SS:Alterview(Past meets Present)last chpt pg 2 - Page 2

Aditi. . .wonderful piece of writing .😳 . . Mini. . .wonderful sense of editing . 😆. . .this particular scene remains one of my fav and the beauty of ur writing lies in the spontaneous and smooth enlargement of this scene with projection of kesar's inner turmoil and his memories . . .i loved how beautifully you have woven the flash backs of vasant here. . .each of them ws a lesson for our kesu . . .how kesar judges his and her actions on the scales provided by his vasant bha . . . .and asks him who the real dhokhebaaz is yet at the same time holding that golden thread of hope that there must be some solid reason behind her doing or she would make everything all right . . .the hurt , the guilt , the confusion , insecurities all are written so touchingly . . . .infact it looks like an unedited version of the same scene . . loved it to the core . . ..sorry i could not comment before woh kya hai na piu ke story ne dimag kharab kar rakha hai 😆. . .lovely writing again 😳.

Aditi 🤗...this is one wonderful interpretation of the scene...nice work...

Originally posted by: LoLali

Aditi. . .wonderful piece of writing .😳 . . Mini. . .wonderful sense of editing . 😆. .Thank you Thank youuu😆I hope you don't mind if I reply to you😊 .this particular scene remains one of my fav and the beauty of ur writing lies in the spontaneous and smooth enlargement of this scene with projection of kesar's inner turmoil and his memories . . .i loved how beautifully you have woven the flash backs of vasant here. . .each of them ws a lesson for our kesu . . .how kesar judges his and her actions on the scales provided by his vasant bha . . . .and asks him who the real dhokhebaaz is yet at the same time holding that golden thread of hope that there must be some solid reason behind her doing or she would make everything all right . . .the hurt , the guilt , the confusion , insecurities all are written so touchingly . . . .infact it looks like an unedited version of the same scene . . loved it to the core . . ..

Thank you for such wonderful comments🤗I agree with you completely especially the unedited version of the scene wala part.It is so true.There in lies the beauty of this show na.The scenes were so charged,layered...every look,expression and action had so many hidden meanings.Everyone of us can take away a very different meaning from the same scene.We can use our imagination to fill in the blanks and interpret it as we want.That's the main reason I wanted to share this piece with you all.It feels so good that you were able to enjoy it😃

sorry i could not comment before woh kya hai na piu ke story ne dimag kharab kar rakha hai 😆. . .lovely writing again 😳.

Originally posted by: MR21

Aditi 🤗...this is one wonderful interpretation of the scene...nice work...

Mini 🤗...thanks for posting here...though I have read it in FB earlier...I have again read it here...

Hey mini why would i mind if u reply . . .i loved ur ss too kuch khatta mitha sa wala. 😳. .and Lolali sounds cute to u .😛 . . par woh toh maine ainwayi type kar diya tha .😆 . .u can call me pinky .😳

ok Finally here to talk about the wonderful piece of writing again.and Yes Pinky I agree its as if watching an unedited version of the charged up scene.The parameters of his Vasant bha are being used by kesar to judge the actions of Gulaal and himself.The pain ,the angst of Kesar and all the wonderful flashback where we see the greater than Thou Vasant makes Kesar understand the great lessons of life in his own sweet way...Without being preachy almost like the stories of panchatantra where you learn the moral buy means of simple tales..The alter view has been overwhelming and I am waiting for another one !! Great work!!

Hiya everyone thanks for your likes and comments, I do appreciate you taking out time to read and comment.😳

oh wow aditi and minizz wht a lovely chapiis u really know how to weave magic with words...man i loved this ss so much ...words fail me...i really donno know wat to say its perfect simply perfect dunno how to put in words 🤔 ok anyways i m gonna read it 10 times again before i commen t and this one is definelty going in my fav list 🤗

Originally posted by: LoLali

Hey mini why would i mind if u reply . . .i loved ur ss too kuch khatta mitha sa wala. 😳. .and Lolali sounds cute to u .😛 . . par woh toh maine ainwayi type kar diya tha .😆 . .u can call me pinky .😳

Thank you Piu for your lovely comments😃