SS : KAREWA chapter 15 updated page 30...1st june - Page 5

Originally posted by: arti07

thanks alot and itna fast fast reading 😲😆

I loved this chapter.I am pretty sure that if we did not have the whole "Gulaal knew Dushyant killed my Vasant bha" angle in the show, Kesar would have definitely headed down this path cause then there wouldn't be the confusion...the sense of betrayal...the anger... the pain which clouded his feelings and he would have realized a lot earlier that what he was feeling for Gulaal was love...true love.I loved how he is so confident and determined here.This is a guy who knows what he wants and is not afraid to go after it😃I absolutely enjoyed the awkward attraction portrayed in this chapter.You presented it so beautifully.Kesar here is not confused instead it is Gulaal who is all nervous and yet she can't help feeling a little excited na.Hmmm so what is going to happen now?main bhi Kesar ki tarah nervous feel kar rahi hoon.Oh please do write a few more chapters...itni jaldi stop mat kar ok.I am loving this story😳Please do update soon Arti and yeh le ek badi si jhappi for coming up with this idea🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

I loved this chapter.I am pretty sure that if we did not have the whole "Gulaal knew Dushyant killed my Vasant bha" angle in the show, Kesar would have definitely headed down this path cause then there wouldn't be the confusion...the sense of betrayal...the anger... the pain which clouded his feelings and he would have realized a lot earlier that what he was feeling for Gulaal was love...true love

yes exactly mini...kesar was a complex character coz of his brother murder mystery and gulaal hiding this fact from him..but wht if his brother died a natural deadth or in an accident his feeling would be more channelised than

.I loved how he is so confident and determined here.This is a guy who knows what he wants and is not afraid to go after it😃...he knew she is his wife and then they shared quite a free and intimate relationship like in the show before leap... she is his childhood bride he cant restrict himself😳

I absolutely enjoyed the awkward attraction portrayed in this chapter.You presented it so beautifully.Kesar here is not confused instead it is Gulaal who is all nervous and yet she can't help feeling a little excited na...the complexities lies for gulaal...for her it isnt easy to understand and accept this new change gulaal remained the same but kesar he changed once boy now a man...she was his guardian she brought him up now this new feelings for her is making her confused it is just like a situation when a child enters into teen their parents refuse to accept the changes in them here the situation is more complex

Hmmm so what is going to happen now?main bhi Kesar ki tarah nervous feel kar rahi hoon.Oh please do write a few more chapters...itni jaldi stop mat kar ok.I am loving this story😳Please do update soon Arti and yeh le ek badi si jhappi for coming up with this idea🤗 emm it was supposed to be a os 🤔thodha lengthy ho gaya donno will try and will update asap 😳 thanks for the comment🤗

Nicita,Thank you so much for the wishes🤗

Arti u replied everyone except me na . . . .but me toh comment chipkaungi ji whether u read it or not 😛. . .so here i go . .Now this is called gk story in arti style .😎 . .kesar started his line maroing on wifey from the word go huh 😆. . Yehh way to go boy . . .hug shug bhi kar liya now move on to kisshi wisshi . .😉 . .now where will gullu run . . .she can't even go to our parents house . . .i just can't believe she used to run away when he visited home in summer . . .yeh kitna bhagti hai yar . . .arti jaldi bata ki e kesar kaunsi wedding ring pehena hai ? . . .gullu ki toh nahi lagati . . .yeh function kaisa hone ja raha hai ? . . .i sense the looming danger of talli or any other gal . . .kya denial maiya ne kesar ki shadi fix kar di hai kya ? Update soon .

Read in one go..Loved it..😊

Originally posted by: LoLali

Arti u replied everyone except me na . . .

Originally posted by: LoLali

Awww arti .aww pinki hugs and sorry i commented but screw this IF 😡

. .it's lil twisted punjabi version of gulaal . . . . .it's not bhaangar at all yar . emm dont form any opinion first of read it i added statutory warning purposely. .our GK can never be bhaangar . they are... in my fictions... give me the legendary characters i bet can make crap out of it 😆. .i knew about karewa and i have read "ek chadar maili si" too the very source of Gulaal .yup it is inspired from the orginal inspiration of gulaal hein meine kya bola 😕😆 .that's why i could understand the sarpanch and panchayat ki dakhal in this family matter . panchayat are cruel especially the khaap panchayats they dont give choices they only give verdicts and one has to follow it. .ok thoda piche chale . . I loved how you introduced kesar as a chotu shopkeeper 😆. . .sach mei yar i have seen such young boys working as salesman and they do it just like grown ups .haan yaar these young shopkeepers irritate us to end . .love gk's cat and dog fight . . .vasant ke baare mei kya bolu uska kaam hi hai GK meeting karao and mar jaao 😆. . bechara the most cameo kab se mar raha hai😆. .i loved karewa scene . .it was kept in parallel to the show . pati rap toh too good .😳 . . .now coming to present time yeh gulaal se baat nahi karta kya ? . naah ji koi kuch nahi bolta. .yeh lake ke paas kaun si baat karne ko bulaying ? .🤔 socho socho i love u kehelwane kd liye kya . 😛 .lake par to thapad padete hai😉 .and kunnu kis baare mei boling ki gullu ko pasand aayega ? pata nahi😭. . .confusion dur karo . . .updato jaldi . . .i wanna know dono ke mann mei kya chaling . 😳.

yaa sure will update and thanks for the comment...bluey k kasam meine sach mein pehle bhi comment kiya tha eeks yeah IF kanha kha gaya mera comment 😭

Full on UST wala chapter😳...kesar is too good in this chapter...he came with full planning to meet her this time n not to give her an option to run away to her maayka from him...poor kesar he has accepted that she is avoiding him but then this never lead him to hate her...his affection n feelings for her only increased each n every day...his entry was superb n she did recognized him even after all these years...Awww that hug...why cant we get such a scene in the show...SP😡...gulaal is totally confused with all the UST signals...now looks like she will realize it soon start her paap jaap...the only good is that he is damn clear abt his feelings for her n also biji may have realized what he feels for gulaal...

Originally posted by: arti07

oh teri.😲..meine to bada waala reply kiya tha 😲😕...i just checked the previous pages😲...hein😲 mera comment gayab 😭 IF i hate u😭...meri niyat par shaq mat kar 😭ruk commenting bada waala 😳 sooory

Oye why are u becoming emotional and khaying bluey ki kasam.😆 . .maien teri niyat par shak nahi kia . . .woh kya hai na u generally blow like a wind , skipping comments 😛. .so i thought u must have missed my comment too . . .but i would not deny the fact ki my dil toot gaya tha seeing no reply . . .par koi nahi ji .😳 . .aur maine chappi read karne ke baad hi kaha tha that it's not bhaangar 😳. . . .and is IF ki toh . 😡.