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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoLali

Arti u replied everyone except me na . meine sachi mein comment kiya *looks with puppy face*. . .but me toh comment chipkaungi ji whether u read it or not 😛. oye i wait for ur comment with neilu's candle singing aaja re mein to kab se khadi is paar BG music boo hooo . .so here i go . .Now this is called gk story in arti style .😎 .meri style ka waala crap .kesar started his line maroing on wifey from the word go huh 😆.yaa direct dil se banda i character resembles to chota kesu bada kesu was different coz of tht incident wht if the incident never took place he would be a look alike of chota kesu flamboyant flirtirious stubborn bigda brat. so the story is just the extension to chota kesu and gullu ...its not neilish its alish 😳Yehh way to go boy . . .hug shug bhi kar liya now move on to kisshi wisshi . .😉 kissi emm punjabi kiss karte hai kya ?😆. .now where will gullu run . . .she can't even go to our parents house no way out. . .i just can't believe she used to run away when he visited home in summer . .kesar was at the tender age and she didnt wanted to give any wrong clue to him...yeh kitna bhagti hai yar . . .arti jaldi bata ki e kesar kaunsi wedding ring pehena hai ? . emm MIL ne gift ki. .gullu ki toh nahi lagati . . .yeh function kaisa hone ja raha hai ? . . pata nahi .i sense the looming danger of talli or any other gal . . .kya denial maiya ne kesar ki shadi fix kar di hai kya ? aah mein chup rahungi 😭 Update soon .

will do asap 😳 thanks for ur comments😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MR21

Full on UST wala chapter😳..hail UST 😳 .kesar is too good in this chapter...he came with full planning to meet her this time n not to give her an option to run away to her maayka from him..he came right on the time he knew his ostrich wife well .poor kesar he has accepted that she is avoiding him but then this never lead him to hate her he is hopelessly in love with her and he has his own reasons to accept her avoidance 😳...his affection n feelings for her only increased each n every day...his entry was superb n she did recognized him even after all these years.yaa she could... typical GK if she can recognize changes in handwriting she could definetly recognize him..Awww that hug...why cant we get such a scene in the show...SP😡 we get only saas bahu saga...gulaal is totally confused with all the UST signals.she is alarmed..now looks like she will realize it soon start her paap jaap..hope so .the only good is that he is damn clear abt his feelings for her yaa one of the dimension of his character n also biji may have realized what he feels for gulaal..he doesnt needs to be vocal .his looks says all😆

Arti 🤗...loved this chapter so much...do update soon...thanks alot will update asap🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoLali

Oye why are u becoming emotional and khaying bluey ki kasam.😆 . .maien teri niyat par shak nahi kia . .phew thank good .woh kya hai na u generally blow like a wind , who me...? i thought i crawl like a snail 😉kipping comments 😛.wooh mein crawl karte karte tresspass kar jati hun chorry .so i thought u must have missed my comment too . naah kabhi nahi . .but i would not deny the fact ki my dil toot gaya tha seeing no reply . .hayye meine sach mein kiya tha boo hooo .yeah pakka meri SP se inspired future sasu maa ne gayab kiya 😭par koi nahi ji .😳 . .aur maine chappi read karne ke baad hi kaha tha that it's not bhaangar 😳. . .picture abhi baaki hai mere dost i would ask this question wen ss pe the end ka board chipking.and is IF ki toh . 😡. yaa neither they give us interview nor they allow us to spamm to increase his rank and now its a limit they are eating our comments i want IF PANCHAYAT right now

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Arti ka SS...😲😲😲..res..😃
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CHAPTER 5


At night gulaal was making her bed ''she saw kesar standing outside her room''he was watching her preparing the bed he leaned at the door and looked at her'..how could something so delicate and so beautiful can also be so tormenting'..? he wondered this person has taken all his sanity and his logic since she entered his life''''

she turned and asked "kesar tu yanha"

Kesar walked inside her room and said "haan tere liye sheher se kuch laya tha"

Gulaal looked at him and asked "curiosily mere liye kya?"

