I'M BACK WITH LOVE!! RASIA/SIRA SS (pt10@15) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
wow cool update. thanks for continuing. waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: AbiAnshUtpol

Muskan Thanks Millions Times For The Update. I Enjoyed Reading The Update Throughout The Whole Update. The Fans Moments Are So Amazing

Omg i Can't Wait For The Next Part. Wow Finally Raghav Sia Moment Is On Way. I'm So Excited For The Next Part

*Please Give Update Page No. On Title

Please Continue Soon And Write More

Thank you so much for your compliments ...😊.
and yes the next update is just of rasia ... so wait and watch ...πŸ˜‰
will update soon!!😊
and sorry but i was not getting how to change the title and add page no.!!
pls tell if you can...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
WoW!!!!!!!!!!! It was really cool. I wonder wats gonna happen 2 Kabir. Love the gifts part. Plz do continue soon. & thnx fr writing such a wonderful Os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hie Muskaan. . this is Navna. . 😊
ur OS is ammmaaazzziiinnnggg!!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank u so much for writing it!! πŸ˜ƒ
I soo loved it!! ❀️
actually loved Raghav's Part the most!!! ❀️ ❀️
but why did you end it here???? πŸ˜’
plss keep continuing. . . 😊
Edited by Kriyansh..Sira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

( the room was all dark without a single dot of light )Sia looked around when suddenly she heard a voice:

Raghav : Don't worry pushpa ... main hoon

( A smile came on Sia 's face but then she started to look around... where was he ??)

Raghav : idhar udhar mat dekho..bas mujhe mahsoos karo..

Sia didn't say anything and moved straight as if she knew and could feel raghav..

Suddenly she could see a board with lights on all it's edges .. and it had had all rasia pics.. only rasia pics..

She saw each and every picture touching it and felling every moment! <3

( Then again she heard another voice .. it was of raghav and sia both.. she turned.. she saw a t.v ( 42 inches )

It was showing videos of Rasia... all romantic and funny moments..

( Rasia bg tune.. )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRisIFIccU8


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nC5ULQ4ffuc

Then again Sia was accompanied my raghav's voice..

Raghav : Pushpa woh jo pics thee aur yeh videos...yeh sare humare most special moments hain...

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Pushpa pata hai in saare moments ki tarah ... actually inse kahin zyada.. tum mere liye special ho...

Mujhe tumhari har baat pasand hai...

Jaise tum baap re bolti ho .. har promise se pehele papa kasam bolti ho..

Mere liye jab possessive hoti ho aur tumhari best baat... jab tum mere liye DARTI ho!!!

Bilkul waise hi darti ho jaise uss din

( Again in high volume a video started playing.. it was of rasia)

( here's the video )

.http://www.india-forums.com/new_reply_form.asp?TID=3200519

Yaad aaya kaise mere liye darr gayi thi..

( She smiled )

Raghav : You know what pushpa ...tumne toh mujhe cassanova se one girl man hi bana diya..( he laghed a bit )

( there was a moment of silence then suddenly a spotlight came but not on sia .. on the bare ground somewhere infront of her...)

Raghav : pata hai pushpa main pehele humesha keheta tha ki...

( recorded voice )

Main raghav oberoi hoon... spotlight humesha mujhpar hoti hai... sab mujhe dekhte hai..par main kisi ko nahi..

( recorded voice gone )

Par pushpa aaj..this statement is a bit different...

( recorded voice )

Main raghav oberoi hoon... spotlight humesha mujhpar hoti hai... sab mujhe dekhte hai..par main ...main sirif tumhe dekhta hoon pushpa...!!!

( Sia blushed at the remark.. she was unable to say anything!! )

Raghav : Par pushpa maine tumhe yahaan blush karne ya sirif yeh sab batane hi nahi bulaya hai... maine tumhe yahan ..tumse kuch confess karne ke liye bulaya hai..

Everything turned black for a moment and then the lights were all turned on and she saw raghav in front of her .. on his knees...


Raghav: I luv u pushpa... and i want you in my life forever... will you be mine..forever!!

( at last now sia could say something... actually she had to and needed to...but first her silly tears came out... of happiness of course ...she said::::::::::::: )

Sia : Yes !! Yes!! I love you too ...

Suddenly thousands of rose petals started falling on them...

( Raghav smiled and sia too then raghav stood up ... they had a moment of eyelock and a nyc long hug!! ) ( Raghav's phone made them break the hug )

Raghav : Haan juno bol...

Juno : tu kahan hai dude... agar ab tera aur teri pushpa ka romance khatam ho gaya to aaja...

Raghav : haan haan aa raha hoon..

They hung the call...

Sia : ( smiled ) Chalo.. sab dhoondh rahe honge... tumhare parents bhi..

( hitting his head a bit )

Raghav : Hmmm

( Sia turned to go and took two steps when she felt a pull )

Raghav pulled he towards her..lowered his face.. understanding the hint sia tiptoed...and.

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THEY KISSED!!!

Edited by muskanpuri99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Update Muskan !

Loved SiRa scene and raghav's surprise for Sia ❀️

Continue writing sum more ! πŸ˜‰
Edited by jane_krittzz... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!! 😲 I so loved it yar. . . . ❀️
Best OS i have read till now!!! πŸ‘πŸΌ
u r a Superb Writer. . . πŸ‘
U have expressed the emotions so beautifully.. . ☺️
I could picturise each and every thing!!! πŸ˜ƒ
awesome. . . . πŸ‘
but feeling so sad. . coz of the end of this OS!! πŸ˜’
Now, waiting fr ur next story. . . πŸ˜ƒ
Plss. . Don't forget to PM me. . . 😊
thank u fr this OS. .. . πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Kriyansh..Sira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
wow muskan thanks a lot for continuing this os😊
So happy that u continued itπŸ˜ƒ
well coming to the update
loved it!! It was so nice to see all of them together.
That was so funny when aliya n kabir asked raghav itni moti bookπŸ˜†
Readinf this part it reminded me a lot of those old fun days in hhl. Missing those days.
waiting for ur next update😊
once again thank u for continuing this os 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
oops sorry before posting my previous comment i had not read this update!!
Wow loved this update too...it is just so amazing, the way raghav proposed to her again!!!loved it
But this part is so much similar to what i had planned in my FF...πŸ˜’
now what will i do??? 🀣 that's ok it is slightly different, some parts...😊
anyways loved this part the most❀️
And thanks for again for continuing this 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hey guys i have edited and updated part 3 so pls ... see the videos and i have also put the videos in the sequence of the story .. i request you all to re read it and even see the videos the way i have put them...
pls...
and sorry for this!!
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