This is amazing because all the thinking was done by Aditya and the whole focus was Aryan and Imlie.
This was very good explaining the faults that Aditya as done or misunderstood Imlie. To believe face value was hard and the word was trust which he never ever gave to Imlie, so for the first time he realised what he had given up and will never have.
Aryan and Imlie the story as just began.🥳
Nicely done ! I hv literally been thinking why dont they show AKTs point of view wrt Aryan and Imlie’s interactions, like what did he genuinely feel if he were to witness these two together.. you captured that beautifully.. I d love to see somtjing similar in the drama as well 😀
Girl, take a bow
This introspective piece was such a good take on Adi's character. I loved how Adi finally realised what he had lost, he took her for granted and gave her scraps in return.
She found someone who's proud to have her stand by and in-front of him instead of hiding her away, someone who's constantly motivating her to stand up and fight back instead of someone who constantly chipping away at her self-esteem.
Also loved seeing Imlie fretting over his injury and threatening to never let him have another peaceful night ever again, bet Aru's brain.exe stopped working🤯
I can't wait to see more of your writing, now that we know how talented you are, you won't be allowed to hide anymore😤
Thanks for tagging babe🥰
Fantastic well written from aditya's perspective. Like how he analyzed his mistakes and realized that it's too late to rectify. Continue soon👍🏼
Oo my goodness this was Amazing. The way u portrayed aditya POV is simply superb. I could see how aditya is frustrated by seeing how imlie can be happy without him😏 with aryan.
The way Aryan say " ur bleedy talented " 🤣 sry I guess it's bad.
Thanks for tagging and plz do continue writing ur fabulous 😘😘.
Thank you for tagging me otherwise i would miss this wonderful peice... Wow you have written so well this day will surely come one day when aditya will get to realised calmly what he had loose and the journey from his jalli to someone jangli is bcoz of himself you haven't trust his own wife over others... O i loved it this is beautiful piece i would say and while watching them as a couple he might be regretting more.... Bcoz now with malini he doesn't feel same love which he used to get from imlie... This is amazing loved keep writing 😍😍
LOVED it! Sarce, that is really the essence of the difference between Imlie's dynamics with Aditya vs ASR. For this girls it is all about faith and trust. ASR gives it to her unconditionally. Aditya could not and would not. He allowed himself over and over again to be blinded by Malini thereby losing Imlie's trust.
Sukoooooooon!! Seeing Aditya's angst and realization of what he had lost. Seeing Imlie and Aryan in each other's arms......
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