He took out a cute heart shaped box and opened to show a beautiful rubby studed gold ring to her

Gulaal was pleasantly surprised she asked "yeah tu laya hai

He noded his head and said "haan tujhe rings bahoot pasand haina"

Gulaal was happy she extended her hands and asked "hmm chal de mera tohfa"

Kesar smiled and caught her hand instead'.gulaal was startled the cold touch of his fingers made her shiver'..she could see the mix of yearning and the passion in the look he was giving her and although inwardly she was shaking by his touch she still stood their grounded

She said "kesar tu?"

Kesar looked into her eyes he gently hold her hands and slipped the ring unto her engagement finger'.he said while sliding the ring "meine paise bacha kar tere liye khareedi hai"

Gulaal said "par tujhe mera naap nahi pata '.mujhe nahi aayegi

She thought it maynot possibly fit her but suprisingly it did and so perfectly as if it was tailor made for her''only her''

Kesar looked at her and holding her hand asked bata "kaise lagi"

Gulaal looked down at her hand the worn gold felt soft on her hands'hardly anyone cared for her'''all these years everyone were so busy in their life they hardly thought she might have some emotions she might love gifts''some true knot of emotions filled her heart and choked her throat .she looked at her ring said in soft tune "bahoot sundar hai"

Kesar looked at her He felt his breath catch at the clear beauty she possessed'.. he looked at her hands and said in husky tone "par in hathon se jyada nahi"

Bringing her hand closer to his bossom with utmost passion he said "tu bahoot sundar hai gulaal" bewitched and lost in her beauty

Gulaal hear ppunded in a stange and unkown fear'' a relunctance tht had been there for wat seemed forever intensified uncomfortably'she immediately withdrew her hand and got up and said in breathless voice "lagta hai biji bula rahi hai" and she hurriedly went outside the room

Kear saw her leaving he lowered his head and smiled to himself'''.

In the morning gulaal got up and performed her morning pooja after fininshing the pooja she turned and burned some champor and started spreading the smoke in all corners of the house while hyming durga chalisa''. she reached the front door suddenly the door opened and kesar entered the house wearing his black vest and track pants he had returned from jogging soaked in the sweat he was breathing heavily both of them looked at each other startled'kesar noticed her'. she had taken bath and her wet hairs flowed down to her shaply back'''dressed in baby pink chiffon salwar kaameez her skin glistered in flickering rays of the morning sun...kesar was a goner he could have looked at her forever gulaal saw him and took a deep breath to calm her overwrought nerves and her heartbeat tht raced wildly''' she extended prasad to him

Kesar looked at the prasad and then smiled and opened his mouth and said "khila de mere haath gande hai"

Gulaal sqeezed a faint smile she fed a prasad to him and looked at her fingers tht just brushed against his lips'. nervousness possessed her

She turned back and started spreading the smoke in other corner of the house

While kesar wiped the sweat from the hand towel looking at her'..his eyes were stuck at her refusing to look away'..gulaal saw him staring at her'.she was uneasy''.unable to resist she finally asked "kya hua kesar'.aisa kya dekh raha hai'."while spreading her smoke with her gentle hands not looking at him

Kesar looked at her with dreamy eyes and said "gulaal tu apne baal mat bandha kar"''''.gulaal turned back

He walked and stood close to her and lowered his head whispeared in her ears in husky tone "tu khule baalon mein bahoot soni lagti hai" His warm breath bathed her skin''.her smell intoxicated him''''he wanted to say something but heard his biji calling out his name

He turned his head and said "aatu hun biji"

He turned back and looked at her sheepishly he smiled and chewed his lips and went upstairs'..leaving her in utter shock

Since kesar had returned she could sense his eyes constantly following her''everytime she went in the kitchen she could feel him staring at her from a distance''. everytime she closed her eyes she could feel him looking at her from the window the gaze tht remained fixed at her without blinking without any hesitation without any trace of guilt'''

For kesar the feeling was something he never before experienced restless and discontended he could know no happiness but in the presence of her who captivated his mind his soul his heart'

He tried to assume some firmness but in vain a look from her would throw him off his guard and his feeling much alien to him become his torment it was worse than the torture in the hostel wen she wasnt there with him'''..

