Sarcyy!!
Thanks lovee!!❤️
I would have totally missed this beautiful piece if u hadn't tagged me!
It was sucha beautiful writing!
My favourite one was them being cozy!!🤗🤗🤗
Really looking forward to hear more from you!!
Comon! Keep coming!🎉
Toodle loo!!
I love this, this is so beautiful and to be honest I am a little jealous I wanted to write something along the same lines calling it "His Jungli" as well and this is way better, much more beautiful than anything I could have written.
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Please do write more, would love to read more as well.
Thank you! Oh, I'm sure your version would be different with your own touch. You should definitely write it!
I'll keep you posted if I write more.
Originally posted by: screen22
This is amazing because all the thinking was done by Aditya and the whole focus was Aryan and Imlie.
This was very good explaining the faults that Aditya as done or misunderstood Imlie. To believe face value was hard and the word was trust which he never ever gave to Imlie, so for the first time he realised what he had given up and will never have.
Aryan and Imlie the story as just began.🥳
Thank you! Yes, I wanted to give this a different take and thought what better way than to see AryLie through Aditya's eyes. He's never pondered the reason behind the failure of his marriage nor really understood Imlie's and her desires. So I enjoyed having him do it here. 😆
Nicely done ! I hv literally been thinking why dont they show AKTs point of view wrt Aryan and Imlie’s interactions, like what did he genuinely feel if he were to witness these two together.. you captured that beautifully.. I d love to see somtjing similar in the drama as well 😀
Thank you! Yes, it would be a pleasure to see him do some introspection in the show but we haven't got it yet, and given the way it is going, it doesn’t look like we are going to get it anytime in the near future either. 😆
Girl, take a bow
This introspective piece was such a good take on Adi's character. I loved how Adi finally realised what he had lost, he took her for granted and gave her scraps in return.
She found someone who's proud to have her stand by and in-front of him instead of hiding her away, someone who's constantly motivating her to stand up and fight back instead of someone who constantly chipping away at her self-esteem.
Also loved seeing Imlie fretting over his injury and threatening to never let him have another peaceful night ever again, bet Aru's brain.exe stopped working🤯
I can't wait to see more of your writing, now that we know how talented you are, you won't be allowed to hide anymore😤Thanks for tagging babe🥰
Thank you, Ahlaam! That's really sweet of you to say. I think we all really wanted to see this take on Adi's character and I'm glad ya'll think I could do justice to it
Haha, Aru was definitely affected but he also knows that his Jungli doesn't even understand how her words could be construed. 😆
Will keep you tagged if I write more!
Originally posted by: Niharthebird
Fantastic well written from aditya's perspective. Like how he analyzed his mistakes and realized that it's too late to rectify. Continue soon👍🏼
Thank you! This was a single piece so there won't be a continuation but will keep you tagged if I write anything new.
Originally posted by: Madhu_Sharma123
Oo my goodness this was Amazing. The way u portrayed aditya POV is simply superb. I could see how aditya is frustrated by seeing how imlie can be happy without him😏 with aryan.
The way Aryan say " ur bleedy talented " 🤣 sry I guess it's bad.
Thanks for tagging and plz do continue writing ur fabulous 😘😘.
Thank you, Madhu! Hahaha, that was really sweet of you to say that. I'll definitely take that ASR-like compliment. 😆
Seeing the name Aditya made me frantically scroll up as to see what kind of fic I was reading👀
Ahlaam, this comment makes me laugh every single time. 🤣
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