AgastyAn FF ~ Ishq Wala Love (Part 1 updated)

Hey guyzz!! So this is my small attempt on writing an FF on AgastyAn... Please do comment your opinions; positive as well as negative views are welcomed!! Thank you! Enjoy...😃

Note: This ff is completely different from the ongoing track of the serial.

AgastyAn FF ~ Ishq Wala Love

Characters:

(Choti) Guddan Jindal (18yrs) : a cute and naive girl... she has just joined the college, St Xaviers, to complete her degree in Hotel Management with culinary as a minor, in order to fulfil her now deceased parents dream. She's a very studious girl and is very hardworking. Apart from studying, her hobby includes cooking in which she is a pro just like her father. She's very close to her brother Aarav and DJ.

Agastya Birla (21yrs) : a carefree and chilled out guy who is a third year in IT engineering at St Xaviers... he is very flirty, yet good at heart. He has a strained relationship with his mother due to a past incident (which will be revealed later on in the story). He is the Captain of the basketball team at St Xaviers and loves to do coding.

Aarav Jindal (22yrs) : he is looking after the Jindal Business. His main hobby is to play cricket and never loses a chance to play it during his free time. Loves his sister Guddan and is very protective about her. He gets angry very quickly and is hard to be controlled when angry.

Aarushi Birla (18yrs) : she is a very sweet and pretty girl. She is also joining the same course as guddan and culinary as a minor at St Xaviers due to her moms (Pushpa birla's) pressure, as she believes girls should know how to cook and wants her to be a good daughter in law after marriage. But her dream is to join business.

The other characters are similar to that in the serial, except that Agastya does not obey Pushpa like he does in the serial. Rest everyone are like in the serial.

So the plot of the story will be revolving around the College life of AgastyAn and how as complete strangers, they will find love in the future!

INDEX:

Part 1 - pg 1

Nice intro..waiting for updates..all the best vinitha...

Originally posted by: geetasweety18

Nice intro..waiting for updates..all the best vinitha...

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Originally posted by: geetasweety18

Nice intro..waiting for updates..all the best vinitha...

Thank youu!!! 🤗

Do read the upcoming parts and tell your other AgastyAn fans too!!!

Originally posted by: Lennie

Ditto 😊

Thank youu!!!!! Do enjoy the coming parts too!!! 🤗

Hey guys!! So here is the first part.. hope u guys enjoy it!!

Part 1

Jindal Bhavan:

Durga Jindal(DJ) -choti.. Jaldi karo.. Kitni der laga rahi ho.. Aaj tumhara pehela din hai college mai.. Late hojaaega..

Aarav - DJ aap toh jaanti hai choti ko.. Voh apni yeh aadat toh kabhi nahin badlegi...

DJ - haan voh toh hai aarav.. Baaki ladkiyan college ke pehele din sundar lagne mai lagi rehti hai.. Aur hamari choti.. Kitchen main breakfast banaane main lagi hai..

Aarav - aree jab usne apne exams ke time pe bhi yeh karna nahin bhooli toh college ka pehela din kya cheez hai...

DJ - khair.. Agar yeh jaldi nahin aayi na, toh pakka late hojaaegi.. CHOTIIII

A girl is shown wearing an apron on top of a yellow floral kurti and jeans.. Her hair is tied in a ponytail. She's decorating the last bowl of paneer makhni.. And after doing it she adjusts her glasses..

Girl - AAYIII DJ..(yep... She is none other than our choti guddan)

She takes the dishes and bowls outside into the dining hall.. DJ and aarav looks at each other and smiles knowingly..

DJ - choti.. Hogaya na.. Ab chalo jaldi se khaao aur college keliye niklo..

Guddan - nahin DJ..aap log khaiye.. Maine apne liye khaana pack kar liya hai.. Raaste mai khaalungi.. Mujhe late nahin hona..

She's about to leave,but stops and turns.

DJ - kya hua choti? Kuch bhool gayi kya?

Guddan - haan DJ.. Bohot zaroori kaam hai..

And she runs towards a wall where a huge portrait of Akshat and guddan are hanged.. She touches the photo..

Guddan - mamma paapa.. Aaj mere college ka pehela din hai.. Aur aapke sapne ke taraf mera pehela kadam.. Aapki aashirwad ke bina kese jaati..

She turns to leave and see Aarav and DJ smiling..

DJ - pata hai choti, agar AJ aur sasu maa hote na.. Toh voh bohot khush hote!

She lovingly kisses guddans forehead. She then takes lord krishna’s blessing. After bidding DJ and Aarav goodbye guddan leaves for college.

Birla house:

A guy is shown doing push-ups in a black vest and grey jogging pants.. He stops and stands up hearing his phone ringing.

Guy - haan Shaan bol..

Shaan - aree agastya..Tu kahan hai yaar.. Aaj freshers day hai.. Ragging karna hai na.. Tu abhi tak aaya kyu nahin? (Yep it's our Hottie Agastya)

Agastya - haan haan..Aa raha hoon.. Tujhe pata nahin hai kya main apna workout complete karke hi nikalta hoon..

Shaan - pata hai.. Ab jaldi aao..