It was morning kesar was in his room he was searching for his fav tshirt but couldn't find it anywhere finally he started calling gulaal

"Gulaal gulaal"

gulaal heard him and went upstairs she asked "kya baat hai ghar kyu sar par utha rakha hai"

kesar said in irked voice to "aur kya karu meri fav tshirt nahi mil rahi poora kamra chaan mara kahin bhi nahi dekh rahi"

gulaal replied "dhang se dekha hi nahi hoga yeah dekh almari mein hi rakhi hai par tujhe dekhna hi nahi hai, haina"

she complained while handling him his tshirt

he said firmly "haan to yeah sab mein kyu karu tu kisliye hai ''yeah sab kaam tera hai tu hi dekh" he said with strange directness and authority and resumed wat he was doing

gulaal was hesistant

kesar looked at her and said "acha sun'.yeah tshirt dhundne ka chakkar mein kamra ekdum mess ho gaya hai tu saaf kar dena '"

gulaal nodded her head "thek hai preeto se kah deti hun wooh saaf kar degi"

kesar looked at her he was irritated he shoted back "kyu preeto kyu saaf karegi dekh gulaal meine pehla bhi kaha hai yeah kaam tera hai''..mein kyu kisi aur se kaam karne ko kahu''.. tera kaam hai tu kar'''..and he left angrily

Gulaal was scared'..hell scared with the way he spoke to her''. he said it so authoratively tht she to felt nervous and tongue tied''.it wasn't the first time he had thrown tantrums at her'.infact as a child he use to throw terrible tantrums so often'..but now the things were different there was not a childlike instance but a strange authority as if exercising his right on her'.

Late afternoon gulaal entered his room'''.the room was a terrible mess he didn't cleaned up nor he asked anyone else for help it was untidy as it was in morning''.nothing changed at all gulaal took a long breath and said "ekdum ziddi hai'..agar mein naa karu to khud bhi nahi karega aur naa kisi ko karne dega''..

She picked up the piles of clothes tht were scattered on the ground she placed them neatly in the almirah'..she arranged the books on the books shelves dusted and mopped the floor replaced the bed linen with a fresh and clean set 'while arranging his bed her hands slip under the pillow and bumped on sheaf of papers she lifted the pillow some pictures were hidden beneath the pillow gulaal looked at those pictures curiously

She remembered her conversation with preeto the previous morning

Preeto "parjaiji tenu pata hai aajkal kesar veerji ghanto kisi ki photo dekhte rehnde hai aur akele akele haste rehnde hai "

Gulaal was pleasantly amused she asked "photo?"

Preeto exclaimed "haan parjaiji ekdum gum ho jaate hai photo dekhte dekhte" she lowered her eyes smiled and said waise menu pata hai wooh photo naa aapke hi honge"

Gulaal creased her eyebrows frowned and said "kya bakwass kar rahi hai"

Preeto insisted she holded her hand and said "nahi parjaiji mein sach kah rahi hun wooh jin nazaro se us photo ko dekhte hai itne pyaar se sirf ek pati apni patni ko dekh sakta hai"

Gulaal looked at her she frowned and grabbed the ladle in haste

Preeto continued "haaye''.jitney pyaar se veerji us photo ko dekhte hai utne pyaar se toh mere khasam (husband) ne menu dekha naa hoga" she sighed

Gulaal scolded her "oye bas kar aur dekh sabzi jal rahi hai"

She remembered her banter and she extended her hand to pick up the pictures'''.but her gaze fell on the cigarette case and lighter tht laid adjacent to the pictures

Gulaal picked up the cigarette case and the lighter and looked at it in disbelief

Just then Kesar entered the room he said "gulaal''."

