AryLie OS ~ Jungli

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Thanks for showering all the love on this OS and making it win at the Reader's Choice Awards. 🤗

OMGoodness!

Loved this, Sarcy 😳

I totally understand being out of the loop of fanfic writing (used to dabble myself) but this was so well written! I love the introspection you've given Aditya (our teasing his poor journalistic skills aside 😆).

Aryan and Imlie were kept in character, Aditya was provided some form of closure ... this is such a classy way to portray the juncture their lives are at.

In addition, I liked the analogy of life and death as I've associated Adi to a sense of decay many a times ... he chooses to waste away

I say keep writing, I'll always read <3

PS: I'll probably read this again and provide a more detailed response soon😳

You were joking in your footnote, right? You were definitely kidding, because if you call this a waste of our time, I sure hope you'll be helping me waste away days reading your work.

I promise you, I was going to wait till tonight because I am at work right now. But I read one line, then I read the next, and I just couldn't bear to leave it unfinished. You pulled me in with such ease that I didn't even realise when I got to the end!

This flowed so well! I could see the frustration Aditya was experiencing, be it before, during or after the couch scene. That voice that niggles at him, telling him not to lie to himself- that was a nice touch.

And omg how effin cute was her concern for checking the wounded eyebrow! I'm so glad you weaved that in because the whole fandom wanted some show of concern about that injury (writers make up for TV letting us down once again!).

I was grinning like an utter fool reading about Imlie not letting him sleep any night for the rest of his life. I'm sure that made Aryan all kinds of happy 🤣The whole couch scene was so aesthetically done. The domestic vibes coming off them was just *insert chef's kiss*

I am SO glad this was from Aditya's POV. An Aditya that we saw GM turn into but never saw him act as. The hate, anger, realization, hurt, betrayal, acceptance. There was the whole gamut of emotions to uncover here and you hit every point.

Thank you for the tag! I would have hated to have missed out on this brilliant piece. ❤️

Burn in jealously 🔥

I love everyone’s pov of how Adi feels and how they see Aru and Imlie. Loved it!! 🥺❤️ Look at them cuddling giving zero fs 😂😂

Oh my heart, so absolutely beautiful! What I wouldn’t do to have this scene play out on the screen 🤍. One thing Adi has clearly lacked is the ability to take responsibility for the breakdown of his marriage to Imlie, he’s blamed Imlie and Aryan for his shortcomings and ignored the way he sabotaged his own relationship for a ‘friend’.

amazing work ✨🙏🏽👏🏽

SARCY oh my gosh this was GORGEOUS, it's rare we see anything from Adi's POV (or that I want to read it) and you did such a wonderful job going through all of his emotions and his perspective of where he went wrong and where Aru goes right for Imlie. I also love that she felt comfortable and they fell asleep together. I hope you'll share more stories with us!

Wow Sarcy! You have written this with such finesse.

It's really beautiful. Loved that you have made this from Aditya's point of view. Showing his inner turmoil and failures that he seems to refuse to accept.

The budding relationship that Aryan and Imlie have is also beautifully written. The trust you they share is lovely. And that seems to be the most important thing "TRUST" that she didn't receive from Aditya!

You have definitely created suspense as well cause a few times I expected him to rush out and scream at them 😃!

Please do keep writing. You are an amazing writer with giving the story a beautiful flow!

Thanks for the tag!

Seeing the name Aditya made me frantically scroll up as to see what kind of fic I was reading👀

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I love this, this is so beautiful and to be honest I am a little jealous I wanted to write something along the same lines calling it "His Jungli" as well and this is way better, much more beautiful than anything I could have written.

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Please do write more, would love to read more as well.

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

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