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Arti 🤗...I am totally loving this fill on UST filled chapters...thanks re typical senseless tv love 😆Coming to this chapter...wow i loved how he made her wear that ring ...ab engagement hogayaa hai na 😉...shaadi k baad engagement he he he 😆gulaal as usual escaped from there when he is openly complimenting her...I am loving this flirty kesar so much...he is not even leaving one chance to compliment her...first abt her hands n then now about her open hair...my goodness he is showing all authority...full on pati role mein ghusaa hua hai 😆...why should preeto will clean this room...its his wife's duty hai na 😉..yes his highness k shaan mein gusthaki how could u biwi 😆.I really like that convo between preeto n gulaal...offo yeh bandha cigarrette bhi peetha hai .he smokes for his conviction typical college guy ask them y do u smoke they will say coz we arent kid..loved their fighting...especially that statement of kesar to be just wife n not to behave like biji...gulaal ki bholthi band.yaa she is startled not attracted..preeto abhi aana tha kya 😡...u should have come after some time...thab thak kesar apna kaam karletha na..high chance the thapad khaane ke .ha ha ha he has to drop the photos that too in front of preeto who is hell bent on convincing gulaal that he is looking at her pics...what a perfect timing...ab toh usse proof bhi milgayaa hai na...see gulaal he is always looking at u to take ur photos...I am just loving this n especially with this punjaabi background.punjabi munde flirt hi hote hai ..ab kya hoga...dont make gulaal an ostrict..she is ostrich by choice cant help 😭.please do update soon dear...yaa will asap thanks a lot for ur comment😳
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Arti . . .another arti style chappi .matlab crap filled chapii😆 . .wow yeh hubby ji wifey ke liye ring laaye mujhe laga tha bangles honge . .bangles bahoot houe he should shed some money he is rich guy after all .then i thought heart shape box mei kaun shopkeeper bangles deta hai 😆. bangles waale shopkeeper kewal heart dete hai box nahi😉. .i m loving this haq jamaoing and flirty kesar . . .not leaving any single chance huh . . .that prasad wala scene ws great . .and u know arti jab gulaal boli preeto will fix ur room . .meri aankho ke aage talli ka punjabi version aagaya tha . haila talli mere ss mein chii mein to use maid bhi naa rakhu yucks .woh toh baad mei when preeto called him as veerji i ws like pheww.😆 . yaa preeto humari urmila ka previous birth remember dhani or bulbul said the same dialogue how kesar niharofys gulaal .toh gullu ko finally samajh mei aaying ki kesar ke mann mei paap hai .😉 😆. she is a wise lady aur mujhe pata hai woh naya plan khada karne ja rahi hai . yes . .i loved cigarette scene . . .it reminded me of the daaru wala scene from "ek chadar maili si" 😳 daaru waala scene to full waala UST tha😳 here its like a older scolding a younger for developing bad habits often siblings or the friends involve in these kinds of fight even in rural punjabi household u will find wifey hyperventilates and she threatens to burns ekdum cliche kind of scene tha😆 . . .arti m loving it. . .jaldi updato . will do asap thanks re
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Loved it..Kesar is completely smitten by Gulaal!!! She too have some inkling abt it!! she is getting the warning signals her mind is processing fast thts y she is nervous!
Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊
P.S: Btw I first started to read and came to know what is ff by reading your ff only..😊 That time I was a silent reader!!!...aww so swee thanks alot 🤗
P.P.S: Unres done in page 6!!! oh didnt see thanks alot once again🤗
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CHAPTER 6
credit piu 😳
Next day gulaal was busy in lohiri preparation kesar had returned to his village and biji decided to celebrate this festival in the grand scale'the festival tht came in the dead of winter'..the invitation was send to every household of sanour the regional delicacies were cooked every corner of the house was decorated with lamps .young kids went from house to house with a basket flattered the woman of the household while requesting them to denote a pathi for lohiri fire
A shallow pit was dug at the verandah of his house and in tht pit a pyramid of a dried cowdung pathi (patties) were erected'kesar and gulaal were busy with the preparation of lohri festival but the incident of previous day never left her mind''kesar tried hard to talk to her but she avoided him...
