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INTRODUCTION TO THE NEW LIFE

So guys this is not a part of the story but just a brief introduction about the new life our AKSHAN are going to start and the introduction of some of the new characters.

Akshat Jindal is the same as before,his nature and attitude is changed towards the world but not his dressing style.(I have not changed his dressing style because I love AJ in Formal wear😁😁)

All the Jindal Family members are same.

ALIYA KAPOOR urf AK -KANIKA MANN



She is a successful actress. (Ab ye hamari Guddan hai ya nahi ye aap sab ko aage story me pata chalega)

ARYA JINDAL urf choti AJ (DAUGHTER OF KISHORE AND DURGA JINDAL)-SAISHA BAJAJ



A cute little naughty girl.

AHAAN KAPOOR urf chota AK (SON OF ALIYA KAPOOR)-AYANSH MISHRA.



So here are the new entries. The story takes a leap of 6 years. Two children of nearly 5 years of the age are the new comers. These two are most loving to their family.Ahaan is close to his mother Aliya whereas Arya is close to her Dadda who is none other than AJ.(Yes she calls AJ as Dadda because she loves him a lot).
Revati lives with Aliya Kapoor and his son. They both are western dressed as she is an actress and so is Revati.(Further in the story this may be cause of AJ's jealousy😉).

Antara also continues to live in Jindal Bhavan but she is very scared of AJ and doesn't goes beyond his words.(I cannot write how AJ tortures her because I don't know what at all happens in those cases and by writing those I don't want to create any negativity in my story. Sorry to those if someone has expected these kind of scenes in the story.She is still evil because she can't change and tries to continue her wrong deeds but not trying to get into the hands of AJ ).

So guys be ready to witness the amazing new life of our dear AKSHAN.

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CHAPTER 4


MUMBAI,
IN A CHURCH,
SUNDAY-EARLY IN THE MORNING,

The groom places a ring in the bride's finger and kisses it.
Father:The marriage is completed. May Lord bless your pair.

Cut!!!!!!
Director :Aaj ke scenes yahi khatam hote hai. Aap sab ka packup ho gaya hai.
Karan(Male lead of the movie):Sir! Aaj ke scenes to ho gaye but aur bhi to scenes honge na.
AK(Female lead): Yes sir! Abhi to movie ki shooting wrap karne ke liye bohot saare scenes baaki hai unki shooting kab hogi?
Director: Scenes to bohot hai lekin unki shooting yahan Mumbai me nahi balki Indore me hongi.
AK: Lekin sir ! Indore me kyun? I think yahan bhi ho sakte the na?
Director: Ha yahan bhi ho sakte the but ye last ke kuchh scenes bache hai jo ki Indore me hi shoot honge aur phir wahan pe wrap ho jayega. An important thing is tum donon ki Jodi ki fan craze Indore se hi zyaada hai to usi bahaane hamari movie ka promotion bhi ho jayega. And the most important thing is ki wahan ek award function organize kiya ja raha hai jis me tum donon ki Jodi ko nominate kiya gaya hai. So you both may be the winners.

AK was lost in her own thoughts when,

Karan: Ok sir!
Karan(To AK): Kya hua tum kahan kho gayi ? Aur itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho. Na hi tum pehli baar outdoor shooting ke liye ja rahi ho, na hi pehli baar koi award jeetogi to phir ye nervousness kyun?
AK: Wo kuchh bhi to nahi.Wo bas aise hi, ye hamari pehli movie hai na aur saath me promotion bhi to isi liye , aur kuchh nahi.
Karan:Tum tension mat lo everything will be fine. Tum bas apni excitement bacha ke rakho, I am sure tum pehli baar Indore ja rahi hogi nayi jagah hogi tumhare liye tumhe explore karne me achha lagega. Ok tum ghar chali jana mai bhi chalta hun. Bye!
AK: Bye!
(To herself): Yehi to problem hai hamari ki hame Indore jana hai,us jagah me waapas Jana hai jahan se sab kuchh chhod kar yahan Mumbai aaye the, har rishta, har yaadein sab chhod kar aaye hai wahan, to phir se wahan jaa kar un yaadon ko phir se apni zindagi me hissa banaye bina kaise rehna ho payega is Guddan se...
A lone tear escapes from her eyes, she wipes it immediately and moves towards her makeup room.

INDORE,
JINDAL BHAVAN,
SUNDAY MORNING,

A cute little girl of around 5 years of age wakes up from her sound sleep, rubbing her eyes and heads straight towards the living room.

