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Good job Anu.π...Though I would not like Laajo and Nikhil's love to be called only a passion...as it became in the end...and Sagar entering in between...but must say your write up is mature and more practical...something close to reality.
Originally posted by: varshitap
Good job Anu.π...Though I would not like Laajo and Nikhil's love to be called only a passion...as it became in the end...and Sagar entering in between...but must say your write up is mature and more practical...something close to reality.
I liked Laajo and Nikhil's love till Laajo became a star...as it was selfless and there was respect and a sense of fulfillment. Yet I had this little doubt whether a couple as young as Laajo (19) and Nikhil maybe (22) would be so mature to take their love and relationship to such a level of maturity and respect each other come what may!! but it seemed Nikhil strayed out more too quickly as he had his doubts about Sagar. I know age is not the only criteria of being mature...but in today's context most of the young people have no patience to deal with crisis in relationships.I liked the way you made Laajo look at her relationship with Sagar...it was a practical compromise...which slowly turns to love ...like in most arranged marriages. As with Laajo and Nikhil they had a marriage which cannot be categorized as either love or arranged marriage!!π As both were searching for love in the marriage till the end!! π ( In the show!!π)Laajo had every right to be happy no matter from where it comes!!π And Sagar surely was capable of giving her that happiness !!Thanks for the wonderful story!!π Must say you are a very good writer and I enjoyed reading this piece very much!! π Your REFLECTIONS made me reflect on the love between Laajo and Nikhil and ask a question what is more important..to love or to be loved?!!π³
Originally posted by: londonkababu
That was a very well written piece of work. I read it twice and slowly to get a better feel for the storyline.As the GD episodes progressed, it became quite obvious that Nikhil had trust issues with Laajo and that any person with half a brain could manipulate him for their purpose.π‘Sagar recogonised Laajo's innocent and loyal nature from the very begining and it is thesequalities that endeared him towards her. In a way they both are very similar in character.Anu, I liked it very much when you indicated that there were times when Laajo would be thinking of Nikhil and the mature Sagar would accept that and move on.A very well tought of effort on your part and a truely enjoyable read. I agree with Varsha that you are a very good writer. Please keep up the good work.π
Originally posted by: ZulekhaLLaKhil
Anu wow you and excellent stroy teller. Loved it your reflections, however, mine will be ending up with Laajo and Nikhil having Arjun and Arohi lol. Two little cute children boy and girl. I thank you and appreciated your lovely stroy and I enjoyed very much reading it. π
Anu, I became a fan of Kritika Kamra after watching KTLK , watched all the episodes . I started watching it for Mohnish Bhel of whom I am great fan!! then later on carried till the end . I was a silent reader on that forum. Hope we get such mature stories more on T.V!! π
Thank u Zulekhaπ Arjun and Arohi...how cute. So, ur a fan of that show. Next to Drashti Dhami I like Kritika Kamra.
All of ur feedbacks have been very encouraging and I will defenitely write a Laakhil story with kids very soon. Jus for all you lovely Laakhil fans.β€οΈ
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