OS: A goodbye (Part:01)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is my first time trying to write a story, it is my thoughts of what I wish will happen in the show, this is the first part, if you like it I will continue ❤️🌹


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A goodbye!

(Part:01)


" What I am thinking, This can't be happen! Babosahib belongs only to Milani didi, I know he is my husband, but I don't have any rights on him, Milani didi is so sweet and I love her, she must not know about my relation with Babosahib, I should forget all of this!" Imlie thinking while she tries to wipe her hug dream of her mind!


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Aditya and Millani decide to go on their honeymoon to Goua After their big fight!


Millani still feeling guilt for hiding the truth about the poem, and confused about Aditya valuing the poem over her "I love you"s.

"How could Imlie write such a poem which have so many deep feelings, that strike her husband so much and describe his anger, is it real that she just memories it? That is possible, how could I think about that, that will never happen! Imlie is so young to know such feelings, and Aditya is mine!

This honeymoon trip will bring us close together again and will wipe all the pain of the past few days!".


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Aditya trying to sleep a night before the trip, the memories of Imlie disturbing his mind, the gunpoint wedding, their wedding (first night) fight, the rituals, the time she saved him at Pagdandya, holding her in his arm at the jungle, wiping her sindor at the ambulance, her gift to him, Anu trying to remove her sindor, why every thing about her affect him, why he feel this sad for her, she didn't do anything wrong, she is selfless, she never ask anything in return.

" I don't want to hurt her, she doesn't deserve this life, I want to see her happy, to follow her dreams, to become a police officer, I didn't intend to ruin her life, but the destiny throw her in my way, but I can't accept that, it is not fair for Mun, she could not handle this truth, I can't just leave her, she is with me since college, she waited for me 7 years, she support me and understand my job requirements, I just can't do that to her, but the guilt for Imlie statues and my responsibility towards her is killing me, I love Mun, and she loves me back, her poem to me made me understand how much my anger affect her and how much she loves me, it is just not fair to her, I don't know what I should do, I'm helpless, I can't help Imlie, how could I explain to her that she could free herself from me, but .. but .. she don't have anybody now, she left out without any support, her village will never accept her! OMG , this guilt for both of them really killing me, but I can't do a thing about it , it is really complicated. I hope this trip will wipe all the sorrows of my heart, make me more close to Millani, after we comeback , I will think of a way to help Imlie".

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice start....

Do continue....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It’s a beautiful start to a promising is of intense emotions. One can feel Maline jealousy, imlie confusion and Aditya guilt.


Just love how you have shared your battle of minds and hearts in each character.

Cannot wait to see what part two will reveal. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hey its really nice, would love to read more👍🏼

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