A man was sitting on the sofa having his black coffee and reading the newspaper.

Arya: Good morning Dadda!
AJ: Good morning princess! Aaj aap itni jaldi uth gayi. Aaj to aapka school bhi nahi hai aur aaj Sunday bhi hai phir bhi.
Arya: Ha Dadda! Kyunki aapki princess ko aap ke haath ka paka hua breakfast karna hai aur aaj ka poora din aap ke saath spend karna hai, aur aapko meri ye wish poori karni hogi.
AJ: As you say my princess! Lekin aap ko usse pehle kuchh karna hoga. Pehle aap apni mumma ke paas ja ke achhe se fresh ho jaao tab tak mai aap ka favourite Sunday special breakfast ready karta hun. Ok!
Arya: Ok done!
AJ: Don't be late. Now go.
(To himself): Tumhare liye kuchh bhi princess kyunki Guddan ke jaane ke baad tum hi to ek ho jis ke liye mujhe jeena pasand hai, ek tum hi to jis ki wajah se mujhe lagta hai meri life ki kuchh importance hai.

Flashback
Around 5 years ago,

After Guddan left the house he was just like a machine who didn't had any feelings and just wanted to die without her but then,
It was a fine day and when Durga's labour pain started and everyone rushed her to the hospital. She gave birth to a baby girl. Everyone were at the hospital and went inside to meet the little ones. She was in Durga's hands and everyone by chance took her and showed their love to the new ones but soon she started crying and they handed her to Durga but to no avail she was still crying. Everyone tried their best to control her cry just when AJ enters the room and carries her carefully in his strong arms so as to protect her from every bad around her. The next moment was a miracle seen by everyone. She stopped crying and was slightly smiling looking at her Dadda. He smiled back looking at her and soon she felt asleep. He gave her back to Durga and left the place. He was just mesmerized by the whole moment and was recollecting it again and again. Like these days passed and when this naughty girl doesn't stop crying , everyone just hands over her to her favourite person, her Dadda.

Flashback ends.

AJ moves towards the kitchen and prepares breakfast.

MUMBAI,
KAPOOR'S HOUSE,
SUNDAY MORNING,

A cute little boy of around five years of age wakes up, rubbing his eyes and comes to the living room dragging himself to a great extent and shouts for his mother.

Ahaan: Mumma! Mumma!

Just then a lady comes to him and carries him in her arms.

Ahaan: Good morning Maasi! Aap aaye mumma kahaan hai.
Revati(Yes, she is Ahaan's Maasi): Good morning Ahaan! Mumma shooting ke liye gayi hai. Wo jaldi hi aa jaayengi jab tak aap fresh ho jaao.
Ahaan comes down from her arms angrily and folds his hands and sits on the sofa.

Ahaan: Nahi aaj mai mumma se baat nahi karunga. Aaj to Sunday hai na phir bhi wo shooting ke liye chali gayi , aaj to unka off hota hai na phir bhi wo chali gayi wo bhi mujhe bina bataye. It's not fair, mai unse baat hi nahi karunga.
Revati: Achha thik hai baba lekin aap fresh to ho sakte ho na tab tak.
Ahaan: Nahi jab tak wo nahi aati aur mai unse baat nahi kar leta mai yahan se kahin nahi jaaunga.
Revati: Lekin Ahaan abhi to aapne kaha ki aap unse baat nahi karoge phir aap keh rahe ho ki aap unse baat kiye bina nahi jaaoge. Matlab kya hai .
Ahaan: Uffo Maasi, mai unse baat nahi karne wala hun wo bhi to mai hi unko bataunga na aur phir wo mujhe mana lengi aur phir no jhagda Maasi. Simple!
Revati was dumbstruck with the little boy's words.
Revati: Ok! As you wish.

AK enters the house in her own thoughts and was moving towards her room without noticing anyone when her trance is broken by Revati's hold. She sees her and Revati gestures her to look at Ahaan. With a questioning face she looks at him and soon understands the reason behind his anger and now with a determined face she goes to him and makes him sit on her lap.

