Just love it. I really like the Adi here than the robot expresionless we have in the show. Here he is more human and realised that he was wrong.
Can someone please answer me on something. Was the relationship of Adi and Imlie as light and spicy as the chemistry for Arylie?? I dont mean the romantic side but the teasing side. Did Imlie tease and talk with Adi the same as with Aryan. They are both always tease fighting and Imlie always teasing and laughing. Was it same?? Sorry I started watching only when ASR joined in.
And please continue writing and also translating in English. Your stories are just awesome.
Thanks for the tag otherwise I would have missed this.
I read the OS on the way home from work and it held my attention the whole time. I was like, I will read once I get home but I read the first sentence and I couldn't stop!
I think what elevated this and what kept me glued was that you wrote it entirely from Aditya's POV. Aditya was very raw with his thoughts but it felt as if he was a voyeur. It was like he was intruding on an intimate moment. Those two were completely lost in their own world and oblivious to their surroundings. Aditya couldn't take his eyes away from the interaction that was occurring before him. You gave AKT an internal voice and the ability to introspect that has been missing from his character. I don't know if it was your intention or not but writing Aditya with this ability to reflect on his actions and those of the characters in front of him made me understand and sympathise with him which is something I haven't been able to do otherwise.
Very well written, quite nuanced and all 3 were in character from start to finish. Just wonderful, I look forward to more from you.
Hey, this is awesome. Your story made me feel pity and sad for Aditya, most of his problems are due to his own poor judgement but still I felt sad for him.
Though we were reading through Aditya's jealousy clouded thoughts, I could see the trust relationship between Aryan and Imlie. I just loved it.
The care Aryan head for Imlie, how Imlie was worried about Aryan's hurt etc etc everything was so soothing.
Only if Aditya is able to understand Malini and Imlie like he understands Aryan here😅😅😅
Aditya finally realised why Imlie left him. Thank you for this.
Okay okay, if this is called "wasting time", PLEASE KEEP WASTING TIME LIKE THIS AS LONG AS POSSIBLE. What an absolute delight to read this was!❤️ I have realized that I have a particular soft spot to read pieces from Aditya's point of view. It's just because his character isn't black and white, it's turned grey and the way his self righteousness has turned into bitterness has been quite intriguing. But AryLie from Aditya's point of view IS EVERYTHING 🤌 It's the way you wrote that reminded us of the parallels between the relationships Imlie had with them, with Aditya she had a relationship with labels even if it took time for them to accept and yet, the relationship couldn't survive. But with Aryan, despite the lack of labels, the bond they have is blooming with so much respect and care. The mental exhaustion, bitterness, regret and his subconscious voice calling the high-handedness of his behavior out- Aditya's each attribute was so well done. And I loved the particular detailing you add to the scenes, helps with the visualization of each scene with crispness. AryLie's banter flowed so organically as well, it was particularly refreshing to see how the other characters look at them when we as fangirl cheer them on. Imlie as usual saying things that affect Aryan without even realizing what she has done, and how extremely Aryan gets flustered/affected by her gesture was ahh, particularly heartmelting 🤍 Aryan's rage on Imlie's behalf and her making excuses for the T Clan while Aditya was grumbling on like they didn't force her to sleep in the couch SUMMED BOTH OF THESE RELATIONSHIPS UP. That point you realize despite Aditya's regret or if he is given a redemption, why AdiLie would never work or hadn't worked before. Aditya and his family would always take her for granted and the choice they think they are giving her are her actual bindings. And on the other hand, Aryan might give her tough tasks without a choice, but that is what enables her to touch the skies. These opportunities are her platform to surpass everything she has been put through. Really man, I might go on and on, about the nuggets of introspection and symbolisms this piece brought along. Sweet from AryLie's, and poignant from Aditya's side. This piece has it ALL. Brilliant man, really loved the plot, imagery, storytelling and everything in between. Thank you for writing this piece and dedicating your time Sarcy! Please do write more and thanks so much for the tag ✨ Really loved this one.❤️
Originally posted by: mahiaana
Agar yeh garmi ki season hoti mei AC off karke bas isko parti rehti.
Ek jo thaaaand feel horahi hei mujhe
Aisa lagraha hei kisine lassi daal di mere upar. 😍😍🌊🌊🌊
Thanks for tagging me. This is what Deltablues and I have been keep asking for. Adi sufferering, regretting, dying from inside. Pishacho wali shanti mili mujhe .
Asr and adi mei yehi fark hei. Being her husband adi couldn't win her trust because of his nalle pan. But see this man, Aryan has poured all his trust, his beliefs, his every possible emotions into her and she accepted it with open arms. And this is the result now. This bond of them. How comfortable she is with him. And she wanted him there with her though she didn't say it openly but her action did say it for him.
Imaliya :- I will ensure i won't let you sleep a single night for the rest of your life (wow kya dhamki di...🌚)
Aru :- Junglee ( iske dimaag ne bhi wohi socha jo humare dimaag ne samjha)
( le My brain :- oooh accha accha...har roj jaga ke rakhna hei...junglee o ki tarha ..pyaasi jungli 🌚
sundari , meri , mltr , egle, pottery hum sabki tharki atma ghuss gayi ladki mei 🤪)
🤣🤣🤣 Mahi…..Sarcy ke liye non pyaasi kuch likh behen, Ye kya tu hamesha gutter leke pahunch jaati hai? Ye lo mera bhi iss gang mein samavesh kar diya. Meine pyaara sa sober sa reaction diya tha…jaake padh.
😳 Sarce I did not think any gutter thoughts at all with your OS. It was delightful, real and natural. The word organic has lost its charm on this phorum.
🤣🤣🤣 Mahi…..Sarcy ke liye non pyaasi kuch likh behen, Ye kya tu hamesha gutter leke pahunch jaati hai? Ye lo mera bhi iss gang mein samavesh kar diya. Meine pyaara sa sober sa reaction diya tha…jaake padh.
😳 Sarce I did not think any gutter thoughts at all with your OS. It was delightful, real and natural. The word organic has lost its charm on this phorum.
Behena upar itna bara non tharki wala likha to hei...bas neeche ake ittu sa guttering kardi 🤫
Abhi meri kya galti
meri dimaag hi dirty 🌚🤧😭
Tereko us har raat jagake rakhungi sentence se ittu sa bhi woh types thoughts nahi aye?
https://tenor.com/view/shehnaaz-gill-headache-stressed-haayee-rabba-gif-16826124
jhoootiiiii!
🤣🤣🤣 Mahi…..Sarcy ke liye non pyaasi kuch likh behen, Ye kya tu hamesha gutter leke pahunch jaati hai? Ye lo mera bhi iss gang mein samavesh kar diya. Meine pyaara sa sober sa reaction diya tha…jaake padh.
😳 Sarce I did not think any gutter thoughts at all with your OS. It was delightful, real and natural. The word organic has lost its charm on this phorum.
It's like when I say saatvik 😁😁🤣🤣🤣
Awesome. Love your style of writing. How do I find more of your work. Haven’t been to this forum in years so don’t know my way around it anymore
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