SS: Koi Apna Sa...Chapter 11 Pg-22 updtd - Page 5

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

@everyone Thanks for liking the poster🤗That Poster is just so perfect for my story yaar.I have no idea how you were able to get exactly what I had in my mind😳

Mini Thank you so much for such a quick and long update...If the 1st chapter was about Kesar and this was about Gulaal ...We come to see things from her POV nad must say that the concept and her history is explained very well in detail...awww Piu this makes me so happy😃Owww POOR little thing DEVOID of the real warmth of feelings ...Gosh par koi gal nahi Kesar will give her all the love a nd pampering she deserves 😳I hope so😳And LOL Talli and her eternal LOWE Gullu ..Thank God she does not dream of Kesar and OMG our brat already has a stubble and no wonder gals are crazy..But is that enuf to entice gullu hmmm lets see..😆How could I ignore the stubble yaar?You know na I love that stubbled Devdas look on Kesar😆Awww I love the little history brat to chuha ban gaya tha Gullu k agey chuha😆 so true he was scared of her...So Talli rani already calls him her jiju GOOD 😆

But awww you have to feel proud of Kesar he did take a hasty decision but he has a heart of gold Sigh aise baande kahan miltey hain aajkal😉 sigh milte hain na hamaare imagination mein 😆And am so relieved that Gulaal breaks the ice between them and chalo dosti bhi ho gayi ab to agey pyaar hi pyaar hai na..I think so Piu with a few minor bumps along the way of course😳Fabulous update Mini...and jaldi next chappi lao🤗

Originally posted by: nneeiill

hi mini it was a nice continuation.. Saamya🤗thank you so much😊
awww reading gulaal's background was very upsetting..that part was well written..could very well relate to what she must have gone through in all these years..I was a little nervous writing that part so it makes me very happy that you were able to relate to it
so as i had thought...kesar has met gulaal before too...haila gullu ne bhi usko aankhon main pyaar dekha for talli...sach mai this gives me pain...hhahahaha

I know yaar believe me it pains me too while writing it .I will try to keep it to a minimum though😃

btw i liked how u described kesar..white shirt n blue jeans with stubble dreamyyy

That is my fav look so how could I not make a mention of it😳

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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Mini Aditi🤗thanks for updating so quickly, it's always pleasure to read stories about GK and you have been so good with conceptualising and creating situations that you can related to GK very easily'The characters of Gullu an Kesar make it so easy yaar.so staring off with Revjibhai's reflection on points where he failed his daughter and being a weak human being that he was blaming her for his failures whether it's untimely death of his wife or marrying someone who could never replace something he lost or not able to provide that support that love to his daughter when needed, choosing an escapist route on realization of his daughter's cravings for that affection by believing that the need was addressed by bond she formed with her younger sister and finally failing her again in taking away the biggest decision of her life away from her'..as usual put so beautifully into words by you😳

You portrayed her emotions and helplessness so beautifully, her entire life's decision made in matter of seconds not to escape thos harsh words,which was so unfair and cruel but life had always been that for her,but for someone,nly one who loved her..ahh..poor Gulaal'did she have any choice'I am so happy that you were able to relate to her😊but Kesar did'and the hasty decision that he had taken, not something new for him either but this time around the stakes were high'so high ..that he was forced to reflect on his impulsive decision taking'perhaps first time in his life..Kesar Mehta was lost for words 'I think he will realize later on that this is the best decision of his life later on😳

What followed was the first step towards reconciliation, acknowledgment of the decision that could have best termed as their fate and the way they rise to the occasion just warms up your heart, two people but a mere stranger trying to build that bridge to walk towards each other, hesitant, wary, anxious, fearful yet something pulling them along just like magnet'..a journey towards their destiny''Looking forward to ride along'.Please update soon Mini'😳

awww I love how you described their journey.so romanticI have posted the update which would have been incomplete without your precious contribution partner🤗

Originally posted by: without-fathom

Haha, let's guess! Kesar's smile froze when he realized the pretty featured but severe elder sister all stern and no smile could actually laugh, a beautiful laugh, and with a makeover (a given in her wedding attire) actually made her look stunning? 😆 Jzee, how did you know😲This was supposed to be an original idea😕🤣Oh Kesuda, be ready to be blown away, Gullu is no simple feat 😆 Here's to the first day of the rest of your life feeling thankful the whole Talli love angle never worked out for you! 😆I am sure he will😉

On a serious note - wonderful progress with the background build up on the characters Mini. You've given such credibility to the history they have as individuals, and as a couple now, which will pose trouble in the paradise, yet always have scope to be reasonably resolved in time. Grounded sensible characters with their own share of secret fears and inhibitions.

Lovely! 👏

Originally posted by: arti07

i wont tell u how much i love this chapii... just tell us what happened after tht frozen smile... abi mujhe sirf frozen smile k dreams aa rahe hain

Originally posted by: sauris

Hila,yeah kaise hogaya,main sabse phele hoon comment karne ke liye. awww so sweet of you.main toh bahut khush hoon😃Minzz beautifully written,gulal ke yaadein phir se taaza ho gayee.Kaash aaj bhi koi show hota gulaal jaisa... waiting for the next chapter

Originally posted by: deb2002

Thanks for the PM Mini.. Deb🤗wonderful update. Thank you so much😃I really like ur FF, SS. This forum has such talented writers like u, Piu.. I know this is my 1st post in this forum. But I'm silent reader since a long time, since Kesar's entry in the show. So I know each one of you in this forum 😊. I used to like all the discussions u all had tht time on each episode of Gulaal. Its now more than 1 yr and I still missed Gulaal 😭.

Originally posted by: manzilmukul