Gulaal turned around and frowned she extended the cigarette case and asked in stern voice "yeah kya hai"

Kesar looked at the cigarette case his eyes widened and he bite his tongue in desperation

Gulaal said again "kuch pooch rahi hun tujhse yeah teri haina

Kesar hesistated he had acquired the smoking habits at college gulaal and biji wasn't aware of it now he was caught red handed he took the cigarette case and lighter'''in low tone said "haan"

Gulaal was startled she asked "kya tu cigarette peena laga hai"

Kesar chew his lips and said "kabhi kabhi"

Gulaal was irritation "tu paagal ho gaya hai tujhe pata hai cigarette peena kitni boori baat hai pata hai kitna boora asar padta hai sehat par kuch akal hai yaa nahi"

Kesar shoted back "oh common gulaal chill maar'.. mere umar dhoodh peene k nahi hai'.aajkal k generation yahi karti hai aur mere saare dost bhi peete hai meine pee li isme boorai kya hai'.. mujhe lecture mat de'.."

Gulaal yelled "oye bhaad mein gaaye tere dost menu usne koi lena dena nahi hai'''''' tu nahi peeyega bas'.."

Kesar closed his eyes in desperation and said "thek hai nahi peeyunga"

Gulaal insisted "aaye aise nahi kha meri sau (swear ) ki aaj k baad ciigratte ko haath bhi nahi lagaayega"

Kesar looked away he remained silent refusing to swear on her

This raise her temper to the maximum she yelled " khasmanokhaneye'(useless fellow ) nahi maanega naa'thek hai'.mein is cigarette ko hi chulhe (stove) mein daal deti hun" and she snatched the cigratte case and lighter an ran towards the door

Kesar was startled he ran after her he said " gulaal tu kya kar rahi hai oye wooh mera favourite brand hai poore pind vich nahi milega chal waapas kar"

he caught her and grabbed her hand trying to snatch the cigarette case from her''

gulaal didn't gave up either she struggled hard she yelled "aiyye chod ise''"

he tried harder to snatch and said "aaiye waapas kar"

and a struggle ensued between them neither of them ready to submit'''''.

Gulaal yelled hat pare (move aside) chod cigarette

Kesar kept struggling to snatch the cigratte case he said aaye waapas kar meri cigarette"

in order to get the upper hand he pinned her against the wall their arms outstretched kesar said looking into her eyes "tu biwi hai tenu biji banane ko kisne kaha hai"

gulaal was startled the words fell like lightening on her she ceased the struggle arms still outstretched she stood passive wht ? did he said WIFE? her mouth went dry and she stared at him incredulously'..trying to contemplate wht he said

kesar's gaze fell on her she was dangerously close to him yet painfully distant'.her warm breath fell on his chest and his heart thumped in excitement she was standing still''the cold sweat trickled down her neck he swallowed a huge lump as he stared at her neck in fascination'.his heart was racing widly .the feel of her soft tender palms against his palm was making him dizzy his grip loosened a bit he lightly traced his palm and interlocked his fingers with hers he stared deep in her eyes they looked at each other with contrasting emotions gulaal looked at him puzzled'''. he with deep passion losing his senses he bend his face a little and leaned forward '''

and he heard preeto calling for gulaal

preeto 'parjaiji kethe ho aap biji bula rahi hai"

(where are you biji is looking for u)

kesar looked at the door and turned back their eyes met again''gulaal looked at her state she immediately withdrew her hands and pushed him aside'..she stood at one corner adjusting her dupatta tht was crumbled in the fight'''..she was shivering in fear'''her white skin paled more and more

kesar stood there for a sec trying to hold his breath he slipped his cigarette case and lighter into pocket and he looked at gulaal who was trembling in fear'confounded he looked in other direction his eyes fell on pictures tht were lying on the bed

he looked at gulaal and quietly pick up the pictures in haste and went out of the room leaving gulaal in deep turmoil'.

