FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29

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INDEX:

Chapter_01 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&PID=50390674&#50390674




Chapter-02 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&PID=50390674&#50390674





Chapter_03 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=2


Chapter_04 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=3


Chapter_05 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=4






promo:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=8

Chapter_08 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=10


Chapter_09 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=12



Chapter_10 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=14



Chapter_11 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=17


Chapter_12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54393155�


Chapter_13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2386489?pn=22


Chapter_14https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55171851�


Chapter_15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2386489?pn=27�

Chapter_16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56555170

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CHAPTER:1

He came out of the pub.he was drunk and whistling,he looked at his wrist watch it was 12:45am.he carelessly went to his car and started driving he was chewing a gum.He than played a disk and started listening music in high volume.The road was clear even not a single person can be seen.He raised his car's speed nd was driving carelessly.Suddenly he saw a girl crossing the road he tried to stop his car.He stopped his car with a jerk,he came out of the car and got scared to see an unconsious girl lying on the road,whom he had hit.Oh shitt! he said nd than He came close to her,blood was coming out from her head,he removed her hair from her face nd gazed at her for a moment.
He thought for a minute,looked hear nd there no was there,he immedietly put her into his car nd took her to hospital.


Next seen,
A girl was lying on the hospital bed,it was bandage on her head nd a big plasture in her leg.she was sleeping bt restless.
A young,dark nd handsome man came into the room nd sit on a chair beside her bed,he than took her hand into his nd kissed on her forehead very affectionetly.she opened her eyes hurriedly nd tried to sit,he made her sit.She slapped him so hard,
Ouchh! ab meine kya kia gulaal? he said
G:kya kia?V do u have any idea how much i got scared,agar 1minute b dair hojati to mein to.
V:lekin aisa kuch hua to nae,or dont u trust me?kya mein tumhein kuch b hone de skta hun.
G:bt its so risky,v mujhe nae lagta k yeh itna easy hai jitna hum ise samajh rahe hain,agar usey kuch pta chal gaya to?
v:dekho g hmare plan ka pehla step successful ho chuka hai,use shak b nae hua or hoga b nae agr tum chaho to,or mujhe tum pay pura bharosa hai my beauty with brain.
G:She smiled,v tum fikar mt karo i wont break ur trust,I m always wd u bt tumhein b apna promise yad hai na?
V:mein yeh kaise bhul sakta hun bas 3months or,nd then mein khud dad se bat karunga,bt now we only hav to conentrate on our mission.
acha mein chalta hun,i think he is about to come
G:kon?
V:wahe MR.KESAR RAI,u take care nd han dont try to contact me,mein khud tumse contact karunga.
G:Oh ok,u dont worry mein sab sambhal lungi
and v went,she again laid on the bed

let me know i shud continue or not...
Index:
Chapter_01https://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=50390808&PN=1
Chapter-02https://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=50390808&PN=1
Chapter_03https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=2

Chapter_04https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2386489&TPN=3
Edited by Angle_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting.Do continue😊
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Originally posted by: minizz

very interesting.Do continue😊

thanks ... waiting 4 more😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome new writer kya suspense hai? nw im confused kya gullal ek spy hai? Kya v ne gul ko kesar ko impress karne ke liye is liye bheja hai ki woh aur kesu are bro and she can impress v family by first impressing kesu? Ya phir gullu is cnwomen ? Ya gullu has crush on kesu and v helping her? Jane ke liye padte rahega new ff seducing kesar. Iss pehle suspense mera bp high ho jaye next chappi and i 2 will use ur tip wen i will find my kesu . Plz cont i liked it vry much.
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Originally posted by: Kesarmania

Welcome new writer kya suspense hai? nw im confused kya gullal ek spy hai? Kya v ne gul ko kesar ko impress karne ke liye is liye bheja hai ki woh aur kesu are bro and she can impress v family by first impressing kesu? Ya phir gullu is cnwomen ? Ya gullu has crush on kesu and v helping her? Jane ke liye padte rahega new ff seducing kesar. Iss pehle suspense mera bp high ho jaye next chappi and i 2 will use ur tip wen i will find my kesu . Plz cont i liked it vry much.