At night the grand lohri fire was lit and the whole village gathered at kesar's residence men women kids younger girls and boys all dressed at their best they gathered around the holy fire they gossiped chatted discussed everything from movies to the political situation of the region'..after some time kesar and gulaal arrived at the spot kesar was wearing a red phantani kurta and golden pajyama''' gulaal dressed in red salwar kameez with multicoloured ombre dyed dupatta with phulkari work on it complimented him very well''..kesar looked at gulaal stupefied'but she was unsually quiet
After some time ppl gathered in a circle around the holyfire they took three phera while giving offerings of dry fruits, revri (a kind of sweet made of sugar and sesame seeds), roasted peanuts, Sesame Ladoo and other foods to the fire
Gulaal joined the circle too she was performing the phera and noticed kesar was walking behind her''she looked at him he had a huge grin on the face and she frowned and looked away while offering the revru gur sesame he asked "kaisa lag raha hun"
Gulaal twitched she didn't paid any attentions
Kesar took a deep breath and said "naaraz haina'chal koi nahi galti ho gayi maaf kar de'." but she didn't listened
In the distant some elderly woman sang lohri song
Ishwer aiyye delidder jae deliderr di jerr chulhe pye
( come god 's blessing go away lethargy and sickness let the rood of malady thrown into the fire''.)
They completed their second phera''kesar continued "oye kab tak yunhi naraz rahegi kar subah se maafi maag raha hua chod naa jo hua us par mitti daal"'..gulaal looked back she threw angry glance at him and continue to offer the holy pyre to fire'at the completion of third phera kesar holded her hand he then took out his cigarette case and lighter looking at her he threw the lighter and case in fire and said in soft voice "dekh phenk di maine'''.nahi peeyunga''.. ab khush"
Gulaal looked at him though she was happy at his decision but still she pretended to be angry she brushed aside his hand she twitched and went away and joined the gossiping gang of queenbees''.
Kesar took a deep breath in desperation
The elders in the sutth (plaza) had piles of gur coconut and sesame they distributed it to the children and gave their blessing'kesar came there he took the prasad in hand and extended his hand to touch the feets of an elderly woman he looked at gulaal said at the top of the voice "aashirwaad do bebe ruthe yaar nu manana hai"
(I have to clam down my angry beloved)
Gulaal turned around kesar was smiling looking at her he winked at her'..
The elderly woman "jinda reh puttar rab teri saari murad poori kare"
(Long live son ! may god grant all ur wishes)
Kesar looked at gulaal hearing the old lady's blessing he raised his eyebrows teased her
she nodded her head in denial and turned away''
The beat of dhol roared in the air every one was singing dancing on the beat of the dhol
At one corner sat a group of young boyz and girls they were flirting singing and dancing old Punjabi tappe and boliyan...punjabi tappe boliyan are the legacy of Punjabi plains they are the rythmed free verses generally rich in erotic satire tht provoke the romantic feelings in the young blood'.these songs are sung on the fast rhythm of dhol or dholkee'''these are usually sung at the auspicious functions
Everyone participated in this competition but kesar was uninterested he followed her everywhere''in desperation he caught her hand and said "oye gulaal bas bhi kar'' kab tak baat nahi karegi'."
She didn't speak
He said "acha teri sau (promise) mein aaj k baad cigarette ko haath bhi nahi laguanga" he folded his hand and prayed "ab to maan zaa"
Gulaal pushed his hand aside she was about to walk but he blocked her way with his strong arms
He resumed "tu kahegi naa to sabke saamne uthak beithek bhi laga lunga" gulaal looked away
He was irritated he asked in irritation "ki gal hai? menu to samajh hi nahi aa raha ki tu mere naal kyu nahi bol rahi"
(y aren't u speaking)
Gulaal clenched her teeth she was about to speak...in the nearby distance someone sang
Ithe pyaar di puch koi naa
(No one understands true love)
Tere nal naiyo bolna
(I don't wanna speak to u)
Tere moo teh much koi na
(u r clean shaven without moustaches)
Gulaal smiled at the song looking back she raised her eye brows and teased him back and went away
Kesar put his finger on the upper lips he was clean shaven he frowned and sighed heavily
And then said said loudly "oye kuch dasso bhi heeriye."