AK: Good morning Ahaan!
Ahaan: Good morning AK!(He addresses her as AK whenever he is angry on her).
AK: Sorry !!
Ahaan: To aap ko pata chal gaya ki mai aap se gussa hun, to phir aap ko ye bhi pata chal gaya hoga ki mai aap se kyun gussa hun. To phir aap ye bhi jaan lijiye ki main aap se baat nahi karne wala.
AK: Ha mujhe pata to chal gaya hai lekin na mujhe ye bhi pata chal gaya hai ki us problem ka solution kya hai.
Ahaan: To kya hai wo ?
AK: Aap ke liye mai aaj aap ka favourite Sunday special breakfast banaungi aur phir poora din sirf mai aur aap khoob saari masti karenge.
Ahaan: Sachiiii!!!
AK: Yes.
Ahaan: Sirf mere liye na.
AK: Ha sirf aap ke liye lekin usse pehle aap ja ke jaldi se fresh ho jaao.
Ahaan: Ok !
Yaaaaaay!!!!! Aaj mumma sirf mere saath rahegi.....

AK gets up and goes to the kitchen and starts preparing breakfast for Ahaan.




P.S: Is part me yeh to pata chal gay ki AK hi Guddan hai lekin aage bohot saare twists and turns aane wale hai. So aap sab ready rahiye.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

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Awesome part

Finally buddy complete her dream

Waiting for next .......

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Thankyou everyone for all your beautiful comments🤗So, now let's move to the next chapter.....



CHAPTER 5


INDORE,
JINDAL BHAVAN,

Bahus were arranging breakfast at the dining table when Arya comes and sits on the chair. She places napkin on her lap and adjusts herself.(Ab AJ ke saath rehti hai to AJ ne manners to sikhaye hi honge na😜😜).

Arya: Dadda! Aap ne kya banaya hai mere liye.
AJ: Ye lo ye tumhara favourite Aaloo ka paratha.
And serves her
Arya: Wow!! Ye sach me aapne banaya hai. It's my all time favorite. Isiliye I love you Dadda 😘.
AJ: I love you too, lekin ye khane ke baad aap ko doodh bhi peena padega.
Arya: Kya??😬 Dadda mai to sherni hoon na, to sherni doodh nahi peeti.
AJ: Achha , to phir sherni Aaloo ka paratha bhi nahi khati. To ye mujhe do aap ye nahi khaoge.
Arya: Nahi mujhe yahi khana hai. Thik hai mai is ke baad doodh bhi pee loongi. and starts eating her favourite food made by her favourite person.

AJ remembers how the same incident happened with Guddan. This may be the reason Arya is his favourite because sometimes she behaves like Guddan. He was in his own thoughts when his trance was broken by Arya.
Arya: Dadda! Doodh.
AJ: Ye lo.
Arya finishes her milk .
Arya: Thank you Dadda! Aaj ka breakfast na bohot achha tha , aap bhi jaldi se breakfast kar lijiye tab tak mai apne room me ja kar khelungi us ke baad phir ham donon saath me khelenge, thik hai na, ya phir kahin aap apna promise to nahi bhool gaye ?
AJ: Mai kuchh nahi bhoola, aap apne kamre me Jao mai aata hun.
Arya : Ok!
Dadi: Lalla tu Guddan ke bare me soch raha tha na.
AJ: Us ke bare me na sochun to aur kya karun. 6 saal ho gaye hai lekin use bhulane ki har koshish na kaam ho jati hai. Kabhi yaad na bhi karun to ye hamari Arya, poori Guddan pe gayi hai, hamesha usi ke tarah haste khelte rehti hai, hamesha uski yaad dila deti hai.

MUMBAI,
KAPOOR'S HOUSE,

AK was arranging breakfast on the dining table and calls Revati and Ahaan for breakfast.

Ahaan: Mumma! Aap ne aaj breakfast me kya banaya hai?
AK: Aap ka favourite breakfast,Chhole bhatore.
Ahaan: Wow! Mumma , you are the best.
Ahaan settles himself on the dining table and starts eating his breakfast.
Ahaan: Mumma! Aap ne ye bohot tasty banaya hai, hamesha ki tarah. I love you .
AK: I love you too. Breakfast ke baad aap ka chocolate flavoured milk ready hai aap wo bhi pee lena.
Ahaan: Ok Mumma! Aap ne is ke baad ka kuchh plan kiya hai ki hame kya karna hai.
AK: Pehle aap breakfast karlo us ke baad ham sochenge. Ok!

Ahaan finishes his breakfast and goes to his room.

AK was in her room and was thinking about her Indore shooting when Revati comes to her.
Revati: Kya hua di, kya soch rahi hain aap? Aap jab se ghar aayi hai tab se kisi soch me doobi hui hai, mujhe set se aap ke packup hone ke baad phone aa gaya tha lekin aap ne ghar aane me itni late kar di. Sab thik to hai na?

