AryLie TS - The AryLie Chronicles Part 2-Page 4 - Page 5

THIS WAS SO GOOD KOMALD OMG!!!!

"Love was white, pure in it’s beginning. Love was black, dark in it’s end. Love was orange, a careful balance. Love was purple, passion and compassion. Love was green, fresh. Love was yellow, bright. Love was pink, young. Love was blue, mature. Love was red, envy. Love was transparent, trust and faith and belief."

THIS PART WAS GORGEOUS oh my gosh i LOVE how you described the full spectrum of love and its impacts on people.

imlie's plan!!!! go girl!!! If only itv was this smart lol. i can't wait to see what you write next!

How I hope all this happens exactly how uv written it here.. wonderfully captured Imlie’s emotions, her internal emotions subtle yet clear.. very well written:)

Loved monday to thursday👏

It was great to see them having serious conversations and Aryan putting his faith in Imlie once again on wednesday despite the fact that she never seems to her end of the bargain.

Love them discussing potential partners on valentines, these kind of conversations are very important to develop relationships but we never see them on ITV.

Amazing work😍

Hey i love both the point of views..but is it only me that found Aryan's point of view more funnier??😝😝 Imlie's is a little bit more philosophical and bittersweet like she doesn't wanna believe that Aryan cares for her..since she is the one who has always cared for others

Midway on day 2... Just realised this needs day-wise response

D1

Ouch... That hurts, imlie's realisation of apne-paraye is too much to take for me.

He was here?

Her eyes widened. He was here.

And these too lines... OMG... Run imlie run 😆

Oh the fuss over injury... So sad we didn't get to see it in the episode, but nicely done here. ❤️

D2

Ok she wanted to collect her things herself so that she can meet certain someone... Nice nice. No worries imlie, someone's coming to meet you himself. Keep those noodles served girl ☺️

their home.

Ye sochna zaruri tha kya Aryan ko... Jaan le lo meri 🥺🥺

He served her the noodles himself,

Ouch... Next arrow straight to heart 💘

Eh.. and that savage reply was so on point. ASR always goes for the kill.

I think I need a 10 min break now... Heart's bursting.

This one was beautiful written. After seeing her amma and dadda she totally overwhelmed this gesture of aryan makes her emotional and very happy as well.

Wow it was such an Amazing one😘.

U write extremely too good , try write some more on arylie.

First of all, Thank you Komal! For the tag and writing this ❤️ Literally requesting you to join the writing/creative team of the show man, how do you write SO MUCH BETTER on the track than they do, of the track they themselves introduced? This was everything. Loved Aryan's need to be close to Imlie in every way possible and the fact that he found ways to get into the T House everyday or somehow always managed to meet Imlie every single day has ALL MY HEART. But you completely took the cake when you got Dadda and Amma for Imlie's birthday, it was so heartwarming and that gesture, ughh I felt that 😭 No wonder Imlie went to hug him like that but Arru softly kissing her forehead was ouff. Manifesting this to be Canon so bad 🤌 Nothing like a soft forehead kiss. And everything was so much more dearer from Imlie's point of view as well because we know Aryan's love/liking her for her but Imlie's unacknowledged acceptance of his support and love is just everything. She knows that he is there for her and loved how he was the only one who she called and showed her vulnerable side to. That was some serious script writing on your part when Aparna tried to slap Imlie, exactly the kind of trigger Imlie needed (needs in the Show) to know the conditional love of the Tripathis. And dude, the dedication you gave to this TS is unparalleled. I mean writing 7 days for each character and what amazing 7 days they were ! You write great man, I feel like I am watching it on the show. Interesting, insightful and subtle as well. Just amazing Komal ! Please keep them coming. And thank you for writing these once again, I enjoyed each TS a great deal.

P.S : Loved the Rupi part as well, it struck out because we got an insight from an outsider that too an Tripathi on their comfort level. How unbothered and domestic AryLie were in that scene inside Imlie's room. These kind of small details and insights bring so much flavor to your writing, love them.

Awesome. Loved it. Imlie’s perspective had so much more detail versus ASRs which yo me was so apt. He is a man of few words. Thank you for writing it this way.

Rereading this before bed and I love how you forecast what happened in the actual show in some ways. I love this two part so much!

Brilliant written I loved both worrying and understanding each other loved that he came just to make sure she was ok.Finally Imile has started giving those worthless T the comeuppance.Awesome Updates beautifully written.