-|Hypnotized|- A Vishakha and Kunal OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello all, this is my first ever OS on ViNal
Please dont kill me for this OS 😃


||Hypnotized||

-*-

||Can't say anything. I'm already killed by your eyes.||
- Auburn.

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"Why dont you guys go together?"
Choti Maa suggested.

"Yeah sure!"
Bhakti immediately replied.

"That would be cool"
Kunal said relieved as now he would not have to face the boredom of the business party.

Bhakti and Kunal were bestfreinds since childhood. While Bhakti was in love with him, he didnt reflect back the same feelings.
Now it isn't a rule na to fall in love with your best friend?


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They entered the party which was filled with happiness and the aroma of wine.
The men, being men, were held up in business talks while occasionally sipped their wine.
And women were busy in showcasing off their newly bought diamond studs and neck pieces.

And morever they thought this was interesting to talk about...
Urgghhh..

"Kunal, my boy come here"
A man in his mid-fifties called out to him.

"Main washroom jaakar aati hoon"
Bhakti said feeling uncomfortable among high class people.

-*-

He was listening quietly to all the stern and solemn talks about their next deal.
Who could tell it was a party? Except the chattering of ladies.

But suddenly his mind was occupied with the strong wild aroma which made his mind numb and intoxicated.

He was now not listening to the boring nonsensical talks of the men but was looking in the direction from where the scent came from.

And there..

He spotted a lady with curls waving up and down in accordance with her waist. Her bare back was still seen to him and only he knew how much he wanted to hold her..
She was wearing a backless evening gown which exposed her bare back making him go crazy.

An evil smile crept up her lips. Maybe she was here only for him!!!??

Controlling his emotions , he turned back to the men.

"I want you to meet my daughter"
His father's friend told Kunal.

-*-

Bhakti was here for the last 10 minutes trying to open the door of her loo.
But the crazy thing just wouldnt open!!

-*-

"Vishakha"
The man called.

"Yes Dad"
A voice answered.

Kunal looked behind smelling the same scent and he was awestruck by her beauty.
Her body showcasing her curves and her eyes!!
They were devil!!
They could hypnotize anyone. Just a look and gone!!
Her luscious lips.
She was Perfect!!
Like a drug!

"Vishakha, this is Kunal"
the man introduced

"And Kunal, this Vishakha"


He felt a current pass through him when their hands touched in for a formal handshake.

She was evil..
One look and someone would drop down dead..
He thought..

She was again adorned by her evil smile as if she could read his thoughts..

After a while, Vishakha had to leave and Kunal didnt anticipate this..


At a distance from, she could still feel his gaze on her..
She had a wicked smile on her face now..

With that she blinked her eyes and walked off..

-*-

Suddenly the doors of the loo opened!!
Bhakti was just too lazy to think bout this so she walked to Kunal..

-*-

Ok I know bahot gandha tha par kya karoon 😳

Please like n comment😃

-Jhanvi❤️



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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeah me first
i was nice yar
i really liked it

but vinal lovestory can never beat taarey lovestory or their magic


but i loved it
great job...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res/unres
Jhanvi !!!! a big 🤗to u for writing this!!!
Awesome!!! Like amazingly written!!!!
Vishakha's evil n Bhakti's innocence..
U perfectly mixed them in this
Lovely os
...
It was superb but every1 knows obvio Taarey's magic is still in our hearts :)
Edited by ..Akshita.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pagal 🤗It was so awesome ❤️Loved it 😳
Keep writing more ❤️
~Appy Fizzz 😃
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was really nice. It fit into the story line of Vishaka being evil. I really liked it!
P.S. LOVE YOUR SIGNATURES! Niall <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jhanvi the os was nice but need a help can u give me the brief of the story haunted night as here sahara is not available and vrindas pic pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good one...

after seeing and feeling lovey dovey bubbly Taani... its too difficult to picturise VD as Vishakha...

anyways, she is doing a good job in Haunted Nights...
so may be after some more episodes we get use to it...

So first i felt a bit weird when i read this OS...
but its a good work...

Keep writing...

Thanks for pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh! so vishakha locked bhakti. OMG! kunal is just crazy about vishakha. our evil beauty😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now that is one amazing OS.. I seriously loved it to the core.. And the title, so apt. I could imagine it all.. Gosh! This was seriously amazing! Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice OS...well written 👍🏼
loved the title...do write more on ViNal 😊
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