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Posted: 11 years ago
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@arti : so true..ye zabardasti karewa karwana is so bad.....i cant even think of it😡

and omg in that article it says woman was forced to marry elder brother who was father of three...that too it was in 2012😲...chiii wat a MCPs society
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

@arti : so true..ye zabardasti karewa karwana is so bad.....i cant even think of it😡


and omg in that article it says woman was forced to marry elder brother who was father of three...that too it was in 2012😲...chiii wat a MCPs society


its sad but true woman are always exploited in the name of custom and tradition the problems quadraples in the village scenario so many woman are subjected to the molestation and humiliation in the name of this cruel custom due u know in recent times there was a article where a 5 year old boy had to marry a 35 old woman for this custom...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arre waah 3rd chapter bhi aa gaya😃wow this was so good.itna emotional...I just loved it.I am loving the Gulaal in your version.She is so much more aware of the situation that her counterpart in the show.She is not clueless about what this relationship can lead to in the future and she doesn't want that for Kesar...and even though she needs him she is willing to stay away for him for the sake of his better future...heartbreaking😭Kesar...bechara...I am reminded of apna Ranvee from Veera when he speaks😛Chotu Kesar is so cute and so bindaas just like from the show.I love him.He is so heartbroken na...his katti ha I was feeling sad and at the same time I was laughing haan beta dekhte hain how long your resolve lasts😆awww Gullu is now avoiding him completely...why do I feel that the whole function in the present is something else altogether😭jaldi se update kar so that I can rest peacefully.Awesome story Arti👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07


its sad but true woman are always exploited in the name of custom and tradition the problems quadraples in the village scenario so many woman are subjected to the molestation and humiliation in the name of this cruel custom due u know in recent times there was a article where a 5 year old boy had to marry a 35 old woman for this custom...😳


😲..man that is so cruel
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me at work .😭.Mainnu bhi spamm karna haiMainu thoda time de kudiye me jumping idhar thodi der mein😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww arti . . .it's lil twisted punjabi version of gulaal . . . . .it's not bhaangar at all yar . . .our GK can never be bhaangar . . .i knew about karewa and i have read "ek chadar maili si" too the very source of Gulaal . .that's why i could understand the sarpanch and panchayat ki dakhal in this family matter . . .ok thoda piche chale . . I loved how you introduced kesar as a chotu shopkeeper 😆. . .sach mei yar i have seen such young boys working as salesman and they do it just like grown ups . . .love gk's cat and dog fight . . .vasant ke baare mei kya bolu uska kaam hi hai GK meeting karao and mar jaao 😆. . . .i loved karewa scene . . . pati rap toh too good .😳 . . .now coming to present time yeh gulaal se baat nahi karta kya ? . . .yeh lake ke paas kaun si baat karne ko bulaying ? .🤔i love u kehelwane kd liye kya . 😛 . .and kunnu kis baare mei boling ki gullu ko pasand aayega ? . . .confusion dur karo . . .updato jaldi . . .i wanna know dono ke mann mei kya chaling . 😳.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all Yeay🤗 ..HUGS thanks So much for dedicating this SS for my BUDDAY.😳.I loved the SURPRISE Humari Chotu Govinda is back with a BANG🥳

Jado tu mere waste inna sonna gift layi hai to me kyun piche rahu...This specially I made for you..Hope it suits your story and muaaah😳Hope you like it!!Thank you so much for thsi awesome dedication😳I am on cloud nine😛


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Now coming to the chapters ..
Pehle Thumbs up for the context and richly placing it in Punjab.I am aware of the custom Karewa/Chaddar Dalna..and as you termed it as HAQ yes it is indeed a RIGHT in this custom for the immediate BIL to CLAIM her parjai by covering her with a chunar or chadar and slipping chooda in her hands.Well I am a huge fan of EK CHADAR MAILI SI nad you know that Rano Mangal can never remain away from my heart.I am so elated you re weaved the wonderful GK with the BACKDROP of Karewa or chadar dalna...👏Wonderful parallels.It might be a curse or mostly used to dominate females but it was prevalent in olden days to give a home and shelter to widows and yes MORE FOR PROPERTY!!

Okies so me coming back to the chapters 😃⭐️
Hai this sexy Gullu in her redlehenga tying her choli strings looks so cool and wow her comfort with Kesar is AWESOME!! Loving them already !! The brazenness of chotu Kesu apna Dukandaar 👏So realistic coz in Punjab we have young lads as shopkeepers at a very tender age and wow He is a brat bashful ,hit her with GULEIL😆hai GUllu already loving him as the teasing teen😛😳☺️
Vassy's early sad death burns the heart but ki karan story is about GULSAR 😉and YES i am pretty happy with Gulaal ..like the show itself ,she seems like a woman of intense strength,and indomitable courage.The way she stood up against the whole panchayat like an amazing confident person who was sure what she said or wanted was beautiful...
Love the dhinchak GK equation you created ..Awww he is Jhalla and she is jhalli the chotu brash punju boy is cute and adorable..Loving him so much ,the equation you have created is much more bolder than in the show kudos for that ⭐️ Much like Rano and mangal without the age diff 😳 Oh and the third chapter is so heartbreaking but I am liking a wise Gulaal ,she tried to explain to him the complexities of marriage ,a bolder ,a more intelligent version of Gulaal from the show !! Love her👏
hai you ended on a cliffhanger yeh isne kyun bulaya hai lake side aur what changed their lives..Very curious to know...Ab jab exam khatam toh jaldi chappi la me yehin baithing gala phaad k ghatiya shayari karne ko tayyar😆😆😆
Superb Story and wow WHAT A BANG COMEBACK!! BLOWN AWAY!!⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res res res...m sooo happpyyy...eeeks...thankuuu aruuu ..love uuu 🤗[/QUOTE

😆 u trapped me into this now bear it🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: minizz

Arti🤗OMG I was so excited when I saw your post.I did not even check my PM.I was that happy to see you writing a new SS...and jab post khola toh another pleasant surprise...awww this is the best kind of B'day surprise...Thank you so so much for this beautiful gift.I am so moved.I am unable to express it in words😃


awww 🤗 i wanted to write something for urs and piu bday...but screw my exams cant bring it on time...sorry😳

coming to the SS Karewa awww what a beautiful idea.I loved the Punjabi twist to the familiar story and the dupatta which looked as the familiar device to make the leads meet up and bicker turned into such an important part of the story...yaa the saga of senseless dupaattas should get some meaning That was wonderfully done.Waise even the first time he did manage to cover her with the dupatta na😳 yaa bingo😛 I loved the bickering between them...I was imagining them trying to speak in Punjabi..ha ha ha i wanted to give the punjabi accent but than i had to post it in punjabi forum so the punjabi is kept minimal 😳.kaash we could see them speak in this tone😭am loving the way the story is being presented with a smooth transition between past and present.....yes sort of virginia wolf literary works... trying my hands on it 😳.awww bechara Vasant...even though he had a guest appearance here I felt so sad when he died😭 he was a nice guy cause she was so happy with him na but then Kesarji is the hero right😛Thanks for explaning the word Karewa.I loved that sequence a lot.ooo that last sentence is making me so curious...shaadi and haq messed up their lives😭How?????dying to know😳 will know it soon

Thank you so much Arti for starting this SS.I hope you did well in your exams. thanks alot and its very short story i wanted to write a os but it became lenghty so it is more than os less than ss dunno wht should i call it 🤔 thanks again i hope u like it

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