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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks🤗

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Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow am amazed at how many story ideas u have...

love you for this birthday gift..enjoyed it thoroughly...mujhe mera kesar dose mil gaya...
Muah First of all a very HAPPY BUDDAY AGAIN🤗Tere BUDDAY PE BLUE AND KESARIYA DOSE NA HO TOH ..bahut na-insaafi hogi..M glad that you liked it

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the story about pre-independence era...with all the sparks of kesar and gulaal...u r genius...u bring something which i dont even think about...
Hial aisa nahi hai..I just wanted to make it your budday gift SACHIThe SPARKS of Kesar and Gulaal are MAGICAL hai na😳

i love how their story started bachpan se hi...and for a change..kesar bada hai.. :D suited to that era ...
Yup this time I made him bada😆But in that era bachpan se hi shaadi fix hona was very common also..Their bachpan ka relationship is more like teasing buddies where he takes the privilege of getting an upper hand becos of her mother's bias about a son,so she hates him😆and is HAppy when he leaves😆But she grew up loving him unknowingly.It's a sappy ticklish feeling ,knowing to be destined with someone,all the teenage fancies start encompassing around the person whom you know is meant for you😆
my fav part was home coming of kesar...such a kesarified feeling...with all that pangs of separation...well written..the photo scene was so touching ...it must be so overwhelming moment for kesar..and waah sasurji caught it bechara...
Hahahahh as I already told a tickling and Teenage romatic feeling knowing that you have a wife😆and Sasurji caught him and he was sharam se paani paani😉

my god kya band baja rahe the gulaal ki saheliyaa...hahaha..kunal was so cute there...
the conversation was very amusing...but jo sun na chahiye tha vo tho suna nahi hi..isliye ho gayi na saari gadbad...
hahahhah TYPICAL girly Gossip😛😛😛But that part si actually a turning point in Kesar's life..See Gulaal was happy to marry a spices merchant..She hardly even cared about his values beliefs etc..All she knows that they are meant to be like him..But the MU gave him an idea that he is not worthy of her and thus wants to do something more like trying to create an IMPRESSION on her..So in those times getting into the army was a matter of pride ..so he thought biwi khush ho jayegi...but BIWI is totally khafa coz SHE CANNOT EVER THINK OF MARRYING A TRAITOR😆

loved gulaal's characterisation ..her true patriotic nature...so gutsy to even call of her marriage for her country...us waqt to itna communication possible bhi nahi tha ki clarification ho sake...ya misunderstanding door ho...even after getting rejected by gulaal for being a traitor he still joined..that was interesting..was he punishing himsef or her..???
Gulaal developed the streaks of a visionary holding her father's hand,though her father worked more at grass root level,her vision was a broader horizon.Ahh yes..See Gulaal is one exceptional lady,though she is a simple girl ,the one who dreams of a home and a marriage with the one for whom she was meant to be with ,yet her love for the country does surpass all..She would never have run from the marriage had he not been that traitor whom she hated.Maybe she would have developed a beautiful bond with him and convinced him later to fight for the country but yes in that era communication was impossible instantly and such goof ups happened.Also there was Charulata ka beating for her to stay quiet.She had been far away from Kesar all these years.All the memories she had was of a mad spoilt arrogant boy who made her life miserable.Though she grew up loving him unconsciously nurturing a secret expectation from him that he will understand her but then she never ever talked to him really about their bond;It was quite common in those days.People even never saw their future grooms and gals used to shy to even see their faces but later she just snaps off ..
For your question Yes Kesar was angry...Remember he said you nneed not had to run if you would have told me all this..and main yahan faltu main khoon jala raha tha...😆
It was like Ahh Come on If I can join the army just to make you happy then why can't I fight for the country..See Kesar ko koi matlab nahi hai wo kyun lad raha hai..kiske liye lad raha hai..Gullu is his priority😆😆😆 and when she bhagoed from the marriage and did mention Basant's name so a pang of jealousy toh aya hi..So when she confirms ki nahi baaba I love you only😆Toh he is happy shappy😛This is the basic diff bw Gulaal and Kesar..FOR HER BELIEFS ARE ABOVE LOVE AND FOR KESAR HIS BELIEF IS HIS LOVE!!

