Ok Ayushi,I have finally got around reading last two chappies and both were really lovely, one had a depth and intensity other was amazingly romantic.
Gulaal is slowly but surely falling in love and have started realising the difference between what she feels for Vasant to what she feels for Kesar,she is trying to get away from this reality by trying to convince herself that it's all illusion created by Kesar but in her heart she knows the truth and is trying to run away from the same, You portrayed this brilliantly...
Vasant's mysterious I am going to reserve my judgement on him,he looks at acts very sly but this again can be due to my biased feelings for Kesar
Coming to 10th chapter I was pleasantly surprised to find Gulaal at her seducing best and that almost kiss, sigh! I wish you wouldn't have stopped there,ek kiss ho jane dena chahiye tha...yeah we all paapi here,so that's bwhat everyone will want...dekhna everyone will second me...
Ab jaldi se update kar,can't wait...
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