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Ayushi,this was great.awww Gulaal is falling in her own trap.She has started doing things for Kesar and it gives her joyhmm. she has started caring for him and she needs to keep saying to herself that all this is just a drama,not real.Although she does get hurt when Kesar talks to her rudely.She is in a complete state of confusion and is not able to accept her true feelings for Kesar😊.I loved the way she makes him smile and that scene was beautifully written and hai haithanxx Gulaal tho Kesar ko seduce karne chali thi aur yeh kya khud hi phas rahi hai which I enjoyed😳Vasant...now what can I say about him...maybe I will change my views about him later on cause right now I don't feel too good about him.I am looking forward to the next update.mujhe bhi jaanana hai ki aakhir yeh Natasha kaun hai?A wonderful chapter Ayushi.Great job👏thanx alot mini for this comment..keep reading nd comenting..love uu😃
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😃 thanx dear...keep reading nd commenting..love u yarOriginally posted by: Kesarmania
hi ayushi, good update yaar thanxx yaar...
i loved the way gullu prepared dinner for kesu and got ready for date with him.yaa,it was so sweet..
I hope all confusion and misunderstanding will be cleared among them soon.hope so..
Ok is vasant gud in ur story or a villian ? of course yar,mera vassy negative kaise ho sakta hai...
Coz i get neg vibes 4 him! ahan?
Looking 4wd to more kes-gul moments hope u 'll like the next update...
great job frn:-)
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Edit:Loved it yaar...aww thank u,gulaal is feeling for kesar n she is trying hard to deny it hmm bechali...but all in vain😉...some day she had to accept it ya ofcourse...she is comparing vasant n kesar...n she is giving reasons that vasant is good n kesar is fraud...kesar in angry mood like our kesuda of serial...we all love him like this me too...she made him smile...n she is happy to do this...ab aage kya hoga..jaldi se update kar...thanx alot for ur comment dear,,keep reading nd commenting..love u dear😃
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Originally posted by: enchanted23
Hi Ayushi, Sorry I haven't commented here earlier,koi baat nahi..😛 I just read all 8 chapters in one go and the story seems really interesting.oh thanxxYou have done a great job in carving each character of your story so different from the actual GK but totally convincing none the less Also Vasant seems like a very interesting character with lot of layers...thank u for appreciating my work aditi,,(ur aditi na,if m not wrong)
what can I say I am really impresses as you say it's you first effort,ya its my first ever attempt,, I have totally enjoyed whatever I have read so far so please be prepared for my vishesh tippanis from now on...😊 thats realy like a good gift for me from u dear..plz plz keep reading nd commenting,,love u dearHope you can update soon, Thank you for a lovely FF😊 ur always welcome dear..!
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