Story:Gulsar_Let MyEyes Speak ToYouClimaxpg12 - Page 4

alanta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Next Phase of the story

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SHARMISHTA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Alanta,

Wow, lovely poster... do update soon dear...

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MR21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

unres done in previous page 😊

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minizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Alanta🤗thank god you are continuing and yeh le I am smiling😃 Coming to the chapter...I loved it a lot.Kunal's concern for Kesar was brought out well and Kesar's pain once again made me emotional.Somehow I get the feeling that even Gulaal feels for him so what is the reason behind her asking for a divorce.I loved the part where he was talking about going to Talsagra and she asks him whether he is going to go alone.That piece of conversation was beautiful.His answer to her and her silent reaction to it makes me think that there's more to her decision.I want to know what.Gulaal is shocked to see Kesar so strong and mature about this na.She has no idea how he had gone to pieces crying over her and their failed relationship😭I am really happy that you are continuing with it cause there's so much story left in this one na.This was a wonderful update and I loved Kunal's and Kesar's dialogues a lot.

That is a lovely poster and it is giving me hope.I loved the vibrant background you chose for it and Gulaal is looking very pretty.All in all the poster is giving off positive vibes so looking forward to the next update😃

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Ayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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aww m so excited for ur next update..lovely poster 👏 love u dear do update sooonn honey 😊 ayushiii

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dear Alanta,

Huge hugswa for continuing this one as I am left intrigued by how GK landed into such a situation and moreover,I lubbed the convo between them ...It gave us so many hints about the extent of the hurt of Kesar who might have seriously given it a thought to continue with this relationship.Looks like Gulaal also wants to continue ,but some circumstances might have led them to such an ugly turn of events ...

lubbly Update Alanta🤗

Awww and the poster as a trailer..Looks so beautiful and as Mini said is giving lots of vibes of optimism.Here's waiting with bated breath for the next one..With lots of romance🤗

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kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Alanta 🤗 jaldi se new phase of the story le kar aa, me waiting 😃

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alanta

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Posted: 12 years ago

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alanta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

I have updated the part 3 (a) in the above post. I am not so confident about it.. I so need ur comments about the part😊

It matters a lot to me.

I will reply to all soon 😊

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MR21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

res 😊

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Alanta 🤗...this story is going to be a very interesting one now...

PB is dead...good for alien PB...loved kesar interaction with MB n reva...MB understands kesar very well but what happened with kesar that he didnot come back to thalsagra all these days...,Kesar's reaction seeing gulaal here is very expected...but the most confusing is gulaal...why did she come here when she wants to break this marriage with kesar through divorce...n that too when the marriage is abt to break after some days...

Alanta...waiting desperately for the next update...do update soon...

Edited by MR21 - 12 years ago

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