AK hugs her and cries her heart out .

Revati: Di! Sambhaliye khud ko, kya hua aaj phir se aap...
AK: Indore...ye sheher hai na hamara peecha hi nahi chhod raha hai. 6 saal ho gaye hai us sheher ko chhode hue lekin wo kabhi hamara peecha nahi chhodta.
Revati: Kya hua?
AK: Indore jana hai hame, hamari movie ki baaki ki shooting ke liye.
Revati: Kya? Lekin kyun? Pehle to aisi koi baat hi nahi hui thi na to phir achanak se aise kaise?
AK: Jo bhi hua , jaise bhi hua, jana to hame padega lekin pata nahi ham kaise rahenge wahan. Kaise apne aap ko sambhalenge, 6 saalon se yahan khud ko sambhal rahe hai kyunki ye Mumbai hai, lekin wahan Indore me ham khud ko kaise sambhal sakenge. Kaise ho payega ham se??
Revati: Di! Aap tension mat lijiye , kuchh solution milega. Sab theek ho jayega.
AK: Wahi to soch soch kar dimaag kharaab ho raha hai hamara ki kya kare ..
Ahaan enters her room.
Ahaan: Kyun dimaag kharaab ho raha hai aapka Mumma!
As AK's back was facing him she immediately wipes her tears and turns to him and sits down at his level.
AK: Arey ham to yehi soch rahe the ki aaj aap ke saath rehna hai na to aap ko koun si aisi special jagah le jaaye jahan aap ko achha lage. Bas wahi soch soch kar hamara dimaag kharaab ho raha tha, aur kuchh nahi, hai na Revati?
Revati: Ha Mumma isi baare me baat kar rahi thi Ahaan.
Ahaan: To kya socha aapne Mumma, kahaan jaayenge ham??
AK: Kaha na hamne, hame kuchh samajh hi nahi aa raha, to ab aap hi bataiye kaha jaaye ham?
Ahaan: Mumma ham na wo amusement park me jaate hai jahan last year new year manane gaye the.
AK: Ok, Ham abhi saari taiyari karte hai.

INDORE,
JINDAL BHAVAN,

Arya: Dadda! Ham shopping karne chale, mujhe new dresses aur new toys chahiye.
AJ: Ok.

AJ and Arya enjoys the whole day and returns to their home.
Arya hugs him and kisses him on his cheek.

Arya: Dadda, aaj na mai ne bohot enjoy kiya, aaj ka din sach much bohot special tha mere liye. I love you so so so so.......much Dadda.
AJ: I love you too my princess, chalo ab so jao kal subah school bhi to jana hai na. Good night.
Arya: Good night Dadda!

MUMBAI,
KAPOOR'S HOUSE,

AK and Ahaan enjoys the whole day in the amusement park along with Revati and return their home.
Ahaan was on the bed beside AK, who is making him sleep, he kisses her on her cheek and smiles at her.
AK: Ye kis liye?
Ahaan: Aaj ka din na aapne mere liye bohot special banaya, to isi liye Thank you very much. I love you so so so so.....much Mumma.
AK: Achha to isliye aap Mumma ko Thank you bologe, to phir Mumma ko to har roz aap ko Thank you bolna padega na?
Ahaan: Aap mujhe Thank you kyun bolenge? Mai ne kya kiya hai aap ke liye?
AK: Jis tarah aaj ka din aap ke liye special tha usi tarah mera har din special hota hai aap ki wajah se.
Ahaan: Lekin kaise, mai to aap ke liye kuchh bhi nahi karta.
AK: Hmm.. Wo isiliye kyunki aap hi mere liye special ho, aap hai to bas mera har din special hai. Samjhe aap. Bas bohot baatein ho gayi ab aap so jaiye kal school bhi to Jana hai na.
She kisses him on his forehead and makes him sleep.
Ahaan: Good night Mumma!
AK: Good night!

INDORE,
JINDAL BHAVAN,

Arya wakes up from her sleep and gets ready in her school uniform with the help of her Mom and goes to the mandir of her house. She prays to her Lord Krishna with her Daadi Maa and takes her blessings too.
Dadi: Roz ki tarah aa gayi sab se pehle Kaanha ka prasad khane.
Arya: Dadi! Sirf Lord Krishna ka prasad khane nahi un se baat karne bhi aaye hai, agar sab ke saath aate to agar wo kisi aur ki baat sunne lag jaate aur hamari baat nahi sunte to, isiliye ham sab se pehle aa gaye.
Dadi: Har baar ki tarah mai ne ek hi sawaal pooch liya aur tu bhi har baar ki tarah us ka ek hi jawaab diya.