(Say something sweetheart)
Gulaal denied with her hand gesture without looking at him
Kesar was staring her in desparation in the meantime some of his childhood friends surrounded him "kesar tu yanha khada hai ? aur wanha kudiyan humara tappe mein band baja rahi hai'.oye chal oye'.."
Kesar resisted "arey nahi'."
But they didn't budged they dragged him to the the spot the gals and boyz were divided in two groups they were sitting on the chorpoi facing each other throwing and accepting challenges he sat there half heartedly
One of the gal chirped "arey phir aa gaye tussi haarne"
The boy replied "ji aise baat nahi hai 'ji aap sahi nahi khel rahe ho"
The other gal asked "hund kaise"
The boy replied hund aise aap puraane boliyan gaa rahe ho aur humare munde to sheher se hai patting kesar's shoulder hardly'kesar frowned and rubbed his shoulder'..
The boy continued "ab aap hi dasso hum bhala purane gane kaise gaaye'ek kaam karte hai hum naa radio waale gaane gaate hai kisi ko pareshani nahi hoyegi'changa hai ji?"
The gal replied flirtiously "ki fark penda hai aapne to phir bhi haarna hai"
The other boy replied bashfully "aji hum to dil bhi haar gaye aapne to lena hi nahi hai"
The gal twitched her nose and said "chal jhoota"
The teasing continued some of the gals brought gulaal on the spot'.kesar saw her'''his heart jumped in excitement a huge grin spread on his face
Gulaal sat with the gals on charpoi and looked away
Another boy intervened and said "to thek hai ji tay raha boliyaan (songs) radio k gaane ki hongi aur gaane k saath nach k bhi dekhana hoga'..aur jo 5 min tak nahi gaa paaya to dusari party jeet jaayegi ok hai ji to phir shuru karte hain'..shuruat kudiyun se hogi"
One gal said "kyu ji hum pehle kyu?"
The boy smiled and said "ji munde te kudiyoon k peeche peeche ache lagte hai aage aage thodhi naa'''"
Kesar smiled he stole a glance at her he was trying his best to kajole her but she remained unmoved
The challenge was set gals and boys sat on their respective charpois the dholwaalas arrived at the spot ready to beat the dhol on the retro - modern songs of Punjab''
With a beat competition started
A gal stood she began...
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La la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,
Dekhe mujhko wo aane bahane,
Peeche aaye gali naapta,
Munda hai wo ya jhoka hawa ka kya pata o balle,
Yeh lage har ghadhi har jagah wo,
Jaise mujhko rahe dhoondhta,
Munda hai wo ya jhoka hawa ka kya pata o balle,
Kesar kept on looking at her with his imploring eyes he made facial expressions trying his best to cajole her flatter coax her but she didn't budged
The gal swayed at the tone''..
Hoo peecha bhi naa chore mera,
Chuppi bhi naa tode,
Keh bhi naa paaye dil vaali wo savaali,
Mera dil ka ,mere dil ka hua aisa mehram,
Thoda thoda pyaar aa gaya,
Gulaal looked at him'''.she was smiling at heart she wanted to ruffle his hairs at his cute facial expression and funny gestures but she pretended''' let him cajole her little bit she was actually enjoying his plight'..
