1) Mini- FanFic Contest....
and the Winner is
...
Aish (aka Aish_punk)
Congratulations for winning!!!
Her winning Mini- HDHAA- FF entry:
Tappu got tensed. Adi went and told Avantika everything! EVERYTHING!
"Yaar adi ko batana hi nahi chahiye tha" Tappu cried.
Just then Adi entered grinning." Chill bhaiyya! m sure voh aapko 'yes' keh hi degi. She's impressed by u anyway. ๐"
Tappu thought there is some hope now! "Adi, tu sach keh raha?! sacchi main voh mujse impressed thi?", he asked curious.
"Haan bhaiyya. Itna impressed thi..itna impressed thi..", Adi trailed.
Tappu gave him a questioning look.
"itna impressed thi..ki kya batau!", Adi finished sheepishly.
Tappu got a lil excited. If she was THAT impressed by him there was a fair chance of her accepting his propsal.
Adi sort of felt guilty. What if she rejected his propsal? Tappu would be really hurt.
The truth was that, he had'nt told Avantika anything! He wanted Tappu to go and propose to her otherwise he'll never get his love. He could'nt see Tappu hurt this way.
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Jignesh: Avi! Avi!
He had been screaming her name out for the past 5 mins but she did'nt even bother to look at him. She was lost in her dreamland!
She then jolted up. "Haan kya hai Jignesh?"
"Tu kaha kho gayi thi?"
"Main voh soch rahi thi ki.."
"ITNA kya soch rahi thi?!"
"Sun na! Main voh soch rahi thi ki Adi ka jo bhai hai na.."
"Kaun Tappu?"
"Haan haan vahin..voh kaafi sweet aur simple hai na..", she said with a smile.
Jignesh gave her weird look. "Voh to sabko pata hai. iske liye tu itna soch rahi thi?!"
"Chal ja! tu nahi samjega"
"Samajna bhi nahi chahta! ab jaldi taiyyar ho jaa hume kahin jaana hai."
"Kaha?! oye hello..main tumhare saat koi date par to nhi jaa rahi na?" , she said with a disgusted look.
"Mujhe kaun sa shauk hai tumhe date par le jaana ka?!..bas awei ghumne jaa rahe hai..sab aa rahe hai..!"
"Teek hai..main ek ghante main taiyaar hoke aati hoon", she said
"Ek ghanta!", he said his mouth hanging open.
" Hmm haan ek ghanta main acchi tarah nhi ho paungi na?", she said confused. "Do ghante main to ho hi jaayega"
Jignesh fell on the floor. She quickly shook him and he got up. " Agar tum do ghante lagaogi to hum sab mar jayenge!"
"Phir kitna time lu yaar?!" she said confused.
" 15 mins", he said snapping his fingers.
"Haila!", it was her turn to be shocked now. "15 mins main to main dress bhi nahi doond paungi!" ๐
" Voh sab mujhe pata nahi..aana hai na..!..to jaldi 15 mins main taiyyar ho jaa!"
Avantika got ready like a bullet. She did everything so quick that she did'nt have any idea what she was doing!
Exactly after 16 mins, she came down.
"I'm ready!", she grinned.
Jignesh gave her a deadly glare. " ek minute late ho"
"Toh?!..phir bhi aayi hoon na..ab chalte hai..!" she said and all of them left the house.
The truth was Jignesh knew about Adi's plan and he did'nt want Tappu to go home because Avantika came late. ๐
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"Adi main teek to lag raha hoon na?", he tensed Tappu kept asking his brother.
"Bhaiyya! apne yeh aldready 100 baar puch liya hai! aap bilkul mast lag rahe hai. ab aap yeh script jaldi se yaad kar lena!" Adi assured him.
" Haan haan yaad karta hoon" , and he start revising his lines.
Adi had made a very romantic propsal for him so that Avantika agrees. It would hurt him if she did'nt.
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They all reached the special restaurant which was booked only for AT by Adi.
As soon as Avantika entered, " vaah! kitni khubsoorat jagah hai" she exclaimed.
"Voh to hoga hi..choice kiska tha!", a voice boomed in.
" Adi!..tum yahan..!", Avantika said excited.
" Haan lekhin choice mera nahi tha", Adi said smiling.
" Accha? to phir kiska tha?", she said confused.
Just then Tappu entered and smiled at her.
"Tappu!", she whispered sort of happy.
"Haan Avantika j.." he stopped in between as he caught Adi shaking his head in a 'no'.
Adi had advised him on not using 'ji' for her anymore.
Jignesh took the rest of his friends and slowly sneaked out of there. But Adi stayed to make sure that Tappu did'nt make any mistakes. But he was hiding in a corner.
" Avantika.."
"Tappu?"
"Main aapse kuch kehna chahta hoon", said a shy Tappu.
"Bolo na", Avantika said.
He looked into her eyes and started," maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha jab tum apne friends ke saat mazaa kar rahi thi. tumhari voh hasi ..tumhare aankhon main voh khushi...in sab ko dekhkar mujhe bahut accha laga.."
Adi got totally confused! These lines were not in the script he had written but they were good too ๐.He was just hoping Tappu does'nt mess it up.
"Aapko dekhte dekhte mujhe kuch ehsaas hone laga...aapki baatein..aapka har choti baat par ghabra jaana ..yeh sab mujhe bahut pyaara laga.."
Avantika smiled. Noone had said such sweet words to her ever before!
"Mujhe pata nahi yeh sab kaise kehte hai..kabhi kaha nhi hai na..lekhin haan mujhe aapse pyaar ho gaya.. aapko dekhe bina mera din nahi banta..agar yeh pyaar hai..to mujhe aapse bahut pyaar ho gaya hai..! "
Fireworks started in the sky, " i love you Avantika" .
Avantika put a hand over her mouth. This was SO sweet!
She too did feel something for him. She kept thinking about him. She herself did'nt know why! Was this love? She does'nt need to think more now! How foolish of her to wait for this long to realize it!
"Tappu...main bhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon..!", saying this she hugged him tightly. He was intially shocked but later on hugged her too.
Adi was the happiest person that time! He was so glad to see them together! ๐
"Ahem Ahem! sorry to disturb lekhin shaadi ki baat abhi se chala du?", he teased
Both of them blushed at this and parted from the hug.
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Congrats Aish for writing this beautiful FF and winning this contest.
Credit Maryam.U ๐คfor making this HDHAA Award siggy
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