Durga made Arya have her breakfast and get completely ready for her school when AJ comes and was having his breakfast and soon completes it.

Arya: Good morning Dadda!
AJ: Good morning Arya! Aap school jaane ke liye ready ho gaye ?
Arya: Ha Dadda!
AJ: To chalo mai tumhe school drop kar deta hun.
Durga: AJ aap kyun pareshaan honge, ham me se koi ya phir Driver drop kar denge.
AJ: Wo aaj driver leave par hai aur waise bhi mai abhi restaurant ke liye hi nikal raha hun to mai hi drop kar deta hun. Chalo Arya.

Arya kisses her mother and Daadi Maa, takes blessings from them by touching their feet and leaves with AJ.

MUMBAI,
KAPOOR'S HOUSE,

Ahaan wakes up and gets ready for his school with the help of his Revati Maasi. Meanwhile AK was arranging breakfast on the table and they both come to her.
Revati: Good morning Di!
Ahaan: Good morning Mumma!
AK: Good morning everyone! Aao sab breakfast karte hai.

Soon they complete their breakfast.
AK: Ahaan aap ready ho school Jane ke liye?
Ahaan: Ha Mumma!
AK: Chalo mai aaj tumhe school drop kar deti hun. Waise bhi aaj meri shooting nahi hai aur jo meeting hone wali hai wo thodi late se hai to mai Ahaan ko drop kar ke seedha meeting ke liye chali jaungi.
Ahaan: Yaay!! Aaj Mumma mujhe school drop karengi. Mai abhi bag lekar aata hun.
Revati: Di! Tension mat lena meeting me sab theek hoga.
AK: I hope so. Ok bye.
Revati: Bye. Thik se Jaana.
Ahaan: Mumma chaliye.
AK: Chalo.

INDORE,
IN AJ'S CAR,

Arya and AJ are driving towards her school when she speaks to him.
Arya: Dadda aap ki koi meri jaisi friend hai kya?
AJ: Ha sab ke friends hote hai mere bhi friends the.
Arya: Un ka naam kya hai?
AJ: Vikrant, Vikram, Rakesh aur bhi bohot log the.
Arya: Uffooo Dadda! 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ Aap bhi na bilkul nahi samajhte. Mai ne poocha meri jaisi koi yani meri jaisi koi cute, pretty ladki aap ki dost thi kya?

AJ thinks about Guddan who first offered her hand for friendship with him.
Arya: Hai ya nahi ?
AJ: Haa thi ek .🙂
Arya: Kaun hai wo, meri jaisi pretty hai wo?
AJ: Ha .
Arya: Mujhse zyaada ya mujhse kam?
AJ: Ye mai nahi bata Sakta. Aap samajh lo same same.
Arya: Matlab to wo bohot sundar hongi. Aur kuchh boliye na un ke baare me.
AJ: Yun kehlo tum bilkul meri dost jaisi hi ho.
Arya: Matlab wo bhi meri tarah cute aur naughty hai.
AJ: Ha, thodi cute,thodi naughty,thodi chulbuli,bohot sweet,bohot loving aur caring.
Arya: Wow mujhe bhi unse milna hai.
AJ : Hmm
Arya: Wo bhi aapse bohot pyaar karti hai jaise mai karti hun.

Listening this he stopped his car with a great jerk.
Arya : Kya hua?
AJ: Kuchh nahi, aap ka school aa gaya. Abhi aap jao baaki baatein baad me.
Arya: Lekin mujhe aap ki dost ke baare me aur baat karni thi.
AJ: Arya zid nahi karte abhi aap jao ham baad me baat kar Lenge.
Arya: Bye Dadda!
AJ: Bye!

AJ closes his eyes and thinks about Guddan.

P.S: I think it's a very boring chapter but please cooperate, but from next chapter onwards it will be interesting coz they will move to Indore and be ready to witness what will happen in Indore, the city of love for these two beautiful souls.

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Nice part

Ahan and arya is too cute

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Wow!! Waitg for the next chapter eagerly

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Thankyou everyone for taking time to read my story and giving your reviews😳 Now, let's move to the next chapter....



CHAPTER 6



AK drops Ahaan to his school and goes to her set for the meeting.