Hoo mere dil ka hua aisa mehram,
Thoda thoda pyaar aa gaya,
Shaava ahaa shaava ahaa'
[La la la la la ho gayi re,
The song ended and the gal took her seat'''..kesar sighed he knew it wasn't easy to coax her''he thought for a sec he strucked with an idea his eyes gleamed with mischief and he stood up''''gulaal looked him amused
He moved forward and looked at her earnestly he smiled
And began to sing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SuLAcZtxzwM
Gur nalo ishq mitha O ho
Gur nalo ishq mitha Ai ha
(Love is sweeter than jaggery)
He began to shake his leg with the beat of dhol'.without a question he was a fabulous dancer''the whole attention of the crowd swing towards him'he danced he sang
Gur nalo ishq mitha o ho
O rabba lag na kise nu jaave
Gur nalo ishq mitha
Love is sweeter than jaggery
"O God, let is strike no one
This love, sweeter than jaggery
He swayed his shoulder wriggled his body''. his feets in rhythum with the beat of the dhol as the tempo increased he strutted twirling and turning''.. making gals go weak at their knees the gals oogled at him shamelessly they clapped cheered and whisteled for him'gulaal was ecstatic his dance always stirred her heart'''.. she remembered how in childhood he made her sit whole day he would dance clumsily and he would ask her to sing praises for his weird bhangra movements'''strange'. how the time faded quickly''how his clumpsy steps became smoother'how his dance become graceful''' from where did he learn all this?''she was looking at him fondly'''..
"aah finally" kesar thought' he so knew it '.with a huge grin he continued
Meri pave jind kad le O ho
Meri pave jind kad leAi hai
Mere yaar nu manda na boli
(You may take my life away
But don't speak a word against my beloved)
Gur nalo ishq mitha o ho
O rabba lag na kise nu jaave
Gur nalo ishq mitha
Before he could finish it off a gal stood up she looked at him and sang a song in response
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJ8EnjbxUNI
Kaala Sha Kala
kaala sha kala
Mera Kala Ae Sardar Goreyan Nu Dafaa Karo
(Black ! my man is dark skinned let all the fair skinned get lost)
She teased her kesar looked at her in wonder he looked back at gulaal who started laughing'.he frowned he stomped his feet he was about to leave but other gals blocked his way they teased him pulled his cheeks patted his shoulders and continued
Mai Aap Tille Di Taar
(it stikes my heart)
Kala sha kala''..
He was annoyed he got rid of the gals and sat gulaal looked at him and teased him tch tch tch'he twitched'..
The other boy came for rescue
He stood up he danced and singed
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJ8EnjbxUNI
Balle Balle Je Soniya De Rang Dekhlo
(Look at the color of these beauties)
Bina Dor Di Udh Di Patang Dekh Lo
(Look at the flying kites without string)
Aj Munde Hue Enhan De Malang Dekh Lo
(These boys have become slaves for them)
Bina Dor Di Udh Di Patang Dekh Lo
(Look at the fying kites without string)
Ay Kudiyan Kudiyan, Ay Tikhiyan Churiyan
(The gals as sharp as knife)
Kudiyan Jawan Hath Na Aawan
(These gals are difficult to catch)
Kesar looked at gulaal happily he asked through his eye gesture did she liked her performance? Gulaal nodded her head in denial showed thumbs down'..kesar smacked his forehead in desperation "not again"
The song ended and the boy sat back''.now gals had to perform'some of the them insisted gulaal to stand and sing'gulaal refused how could she sing and dance she had never danced in these eight years'how could she but the gals didn't listened they persuaded her and made her stand'''kesar looked at her anxiously
Gulaal was hesistant''she sang her last lohiri geet with vasant'how many lohiris had passed then but she never sang or danced'.she was living under the strict protocol of the society for a lonely women''barely allowing them to breath'she almost forgot tht dance was her passion she had won lots of gidda competition at her schools'..after so many years she was standing infront of everyone all the eyes fixed to her she was hell nervous she wasn't use to this kind of attention y she was persuaded to dance floor wen noone really cared in these 8 years...she stood in the corner in every lohiri waiting for her call waiting for woman to take her along with them to ask her to dance gidda with them' but noone seemed to be interested..wat changed suddenly'..y all of sudden ? she hesisted in nervousness she looked at him'..he blink his eyes and assured her "go ahead gulaal I m with u"
Hesistantly she sang
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Lathe di chadar
utte saleti rang mahiya
aawo sahmne
kolon di russ ke na lang mahiya
Kaftan cloth is dyied in grey color...Come sweetheart...My bosom heaves up and down in discontment)
Reluctantly she extended her hand to dance she thought she might have forgot dancing ''.how could one dance after a long period? no she cant?'.but to her surprise she danced gracefully she swing her hands bringing from side right in front up to the chest and clapped then took her hand down in the rhythm and clapped again repeating this gesture she bend forward she clapped go round and round gracefully and full of conviction. Her hands and feet worked in perfect harmony'..for the first time she felt liberated
Gori gallaan te kala kala til way
Sadha kadd ke legya dil way
The mole at your face
Took away my heart instantly
Lathe di chadar
utte saleti rang mahiya
aawo sahmne
kolon di russ ke na lang mahiya
Kaftan cloth is dyied in grey color
Come sweetheart
My bosom heaves up and down in discontment
her emotions certainly carried over into her gidda, as she danced in the perfect symphony her heart was filled with joy her mind free of any woes her happiness was so pristine the he looked at her in complete awe' the dance led her to state of bliss and she showed a rare freedom of mind and soul as she danced without any inhibitions
sadde dil vich ki ki waasiyan
(my heart is full of mystery some hidden sentilments lie within)
naa te punchiyan te naa aisi daasyian
(neither u asked nor i told u )
lathe di chaddar...
