~The Traitor~An OS - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

37

Views

3.6k

Users

12

Likes

148

Frequent Posters

Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#21


Originally posted by: MR21

Piu 🤗...Wow what a story of GK from the pre-independence time👏
Aww Thanks Ramya..I am glad you liked the premise of the story🤗🤗

Will start with the childhood...I LOVED kesar n gulaal fights...ithna ladthe hai...no wonder she hates him as her mother also loves him n considers him as her son and more over future SIL bhi hai na...so more importance toh bantha hai...kesar being kesar fights with her more and see no wonder she is all happy shappy that he will be leaving her...
Chuddy buddies love hate relationships...bachpan se hi they were made for each other greww up loving each other 😆jhagada nad then pyaar wohi same kahani yaar😆😆

as you said I agree that gulaal got that patriotic feelings more from her father...her father stood with his belief to stay in his hometown only..
Yup Gulaal imbibed her father's virtues and values but her vision was wider and grander😳

.so both of them r in their own dreamland thinking about their life partners...I LOVED the photo bit...FIL has caught him na..
Pappa ne dulhan ko ghurte hue p[akad liya chori pakdi gayi😆

.i liked kunal and all the girly gossip...see as always kesar listens all the crap and leaves when he had to listen what gulaal has to say...ithna bhura timing kissi ka bhi nahi hoga...n look now he joined the army n see the bride left the marriage because of that...the worst thing is her mentioning abt basant...
Kesar ka toh humesha se hi bad luck hi kharab che😆hai na...Ladkiyon ne izzat ka faluda bana diya aur Gulaal ne jo pyaar se kah woh nahi suna

oming to present...atlast he did ask her abt basant n her feelings...i like gulaal here even though she is all daring but she is all shy too...kesar is so impatient na...bas misunderstanding clear hogayaa n immediately he smeared her partition...i LOVED when gulaal hoist the flag on the clock tower...hmmm once the problem is solved they r back to being the same friends/enemies who would fight for each n every thing in the world...ab dekho they r fighting abt baapu n netaji...
Yup jaise hi pata chala ki biwi is committed to him and loves him..no time waste😆😆😆😆jaldi shaadi kar lo phir se bhag gayi toh😛😛😛😛😛And then what follows is just them,... their teasing their love and their commitment for each othersee even no sabar toota phuta but kissy chalu😆😆😆😳
Awesome OS Piu😳


Thanks so much Ramya for alawys being there and such a wonderful reply...Muaah🤗
Edited by manzilmukul - 11 years ago
Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: bioinfo

omgeee chaitu faints what a romantic os am still dreamy ..kesuda bangu ..hayeee ..i think its making me believe that one day i'll meet someone like kesar while walking on the streets of kolkata


Hhahhahahaha Mamoni..Amen to that😛😛😛You will get Such a Kesuda in Kolkata pukka😆😆😆😆😆Mera ashirwaad ter saath hai bachi😛😛😛😛
Thanks so much I am glad that you liked it🤗

Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: LoLali

@piu . . .sorry yara . . .could not write long essay this time . . .studies na . . .to be honest maine story bhi phurrr mode mei padhi . . .super fast . . .will read it later again aaram se :)


Aww Pinky Koi nahi..Tu padhai kar...Me toh ADDICTED LOL😆😆Like Neilu ka Kesar dose I need to read your cheed phaad😆😆😆😆😆Koi nahi yaar HUGS me toh mazak akar rahi thi...🤗of heartbreak..You take out so much time to appreciate that's enough for me😳
EXOL thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Love Couple India Season 2 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: manzilmukul



@green : it is still not clear to me..fir se bata ..why did u write that he can fight for his country by joining there..he joined the british army right..so how does he is fighting for country. was his aim was always to be a traitor ..? kya mai W sawaal pooch rehi hu 😕

i loved how u explained this FOR HER BELIEFS ARE ABOVE LOVE AND FOR KESAR HIS BELIEF IS HIS LOVE!!

that is exactly what i felt about their characters while reading this OS..
Edited by nneeiill - 11 years ago

Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#25
@Neilu...
Okies coming to your answer..your question is not dabloo at all re
BTW..its good that you wanted to clarify the things.I wrote it in another abstract kind of narrative presentation.It's a vague way of coverying emotions..Let me explain it you in detail..Kesar k liye Neither Deshbhakti is imp nor gaddari...
Use kisi k liye bhi fight karne mein na koi interest na koi motivation..All he had wanted in his life was to marry her and love her and carry on with his business -A SIMPLE STRAIGHT FORWARD LIFE...
Use Gulaal k thought process k barein mein zero idea..Ki how she is a great deshbhakt and wants to do something for the country .
Next when he sees her getting teased by her frinds that he is a simple personality..he decides to do sumthing dramatic...like get a COOL rutbe wala job in the British army ...-- Trying to show to biwi and her friends see I am SUPER COOL AS A SEPOY...
But usko muh ki khani padi becoz the very fact made her run away...
Now coming to why he continues with the army? Ok ...toh Us era mein shaadi k manadap pe biwi chhod kar bhag gayi...😆😆😆sOCHO BEIZZATI KI HAD...upar se she mentioned the name of another guy with whom she went..Fuse ud gaya...
Gusse mein he is there in the army trying to vent out biwi you bhaad mein jao...Bhagti hai toh bhag who cares I will continue with my Job as a soldier ..Meri bala se...ANGRY AND SPITEFUL...Use koi motivation nahi to fight for country or for the BRITISH army...ITS JUST HIS ANGER AND BRUISED EGO WHICH MAKES HIM CONTINUE WITH THE JOB ..AADmi hai na Biwi kahe ki Gaddar TOH HAI WO GADDAR --LE KYA KAR LEGI BHAAD MEIN JA
Phir when he gets his first orders at darjeeling to shoot at his countrymen..He is restless and then cahnak he sees HER...Bas Gussa gaya tel lene..He saves her and kills the FREUD who dfared to raise a BANDOOK at his biwi...
So that motivation arising from her touches him at that moment...
Phir jab she confesses her love only for him he is gussa ki bhai yeh sari batein including the fact of her love for deshbhakti pehle hi bata deti Toh wo desh ki tarf se ladta...TO PLEASE HER..
After all wo army mein ghusa tha just to jamao IMPRESSION on her...
SO AGAR WO TRAITOR BAN SAKTA HAI ASSUMING THAT SHE WILL BE PLEASED...TOH WO DESHBHAKT BHI BAN SAKTA HAI ...FOR HER..NO BIG DEAL RIGHT!!
SEE the driving force is not DESHBHAKTI...The DRIVING FORCE is GULAAL HERE😆😆😆
FOR HIM HE LOVES GULAAL UNCONDITIONALLY FOR WHAT SHE IS ..BUT TERE PYAAR MEIN ZALIM MAIN KUCH BHI BAN SAKTA HUN😆😆😆
EXOL thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Love Couple India Season 2 0 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
#26
okkk now its clear😛

btw batukeshwar mai bhi kesar hai

see batukeshwar
Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: nneeiill

okkk now its clear😛

btw batukeshwar mai bhi kesar hai

see batukeshwar


YUP SO TOH BILKUL HAIDhund k nikala hai 😛hai na😆 😆
AurTu thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Hi Piu di! I'm back😎 Aww such a sweet b'day gift...I enjoyed it...& i loved the timeline of the story i.e., the pre independence time😳
I loved chotiwaali Gullu😆 waise show waali bhi choti champion thi na remember Champa?😆 I loved everything about this OS...liked their jhagada in bachpan & really liked how kesu had upper hand loved Charu when she pampered Kesu and dantofied Gullu😆i really loved the scene where Gullu holds her father's hand...and after the return of Kesu the scene where he was watching the photo really loved that...the girly talk was nice i liked where she was touching her scar remembering her hubby😳 So Gullu ke liye Kesu ne army joi kiya aur choti masteri bhag gayi😡lekin pyaar toh woh hubby se hi karti thi na...flag hoisting scene was superb⭐️👏Last scene ke baare mein kya bolu woh toh ekdum delicious tha😳...Shatkoti pranamas to you for writing this one...Bhagwan kare ganga nadi ka pani & your Gulsar kahanis kabhi na ruke...Please keep writing such wonderful stories...
Incense thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Commentator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wow first of all take my bow itni saare ideas aate kahan se re ?🤔 coming to the os reminded me 1942 love story and darjeeling is my fav destination me loving it already i could imagine the scene where kesar aimed at her and turned to shot the british officer too good and he is elder so sweet loved their fight...and the end scene was damm cute😳 i was blown away at Gandhi vs Netaji i m in team subash chandra bose eye for eye...kiss for kiss hanky panky for emm jaane do 😆
Transference thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: arti07

wow first of all take my bow itni saare ideas aate kahan se re ?🤔
hain hain hain😲😲aap aye humraey thread pe itne dino baad 😲*rubs eyes*.kabhi hum apko kabhi hum humarey thread ko dekhtey hain..Nazre inyat k liye shukriya*Zafran chahiye demands next chappi*😳
Thanks🤗..But nothing special..Its just that I live alone most of the time and thus after work have a lot of time to spend on TV ..But TV pe kuch ata nahi..So I put my brains to work for KG stories..Isse jyada kuch nahi..I totally LOVE them😭


coming to the os reminded me 1942 love story and darjeeling is my fav destination me loving it already i could imagine the scene where kesar aimed at her and turned to shot the british officer too good and he is elder so sweet loved their fight...and the end scene was damm cute😳 i was blown away at Gandhi vs Netaji i m in team subash chandra bose eye for eye...kiss for kiss hanky panky for emm jaane do 😆


Ahh I love that movie especially Manisha with thoselovely sarees...Just mind blowing music and still...Yes the premise is the same 😳Hum bhi team Netaji mein😆😆😆😆Action you see😛😛😛
thanks for the appreciation and the lovely comments
🤗
Top