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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Arti 🤗...I am totally loving this fill on UST filled chapters...

Coming to this chapter...wow i loved how he made her wear that ring ...ab engagement hogayaa hai na 😉...gulaal as usual escaped from there when he is openly complimenting her...I am loving this flirty kesar so much...he is not even leaving one chance to compliment her...first abt her hands n then now about her open hair...my goodness he is showing all authority...full on pati role mein ghusaa hua hai 😆...why should preeto will clean this room...its his wife's duty hai na 😉...I really like that convo between preeto n gulaal...offo yeh bandha cigarrette bhi peetha hai ...loved their fighting...especially that statement of kesar to be just wife n not to behave like biji...gulaal ki bholthi band...preeto abhi aana tha kya 😡...u should have come after some time...thab thak kesar apna kaam karletha na...ha ha ha he has to drop the photos that too in front of preeto who is hell bent on convincing gulaal that he is looking at her pics...what a perfect timing...ab toh usse proof bhi milgayaa hai na...see gulaal he is always looking at u to take ur photos...I am just loving this n especially with this punjaabi background...ab kya hoga...dont make gulaal an ostrict...please do update soon dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Arti . . .another arti style chappi . . .wow yeh hubby ji wifey ke liye ring laaye mujhe laga tha bangles honge . . .then i thought heart shape box mei kaun shopkeeper bangles deta hai 😆. . .i m loving this haq jamaoing and flirty kesar . . .not leaving any single chance huh . . .that prasad wala scene ws great . .and u know arti jab gulaal boli preeto will fix ur room . .meri aankho ke aage talli ka punjabi version aagaya tha . .woh toh baad mei when preeto called him as veerji i ws like pheww.😆 . .toh gullu ko finally samajh mei aaying ki kesar ke mann mei paap hai .😉 😆. .aur mujhe pata hai woh naya plan khada karne ja rahi hai . . .i loved cigarette scene . . .it reminded me of the daaru wala scene from "ek chadar maili si" 😳. . .arti m loving it. . .jaldi updato .

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Loved it..Kesar is completely smitten by Gulaal!!! She too have some inkling abt it!!!

Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

P.S: Btw I first started to read and came to know what is ff by reading your ff only..😊 That time I was a silent reader!!!

P.P.S: Unres done in page 6!!!

Edited by poo_j - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Humara UST FULTOO continue🥳🥳🥳🥳no some random chota kesu gulaal scenes yeah UST kya hai🤔
Dil garden garden ho gaya😳😳😳hai sonna unda kudi k liye engagenment ring lekar aya😳😳 yaa gold rate is at all time low so investment ka investment flirting ka flirting sab suto hai na and she is shivering and all hai kinna cute hai sab kuch nazar na lage Gullu matey ko kuch kuch hoing no actually usko kuch naho hoing she is just alarmed yeah banda aise kyu taap raha hai ? but I am sure yeh zarur kuch gadbad karegi pata nahi and then hai chupke chupke niharing and dekhing yeh toh full on haq jamaying..kamra saaf kar dena tera kaam hai..Full on husbandy attitude Kesu way to go😆😆😆 oh yes typical indian hubby agar maid sab karegi to tum kya karogi go and live in ur maayka typical husbandy taana And then the ahem ahem *cough cough* ek kissi toh karwati deti kiss mummy 😭 i told u it was a OS ab kiss kaise karwwau dusht tune humari paapi bhavnaon pe pani pher diya pehle to beji aur preeto ko kahin bhej de yaar grrr😡 har baat pe tokne chale atein hai..hai he clicked pictures of her yeh to gaya kaam se ekdum ..Biwi hai biji banne ko kisne kah extension of chota kesu she was hell bent on becoming his mom he was dead sure she is wife just wife..awww Mian sadke jawan...ab jaldi se next chappi paai wala la samjhi we want ahem ahem and kiss in next chappi..Lovely update😳 yup sure😳 i wont thank u for the comment bhaad mein gaya thanks its my right

Edited by arti07 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: nneeiill
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me late

mai ki kara...aaj lakshman day tha na😆
kya entry le naa mein mar jawan

Edited by arti07 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
It Was Nice Conti Soon.

thanks nicita glad u liked it🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: nneeiill
Eee such a paapi update .am loving it .yeh kesar ke sar pe tho ashiqui
Chadh Gayi hai......haan re totally fida on his wifey dear .but am sure show Mai bhi aise hi hota
If vasant angle na hota.i guess chota kesy did had these flirtarous stint in him he was a royal brat of the village maybe he would have grown up into a happy go lucky guy one who wears his heart on his sleeves loved the fight over cigarette vo bhi with
Punjabi tadka yaa way to common in a village of punjab . Gulaal ki toh sitti pitti Gul kar do kesar ne. I am loving preeto Specially coz she is married lol varna mujhe laga vo KMH hai...she is just a hyperventilating typical maid . And awww he captured all routine of gullu ...so sweet it was ..ha ha ha i wonder y he kept nhiharofying her wthout even taking one pics from mobile,😆 here he niharofy her in the morning and raat ko aaram se photo ko nihaaring 😆.but preeto ne Sab tai tai phis kardi 😆aiwan hi

Edited by arti07 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: minizz
I loved this chapter😃 thanks alot Kesar trying every trick in the book to flirt with his wifey one big show off and wifey all dazed and confused😆 she is confused dazed aah difficult to say...😳It was fun to read but yeh kya chiii Kesar cigarette but that gave us a very close moment between the couple so chalo is baar maaf kar deti hoon😉.these kinds of habits develop and especially wen a boy wanna reach his adoloscene soon 😆remember chota kesu took alchohol as he desparately wanted to get recognition as her hubby here he started smoking to assure himself he is not a kid thts y he came up witht he arguement everyone smokes at this age..awwwie he keeps her photos under his pillow and keeps looking at them for hours together.So cute .Chalo Gullu is aware of the tension between them adn really I can understand her reluctance to recognize it and keep denying it yes thts wat i loved in the show.Even in the show I kinda understood her stand for a long time but then came the whole Talli fiasco and that just made me so mad aah no words for talli .So I am really eager to know what her reaction is going to be here.Arre I forgot about the ring...another awww now aisi sab harkatein karega toh how can she resist him na😳I i bet gullu hai 😭am so happy that he is being the same old Kesar.He has not changed a bit...love that about him. he didnt had any reason to change his brother died in a accident without any mystery he was sent to best schools and colleges in patiala his life was blissful yes gulaal's avoidance stirr his heart but tht didnt changed his attitude for her The only difference is that he was boy earlier but now he is a man😛yaa this kesar is more alish sorry neil 😆Please update soon Arti...very eager to know what happens next.I for one am very happy that this has become an SS instead of remaining an OS😃 emm its like comedy of error likhte likhte ss ban gaya 🤔

thanks alot will update asap 🤗