''she looked as glorious as lohiri fire; virtuous and pious his heart brimmed with happiness he wanted to hold her he wanted to look into her innocent eyes to see and capture the immense pleasure tht floated in her eyes tht appeared after so long time'.he wanted to scream and tell everyone aloud he was truly madly deeply hopelessly in love with her'''
unable to resist his emotions he stood up started walking towards her he moved in circular motion admiring her...gulaal saw him suddenly her feet came to halt she stood breathing heavingly...kesar was looking at her with passion she lowered her eyelids and clenched her dupatta tightly''as he came closer she lowered her eyelids looked in other direction and started walking past him ...her shoulder slightly brushed against his... kesar sighed in pleasure.her touch created havoc in his mind..he closed his eyes in ecstasy... she was walking away but he grabbed the corner of her dupatta and give a small pull' gulaal was startled she hold on to her dupatta her feet froze''she looked back'''kesar smiled sheepishly before she could react he twirled the dupatta and pulled it with the jerk'.gulaal lost her balance and she fell on him her head on his chest she was nervous she tried to push him away but he passed his arms around her waist pulled her towards him he stared deep into her eyes and sang
baage vich aaya karo
baage vich aaya karo
come in the garden at night
with deep passion in his eyes he hold her chin and slightly raised it and sang
jado chaand chup jaaye
aise mukhada dikhaya karo
(wen moon hides show ur beautiful face)
gulaal's mouth parted in wonder, she struggle to free herself but he nodded his head in denial he hold her more tightly...gulaal was scared hell scared...damm his eyes ! they conveyed more than his gesture''..
the group of gals and boyz were surprised they were amazed at his audacity...they cheered clapped and whisteled''.oye hoye sadke jawan
seems noone was interested in competition any longer they gathered in circle around them and girls and boyz danced in circle singing
oh parvata daan fuhaar aayi
haseen paani tey taar laayi
Tu Aagaya To Bahaar Aayi
Haseen Ho Gaye Nazare Saare
the fine rain drizzled the mountain
beautiful waterfall came out
the spring came as u came here
making everything look beautiful
Kesar kept looking at gulaal she threw helpless glance at him he smiled and freed her'.. he then hold his ears with both hands trying to seek her apology.gulaal looked at him his innocent face his cuteness won her heart and she smiled a bit...kesar smiled back looking at her in uptmost passion
The boys came and carried him on his shoulder '..as he went along with them her smile vanished she stood at one side watching him'..kesar was bashful he was ecstatic he went near a dholiwaala and asked a dhol he strapped the instrument around his neck and started beating it
He beat the dhol with energy his hair flung in the air and the sweat trickled down his forehead everyone surrounded him he was jovial he danced with them in perfect rhythm gulaal keep looking at him the tears fell down her cheeks and she walked away quietly she went inside the house and resigned to her room silently...