He cuts the call and goes to get ready. After 15mins he comes out wearing a yellow T-shirt, white jeans, yellow sports shoes and yellow sunglasses (the same one he wore in the serial). He's about to go out, when pushpa birla calls him.

Pushpa - chiku.. Ye aarti lelo..

Agastya (not turning)- aapse kitni baar kaha hai mujhse dur rehene ko.. Apko samajh mein nahin aata kya? Aarti main chachi ke haath se ya phir kisi aur ke haath se hi lunga..

Pushpa - chiku kab tak mujhse naraaz rahoge.. Meri taraf dekh ke toh baat kiya karo..

Agastya - mere paas faaltu ka time nahin hai.. College jaana hai.. Jaldi se chachi ko bulaaiye..

Just then sona arrives with an aarti plate.

Sona - aree chiku beta.. Ye lo aarti lelo..

Agastya turns to sona and takes aarti and then touches her feet and leaves. Pushpa looks on.

Sona – aree jiji.. chinta mat kijiye.. aarti aapse le ya phir mujse, kya farak padta hai..

Pushpa glares at her and walks away.

Agastya is on the way to college riding his bike when the signal turns red.. He stops the bike and is looking ahead, when he sees a girl jumping to get a balloon which got tangled in a branch. He's not able to see her face fully, only side view is visible to him. He vaguely sees her glasses.

Agastya (smiling tohimself) - ye chashmish ladki kar kya rahi hai..

He sees that she catches the balloon and is giving it to a small girl. He looks on when the chashmish girl kneels down infront of the small girl... Then he sees the small girl giving a kiss on her cheeks and she gives one back. Agastya smiles on seeing this. A cars horn brings him back to his senses; he sees that the signal is green and so he leaves.

He reaches the college and sees Shaan waiting for him infront of the college building.

Shaan - finally aagaya tu.. Waise bohot zyaada freshers toh nahin aaye.. Lekin jo thode bohot aaye the na.. Mast rag kiya.. Aur ladkiyan mere bhaai.. Kya bataau main.. Uff.. Tujhe dekhna chaahiye tha..

Listening to that, he remembers the chashmish girl he saw.

Shaan - aree agastya..Vo dekho ek ladki aarahi hai.. Lagta hai fresher hai.. Chashma pehena hai.. Pakka padaakhu hogi..

Agastya quickly turns his head towards where shaan is pointing to see the same girl he saw on his way to college. There guddan is entering the college feeling nervous clutching the strap of her handbag. Agastya smiles unknowingly seeing her. *lakeerein background tune starts playing*

Ik khwaab hoon main,

Her eyes are shown in close-up.

Teri aankhon mein safar karu main raat bhar..

Suddenly gentle wind starts blowing and the strands of hair that fell in each side of her face, starts moving to her face.

And her face is shown.

Wahi Chaand Hoon Main,

Jo Thehar Gaya Hai Tere Aasmaan Par..

She places them back behind her ears.

Shaan – vese padaakhu toh lagti hai.. magar kaafi mast dikh rahi ye ladki.. chal agastya isse tu hi rag kar..

Guddan is on her way to enter the building when agastya and Shaan stops her by coming in front of her.

Guddan – uhm.. please hattiye.. mujhe andar jaana hai..

Shaan – aree aise kaise.. rag kiye bagair andar kaise jaane denge? Kyun agastya?

Agastya who was blankly staring at her suddenly comes to his senses when shaan tugs him.

Agastya – ha.. haan..aur nahin toh kya.. toh miss chashmish, tumhe yahaan pe kisiko kiss karna padega.. ye karo aur phir ham tumhe jaane denge..

Shaan – waah agastya! Kya dare hai yaar..

Guddan – dekhiye Mr,mera naam Guddan hai..

Shaan – Guddan? How cute! Anyways.. chalo dare complete karo..

Guddan looks around nervously. Only Agastya and his gang are there. That’s when she spots a pretty girl wearing Red frock, matching red heels and a handbag coming. She smiles seeing her and goes to her. Agastya and his gang looks on.

Guddan – hi.. mera naam guddan hai.. tumhara naam kya hai?

Girl (smiling) – Hi..main Aarushi..

Guddan – aarushi mujhe ek help chahiye.. (and she whispers something in her ears)

Aarushi (smiling) –sure! Chalo

They walk to Agastya and his gang. Guddan then kisses aarushi on her cheeks.

Guddan – Hogaya!

Agastya – aree.. ye cheating hai..

Guddan – kya cheating? Tumne bola kiss karna hai.. ye thodi na kahan kisse kiss karni hai..

Aarushi – kyun bhaai? Peheli baar aapko kisine chakma de diya na?

and she starts laughing

Agastya – chup kar aarushi..

Guddan – tumhara bhaai hai ye?

Aarushi – haan guddan..ab chalo andar chalte hai..

And they go inside leaving a dumbstruck agastya and his friends.

Agastya (in mind) –kuch toh hai iss chashmish mein.. and smiles.

So, How was it guys?? Do comment and like!!

This is the Lakeerein 2.0 song, incase if you haven't heard it, do listen to it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HuyCs9iQ0VI