Director: Maine Sab board members se meeting kar li hai, sab kuchh final ho gaya hai bas tum sab logon se discuss karna hai.
Karan: To sir kab ja rahe hai ham sab Indore.
Director: Ham sab ki parson ki boarding hai Indore ke liye.
AK: Sir hame kab tak Indore me rehna hoga ?
Director: Shooting aur promotion karte karte almost 4 se 5 mahine lag jaayenge.
AK: Kya 4,5 mahine lag jaayenge, lekin sir...
Director: I understand, tum Ahaan ke schooling ke baare me soch rahi ho, abhi ye saal khatam hone ke liye sirf 2 se 3 mahine bache hai, ham use wahan Indore ke branch me transfer kar denge, phir to us ke holidays aa jaayenge. Tum tension mat lo producer sir ne personally kaha hai ki agar us ke admission me koi problem hogi to wo khud help karenge.
AK: Thank you sir!
Director: To sab final ho chuka hai ham sab parson ki flight se Indore jaa rahe hai.

Meeting is completed and AK calls Revati.
AK: Revati! Tum Ahaan ke school ke baad use pickup karne chale jana ya phir driver ko bhej dena. Use kuchh khila dena, mera wait karne ke liye mat kehna.
Revati: Kya hua di! Sab thik to hai na ?
AK doesn't answer anything and cuts the call. She goes to the beach far away from the people and sits their from afternoon. She just sits still and observes the tides of the beach. She just recalls each and every moment of her life that she spent in Indore. Starting from her birth till her separation from AJ. She was just sitting and crying. The Sun has set but she hasn't moved a bit. She wasn't able to know what she was feeling at that moment. She wasn't able to recognize her needs for her life. She fought with all her thoughts and drives towards her home.

She wipes her tears and keeping a smile on her face she enters the house.
Ahaan comes running to her and hugs her tightly.
At that very moment, the warmth of the hug that AK received, she realised that this was the only thing she needs in her life. Nothing values her most in her life than Ahaan.
Ahaan: Mumma! Kahaan thi aap itna late kyun kar diya ghar aane mein. Aap hi ne kaha tha na aaj aap ko shooting nahi hai to phir.
AK: Wo hame kuchh kaam tha aur ham aap ko ek surprise wali baat bataye .
Ahaan: Kaunsi baat Mumma!
AK: Yehi ki ham sab parson Indore ja rahe hai.
Ahaan: Matlab ham out of Mumbai ja rahe hai, ab ham kahin aur rahenge Mumma.
AK: Haa ab se ham 4 to 5 months ke liye Indore me hi rahenge. Aap ko kal school Jane ki zaroorat nahi hai, ham kal jaake jitni bhi formalities hai sab poora kar Lenge aur phir packing bhi to karni hai na, abhi aap jaa ke so jaao.
She kisses him on his forehead and wishes him Good night. Ahaan goes to his room and sleeps.

AK goes to her room and again sits silently in her balcony watching the moon and stars. Revati comes to her.
Revati: Di! Dinner kar lijiye. Mujhe pata hai aap ne breakfast ke baad se kuchh bhi nahi khaya hoga .
AK: Hame bhook nahi hai.
Revati: Meeting me kya hua Di? 4,5 mahinon ke liye Indore me rehna hai isi baat ki wajah se pareshaan hai aap.
AK: Nahi to, ham kyun us baat ko lekar pareshaan honge. Tum bhul rahi ho ham ab Guddan Akshat Jindal nahi hai, ham Aliya Kapoor hai . Hame koi pareshani nahi hai Indore jane me. Guddan ke liye rishte , waade, aur baaki sab mayne rakhte honge par AK ke liye sirf aur sirf uska naam aur uska kaam important hai, us ke siwa AK ka kuchh bhi nahi hai,kuchh nahi.
Revati: Thik hai Di, jaisa aap thik samjhe aap so jaiye,mai bhi chalti hun.
As soon as Revati leaves the room AK starts crying heavily by clutching her knees close to her chest, she started sobbing heavily.
Revati was watching all this standing at the door and talks to herself.
"Mai jaanti hun is waqt aapko bohot takleef ho rahi hogi lekin mujhe ye sab kuchh karna pada kyunki Yehi aap ke liye sahi hai".