Kesar walked with quick steps and collided with preeto the pictures scattered

Kesar yelled loudly "marjaniye dekh k nahi chal sakti"

Preeto said kesarveerji menu pata hi nahi tha aap ithe (here) aa rahe ho''

Kesar bend down to collect the pictures...preeto's eyes fell on the pictures and she shouted in excitement "haayo rabba...parjaiji ithe (here) aao jaldi"

Gulaal heard her voice and she quickly came out of the room

She was shocked and startled to see her pictures lying scattered in the corridor the pictures tht represented her true self... the pictures tht he had taken secretly while she performed pooja. her pictures while she spread the smoke of camphor on all the corner of the house her pictures while she hold ladle and chirpped with preeto her pictures while she press the feet of biji and smiled ecstatically her pictures while she slept profoundly they were more..lots more

Kesar smacked his forehead in desperation and quickly went out of the sight to avoid another grilling session.

Preeto chirped "haaye mar jaawa gud khake... kitne soni lag rahi ho parjaji... in photo ko hi kaala tikka laga do'mein kehti thi naa kesar veerji aapki photo dekhte hai

Gulaal looked at preeto and then looked the pictures she was vulnerable...

Edited by arti07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: chweetu

Arti ka SS...😲😲😲..res..😃


siree 🤗 oye yeah chand kis cloud se nikla 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Humara UST FULTOO continue🥳🥳🥳🥳
Dil garden garden ho gaya😳😳😳hai sonna unda kudi k liye engagenment ring lekar aya😳😳 and she is shivering and all hai kinna cute hai sab kuch nazar na lage Gullu matey ko kuch kuch hoing but I am sure yeh zarur kuch gadbad karegi and then hai chupke chupke niharing and dekhing yeh toh full on haq jamaying..kamra saaf kar dena tera kaam hai..Full on husbandy attitude Kesu way to go😆😆😆 And then the ahem ahem *cough cough* ek kissi toh karwati deti dusht tune humari paapi bhavnaon pe pani pher diya pehle to beji aur preeto ko kahin bhej de yaar grrr😡 har baat pe tokne chale atein hai..hai he clicked pictures of her yeh to gaya kaam se ekdum ..Biwi hai biji banne ko kisne kah ..awww Mian sadke jawan...ab jaldi se next chappi paai wala la samjhi we want ahem ahem and kiss in next chappi..Lovely update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mai ki kara...aaj lakshman day tha na😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eee such a paapi update .am loving it .yeh kesar ke sar pe tho ashiqui
Chadh Gayi hai .but am sure show Mai bhi aise hi hota
If vasant angle na hota.loved the fight over cigarette vo bhi with
Punjabi tadka . Gulaal ki toh sitti pitti Gul kar do kesar ne. I am loving preeto
Specially coz she is married lol varna mujhe laga vo KMH hai. And awww he captured all routine of gullu ...so sweet it was ...but preeto ne Sab tai tai phis kardi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved this chapter😃Kesar trying every trick in the book to flirt with his wifey and wifey all dazed and confused😆It was fun to read but yeh kya chiii Kesar cigarette but that gave us a very close moment between the couple so chalo is baar maaf kar deti hoon😉...awwwie he keeps her photos under his pillow and keeps looking at them for hours together.So cute.Chalo Gullu is aware of the tension between them adn really I can understand her reluctance to recognize it and keep denying it.Even in the show I kinda understood her stand for a long time but then came the whole Talli fiasco and that just made me so mad.So I am really eager to know what her reaction is going to be here.Arre I forgot about the ring...another awww now aisi sab harkatein karega toh how can she resist him na😳I am so happy that he is being the same old Kesar.He has not changed a bit...love that about him.The only difference is that he was boy earlier but now he is a man😛Please update soon Arti...very eager to know what happens next.I for one am very happy that this has become an SS instead of remaining an OS😃
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