the flag hoisiting part was nice...best was last scene with their cute fight over netaji and bapu ji...hahah..eventually both supporting the opposing party LOL
hahhahah Yup .He now knows biwi loves patriotic men so see the pehla convo he strikes is saying ki bhai main serious hun..I wanna die for my country...RESULT SOCHA THA BIWIW KHUSH BUT EE LO JI YAHAN BHI JHOL HAI..now biwi wants to follow Bapu .😆😆😆arguement to USP hai in dono ka😆

thanks piu..u made my day...❤️


Muaaah My pleasure❤️❤️
BTW I feel Like Pinky today.😳😳😳..I CAN NEVER EXPLAIN LIKE HER SHE SI JUST FAB..Perhaps there are lots of things She will observe which I HAD SPRINKLED...but I hope this clarifies the story a BIT..
MUAHHH FOR LUBBING ME ALWAYS🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoLali

aww . .such a lovely gift for your bodyguard . . .aur humara bhi bhala ho gaya 😛 . .last year mansoon , this year snow fall . . .beautiful story piu . . . .apne GK kisi bhi period mei aaye rahenge GK hi . . .now i know ki yeh dono uss time hote toh chai vs. doodh ki jagah baabu vs. neta ji karte .😆 . .ab kitne baar bolu . .you are amazing . .⭐️


Ahhh Thanks Pinky Muah for those lovely words of appreciation❤️But certainly yes!! GK kisi bhi era main rahein ..They will alawys be Behas baazi..Whether its about Doodh-chai,fLOWERS OR lIGHTINGS ,pUNJABI YA gUJRATI MENU...😆😆😆Action ya inaction..Greater good k liye chupana ya seedhe muh pe bolna..These two are meant to be at loggerheads yet be with each other😳SIGH I have never seen a couple so MAGICALWhere is your Cheer phad of the story💔 🥺
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Piu 🤗...Wow what a story of GK from the pre-independence time👏
Will start with the childhood...I LOVED kesar n gulaal fights...ithna ladthe hai...no wonder she hates him as her mother also loves him n considers him as her son and more over future SIL bhi hai na...so more importance toh bantha hai...kesar being kesar fights with her more and see no wonder she is all happy shappy that he will be leaving her...as you said I agree that gulaal got that patriotic feelings more from her father...her father stood with his belief to stay in his hometown only...so both of them r in their own dreamland thinking about their life partners...I LOVED the photo bit...FIL has caught him na...i liked kunal and all the girly gossip...see as always kesar listens all the crap and leaves when he had to listen what gulaal has to say...ithna bhura timing kissi ka bhi nahi hoga...n look now he joined the army n see the bride left the marriage because of that...the worst thing is her mentioning abt basant...coming to present...atlast he did ask her abt basant n her feelings...i like gulaal here even though she is all daring but she is all shy too...kesar is so impatient na...bas misunderstanding clear hogayaa n immediately he smeared her partition...i LOVED when gulaal hoist the flag on the clock tower...hmmm once the problem is solved they r back to being the same friends/enemies who would fight for each n every thing in the world...ab dekho they r fighting abt baapu n netaji...
Awesome OS Piu😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS Piu... 🤗
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omgeee chaitu faints what a romantic os am still dreamy ..kesuda bangu ..hayeee ..i think its making me believe that one day i'll meet someone like kesar while walking on the streets of kolkata
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful!!! 😊 It's not an OS but SS at least to me.. 😉
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Awesome OS..!!!! Nahi Mind Blowing...Thanks for the PM Piu..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@piu . . .sorry yara . . .could not write long essay this time . . .studies na . . .to be honest maine story bhi phurrr mode mei padhi . . .super fast . . .will read it later again aaram se :)
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Originally posted by: poo_j

Wonderful!!! 😊 It's not an OS but SS at least to me.. 😉


Thanks so much Poo😆😆😆🤗I know its pretty long for an OS😛😛😛

Originally posted by: Geeshu

Beautiful OS Piu... 🤗


Thanks Geeshu🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome OS..!!!! Nahi Mind Blowing...Thanks for the PM Piu..!!!


Thank you so much Fauzia🤗

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