. Your drabble is a reflection of all of our states of mind. Too many times we get so wrapped up in our past and baggages that we stop to look at what is in front of us and what we can get from our future.
Imlie too is stuck with her T baggage and unfortunately needs a good shake to see her future..
Hey Nimmi!
Thanks for this. Who knew that within a week since I wrote this, Imlie would get the biggest shake she could ever need to push her aways from the Ts and to the Rathores! Such beautiful progression this past week has shown in the AryLie dynamics!
You did not do that 😭
Why have I to read it today of all days too sensitive damn 😭🥺🤧
It's a masterpiece sarc ❤️
This is so beautiful ❤️
The things she has always yearned,were giving to her wrapped in conditions now when she found them she is overwhelmed .the peace ,love, trust she found in the unimaginable place shaking her soul .moving her and replacing her doubts .was it love ? Is this love ?
Love love love
Oh my, my Sarce ! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE ? This piece is so incredibly gorgeous that I have lost my words. I don't know how to describe it in words, this just hit so hard and completely summed up Imlie's journey till date. I know since the day we started watching, some of us root more for Aryan or AryLie together because Imlie's actions oftentimes doesn't make sense to us like her excessive attachment to the Tripathis or not believing Aditya to be guilty but we forget that at the end of the day, it is her journey and she's been a victim as well. Just another 19 year old naive teenager when she came to the city who had to endure emotional abuse, attempts of murder and hell lotta gaslighting. But her heart's at the right place and she's still growing, her journey hasn't ended yet, A new chapter began and what a beautiful ode you gave to the knowledge she gained in the old chapter because of the many betrayals and the acceptance & love, this new chapter showers her with. The contrasts and the comparisons you did have all my heart. The quote you started with- William Blake, always a classic and gives this whole piece an astounding feel. All the quotes in fact, I have them screenshotted to be read and used again. This provides such a great insight on her character. The best take I have read on her journey so far.
Never thought I would find a literary piece like this here. But I am the gainer for having read it since it allowed me to emphasize more with Imlie's character and you deserve all the credit for it.
Thank you for investing your time in this and composing such a beautiful piece that can be read over and over again ❤️
Keep them coming please !
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