Thanx alot😃😃I realy need ur appreciations.m new here plz support me,keep reading my ff.very nice suggetions yar mein double minded ho rahi hun,bt yaha aisa kuch nae hai,agey agey dekhiye hota hai kya,,,😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER_02


DR:Dekhiye mr.kesar hum samajh sakte hain,bt we r sorry hum chah kar b kuch nae kar sakte its a police case,
or yeh police he handle kray to acha hai.You just pray that woh ladki hosh mein aane k baad apke khilaf kuch na kahe.
than the conversation intereputed with the knock on the door,
Inspector:Can i come in?
DR:Sure sir,let me take u to that patient's room

NEXT SCENE...in gulaal's hospital's room
Inspector:R you ok?
G:Ya m ok,
I:mem ap mujhe btaiye apke sath kya hua tha,yeh accident kaise hua?
G:Sir...ghalti meri hai mein he bedhiani mein road cross kar rahi thi,
I:R u sure?apko kisi se darne ki zaroorat nae hai ur safe..
G:No sir m telling u,yeh accident meri apni ghalti ki waje se hua hai
I:ok..wat a waste of time...socha tha us RAJAT RAI k batey k khilaf kuch to avidense milega...bt...He mumerd
Inspector came out of the room,here Kesar was standing out staring at the floor in tension
I:Mr.kesar she said is mein apki koi ghalti nae thi yeh accident us larki ki apni la parwahi ki waje se hua
K:WAATTT?
Inspector went,,
DR:GOOD LUCK,nd he went

Kesar in so much wonder came to the room,sit on the chair beside her bed,she was sittng on the bed.
K:Tum b janti ho or mein b k ye accident meri waje se hua hai phr b tum ne jhoot kun bola??
G:Mein khud itni problems mein hun,tumhare lie kia problem create karun,
K:kiun kia hua?
G:Mujhe meri land lady ne ghar se nikal dia,nd she started crying,she continued
yeh b nae socha k ek jawan,khoobsurat ladki itni raat ko kaha jayegi...
Kesar smiled nd than hide his smile with the question
K:oh acha thats y tum itni raat ko akeli road par..?bt usne tumhein nikala q?
G:meine 3months se rent nae dia tha na islie...
K:kiun??
G:QK mujhe 3 mahine pehle job se nikal dia gaya tha..
she was continuesly crying
K:or woh q?
G:Mera boss acha nae tha,usne mujhe shadi k liye purpose kia tha meine mana kia to usne job se nikal dia
K:oh!
G:ab mein kia karun mein kaha jaungi,itni mushkil say ek jaga job milne ki umeed thi,mujhe subha interview k lie jana tha bt
yeh facture hogaya,ab kya hoga...mein is accident mein mar q nae gayi...she was sobbing
K:Dekho plz tum rona band karo,
He than thinked something nd said,ek bat puchun?
G:pucho?
K:Tum mere sath mere ghar par rahogi?
G:she stared him in confusion kya??
K:No no..I mean sirf tab tak jab tk tumhein kahi job nae mil jati.
G:She thought for a moment nd than agreed...

HOPE U LIKE IT...
PLZZZ COMENT ND TELL ME WEATHER U LIKE IT OR NOT...😊😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well..story looks promising...very interesting...is the story on the lines of Humraaz film staring Akshayee Khanna, Bobby Deol and Amisha Patel...or some thing like...or they r planning to phassaoo kesar to take revenge...n also do gullu n V love each other...is v using gullu for his benefit...
Gullu ke toh filmy problems hai yaar😆...ab kesar kaise nahi melt hoga😉
I know I asked so many questions in my first post in this thread...so bear with me...

Edited by MR21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arre waah plot tho kaafi interesting ho raha hai.
please update soon.aur bada chapter please😃
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love story with twist of suspense😉
ab mujhe bahut saare kesgul moments milenge as gullu is shifting in kesu's house yuppi
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