Flashback,
One day when AK's movie shooting was going on she comes to visit her on the set and she speaks to the director.
Revati: Sir kya is movie ki shooting Indore me ho sakti hai?
Director: Indore me kyun, shooting to yahan Mumbai me ho rahi hai na aur yahin complete bhi ho sakti hai.
Revati: Wo kya hai na sir mai Indore se hun na, mere saare friends aur baaki log bhi AK aur Karan ki Jodi ke bohot bade fan hai,aur Indore wale chahte hai ki unki favourite Jodi un ki pehli movie ka thoda sa part Indore me shoot kare. Ek report me to ye bhi aaya hai ki is Jodi ki sab se zyaada fan craze Indore se hi hai. Aap ki movie ka to aasani se promotion ho jayega aur movie to super duper hit ho jayegi.
Director: Thik hai mai baaki team se is baare me discuss karta hun.
Revati: Sir yeh baat kisi ko mat bataiye ki ye idea mai ne diya tha. Ye aap apna opinion samajh kar sab ko bataiye.
Director: Ok!
Revati: Thik hai sir mai chalti hun.
Flashback ends.

"Agar aapki zindagi me Ahaan nahi aaya hota na di, to shayad hi aap zinda hoti. Aap hai na saari duniya ke saamne mazboot banna chahti hai isiliye abhi aapne ye sab kuchh kaha hai, lekin andar se aap bohot tootie hui hai,bohot kamzor hai.Mujhe pata hai Indore jane ki baat sun kar aap ko bohot takleef ho rahi hai lekin mai chahti hun ki is baar aap ka Indore jana aap ki zindagi ka sab se best incident ho. Mai janti hun ki Jiju ki wajah se aapko bohot takleef hui hai lekin un ke bina bhi aap yahan khush nahi hai. Agar Indore chhod dene par aapki khushi hoti na di, to mai bhi bohot khush hoti lekin nahi us jagah ko chodne ke baad bhi aap khush nahi thi. Jiju se alag hone me bhi aap ki khushi nahi thi, to phir unse alag hone ka kya faayda. 6 saal ho gaye phir bhi aapne kisi aur insaan se rishta jodne ke baare me nahi socha. Mai to bas phir se aapko apna pyaar yaad dilana chahti hun,uske liye ek chhoti si pehel ki thi maine lekin shaayad aapke Lord Krishna bhi yahi chahte hai isiliye ye sab kuchh hua. Ab bas aur nahi abhi jo maine suna na lagta hai ki aap ko aur Jiju ko milane ke liye mujhe kuchh karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, jo karna hai Kaanha ji hi karenge". With these inner thoughts she left to her room and prays for the wellbeing of her di.

INDORE,
JINDAL BHAVAN,

AJ goes to his room where he used to stay before but not now. The day Guddan left him he also left that room and decided to stay in another room. Every night he comes to that room and holds each and every thing of Guddan and recalls every moment spent with her. He never allowed anyone into that room. He cleans the room himself and arranges all the things . All the things which belong to Guddan are present in that room . The day she left he kept all her belongings in that room and just feels Guddan in them. The room is filled with all the pictures of her . Every night he comes there talks to her picture and locks the room before returning to his present room and makes sure no one enters the room except him.

AJ holds one of her picture and speaks,
"Kahan ho tum Guddan? 6 saal ho gaye hai har roz Yehi sawaal poochta hun tumse par tum ho ki koi jawaab hi nahi deti. Janta hun bohot dil dukhaya hai maine tumhara , bohot takleef diya hai maine tumhe, us ke liye tum mujhe jo bhi saza deti na mujhe manzoor hota lekin mujhse alag ho kar tum ne meri zindagi jeena ka maksad cheen liya hai. Nahi jee Sakta mai tumhare bina itni si baat tumhe 6 saal se samajh me nahi aa rahi hai. Agar aaj shayad Arya nahi hoti to mai bhi nahi hota. Zindagi jeene ki saari ummeed chhod chuka tha mai, magar wo aa gayi na bas jaise thoda sa hope Mila hai. Wo na bilkul tumhari tarah hai. Tumhe pata hai aaj wo mujhse tumhare baare me pooch rahi thi aur use bhi tum bohot pasand aa gayi, arey tum ho hi aisi har kisi ke dil me bas jaati ho. Mere bhi dil me bas chuki ho, ab tumhe mere dil se nikalna is duniya ke kisi insaan se to kya tumhare Lord Krishna se bhi na ho payega. Pata hai aaj Arya kya pooch rahi thi mujhse ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nahi, ab tum hi bata do na ki mai us ke is sawaal ka kya jawaab dun. Tum hi kuchh bolo na, agar usne mujhse kal phirse Yehi sawaal pooch liya to kya jawaab dunga mai use. Kuch pooch raha hun na mai, jawaab kyun nahi de rahi ho tum, bolo na Guddan ".
This was the last stroke and now he started crying keeping the picture close to his heart.