Late night
Gulaal sat on the floor quietly the lohiri function came to an beautiful end but her heart was saddened she was trying to fathom her relationship with him''.his sudden behavioral changes since he returned alarmed her''.his attics didn't made her heart brim with joy but it pounded with fear his touch didnt made her felt ecstatic rather she shriveled his passion didn't send butterflies in her stomach rather it shaked her whole being'..wht was he upto? wht did he wanted for her? where her relationship was heading?''.The relationship which was one above the carnal contacts and gratification of senses''''.platonic love'''did he harbour love for her? did he wanted it carnal'.? Did he desired her physically''was his passion outcome of the physical carvings of him?'''.she felt disturbed''..how could he do this to her? How he even think anything else in this relationship...
She was vunerable suddenly she heard footsteps of kesar
Kesar lied in his bed blissfully he recalled his moments tht he spent with gulaal in the evening how she was in his arms his wife right there where she always destined to be''the tension of her body against his was sensational...her touch made him carve for her even more...how much he fascinated her...his desires went wild... his heart wanted her, he wanted to hold her forever...he thought and blushed'.then he remembered something he scratched his head and said "oh teri ! mein to bhul hi gaya"
He stood up and headed towards her room
Gulaal heard his footsteps she stood up immediately''she laid herself on the bed she shut her eyes pretending to sleep
The door swung open and kesar entered the room quietly'.gulaal's heart was pounding heavily across her bosom with each footsteps her nervousness increased y was he here? her mind was processing fast she squeezed her eyes shut and clenched to the pillow''kesar came in and looked at her softly her long hairs spread across her face her bosom moved up and down in the rhythm of her sleep'...her face like a winter moon she looked like picture'..gosh! how much beauty she has hidden under her... he thought''kesar looked at her and then moved towards her feet... gulaal was nervous wht will she do if he touches her?...she was breathing heavily kesar moved towards the other end of the bed he sat besides her feet he looked at her feet she felt a touch and her heart thumped loudly...before she could react kesar took some ointment on his hand and began to apply on her feet'..ointment ? wht for...? she was confused oh yes ! she realized she had pain in her feet since morning she was busy in hectic preparation of the festival she couldn't even rest for a second'.and then she danced too her feets were crumbled her sole were swollen too she had a terrible pain...she thought she would ask someone to massage her feet maybe she would massage it later herself but really? whom she would asked for? did she had time for herself ? as usual she forgot ...But how did he know she had pain in her feet?
'..how could she think i havent noticed her soar and swollen feet" kesar thought
kesar massaged her feet gently..he was pressing her feet gently''.she felt relaxed his touch his gesture calmed her mind...her heartbeat was more steady
She laid without uttering a word her toes curled
Kesar smiled and asked softly "gulaal so gayi kya"?
She didn't answered
Kesar continued "tu bhi naa ekdum paagal hai kitne baar kaha hai inti daud dhoop mat kar itne kaam karne waale hai chupchaap beith kar bas hukuum chala par naahi sunana hi nahi hai'.preeto ko to chabar chabar karne k liye rakha hai meine haina" he said with an authority
He said while applying the ointment "bahoot dard ho raha haina"
She didn't said anything but a tears roll down from the corner of her eyes and soaked her pillow...tear of happiness or contenment...
Kesar finished and stood up he gently covered her with blanket he switched off the side lamp while she pretended to sleep he threw a soft glance at her he caressed her forehead with his finger and then walked away before leaving the room he said "oye ab sone ka bahana chod aur sach mein so jaa'.tujhe subah mata raani ko lori bhi to sunani hai... chal goodnight"
And he left
Gulaal broke into tears as he left she was divided''.she yearned for his care...but she was scared by his physical proximity
She wanted his affection but feared his passion'..confused with the conflicting emotions tears rolled down her eyes not only he carved for her but she equally carved him every cell of her yearned for the feeling of being needed...feeling of being wanted'.it wasnt the feeling of completeness but the feeling of not being empty wen he was around...he... her best friend her companion her buddy'..she wanted him to remain her best friend who would hug her friendly not romantically she wanted his care but scared with his desire she needed his concern feared his intimacy'''.y were the things changing y cant he be her same naughty monster'y cant they live like buddies...?
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