MUMBAI,
AK gets up and goes to her cupboard and takes a photo frame out of the locker. It's AJ's photo. She holds that photo and sits on her bed and speaks to it,
"Kyun kiya aap ne aisa ha? Kyun kiya? Hamare zindagi ko is tarah se badal diya hai jahaan ham aap ke saath bhi nahi reh sakte aur aap ke bina bhi nahi. Itni takleef pohonchayi hame, kya bura kiya tha hamne aap ke saath ki aapne hame itni bada saza de di. Yehi galti thi na hamari ki ham aap ko us aurat ke saath nahi dekhna chahte the,uske bichhaye hue jaal me aap ko phansne nahi dena chahte the. Bas hamari us koshish ki itni badi saza de di ki 6 saal baad bhi na hi aap se milne ki ichha hai na hi phir se apni purani zindagi yaad karne ki. Itni takleef dene se achha hota na ki aap apne gusse hamari jaan hi le lete, jaan le lete hamari...." And she starts crying holding the photo close to her heart.

INDORE,
NEXT MORNING,
AJ cried whole night and slept in the same room unknowingly. He wakes up and finds himself in the room and decides to leave as soon as possible before anyone else wakes up and enters the room. He was about to lock the room when he couldn't find the key of the room's lock. He goes to his room to bring the spare key. Meanwhile Arya wakes as she has to get ready for her school. She comes out of her room to call her Mumma to help her get ready when she found the door of that room open. She wondered how the room which was locked from years is now open. As she is a child,out of curiosity, she wants to find out what's there in the room. She enters the room and when she was about to look at one of Guddan's picture she hears a loud voice which makes her frightened and she turns back.
AJ: Arya!!!! (He shouts).
Arya: Dadda.(She speaks silently).
AJ: Kya kar rahi ho aap yahan.
(He again shouts).
As she was very frightened seeing her angry Dadda, she was trying to speak very slowly.
Arya: Daadda wo mai.....
AJ: Kya mai Arya? Kya?...
Hearing AJ's voice everyone came out and Durga came to Arya as she can see Arya frightened and she was in tears .
AJ: Arya mai kuchh pooch raha hoon... Aap ko wahan jaana mana hai na phir aap wahan kyun ja rahi thi..
Arya: Dadda mai to bas.... mai ne kuchh....
AJ: Basss!! Aur ek shabd nahi. Jaao apne kamre me aur doobara kabhi is kamre ki taraf nahi aana. Kabhi nahi.
Durga: AJ jaane dijiye na bachhi hai, galti ho gayi use nahi pata tha.
AJ : To ab jaan gayi hai na to aage se dhyaan rakhiye.

AJ goes and locks the room and heads towards his room.

Here Arya was continuously crying as she has witnessed AJ's anger for the first time. She have seen AJ in anger many times but he has never shown his anger on Arya. He dearly loves her but today he was in such state of mind that he didn't even wanted his mind or heart to recognize who is in front of him. He just throwed all his anger on the person who just wanted to interfere in between him and his Guddan. Durga enters Arya's room only to find her crying.

Durga: Arya dekho aise rote nahi. AJ gusse me the na isiliye unhone aap pe gussa kar diya, isse pehle unhone kabhi aise nahi kiya na. Chalo ab tum school ke liye ready ho jaao.
Arya: Wahi to, Kyun kiya AJ ne mujh par itna gussa(Yes she calls him AJ whenever she is angry with him). Kya galti ki thi mai ne, maine to us kamre me kuchh dekha bhi nahi,isse pehle mai kuchh dekh paati unhone ne chilla diya. Aur kya keh rahe the wo, ki hame us kamre me jaana mana hai,unhone kab mana kiya mujhe wahan jaane se wo to wo room hamesha band rehta hai isiliye ham kabhi jaate nahi. Aur agar Yehi baat bolni thi to achhe se bhi bol sakte the na itna gussa karne ki kya zaroorat thi. Kahadoos!!!
And starts making faces.
Durga remembers how Guddan used to say the same about AJ and thinks she is same as Guddan.
Durga: Tum ye sab baatein chodo aur school jaane ke liye ready ho jaao warna agar AJ ne phir se gussa kar diya to.

Arya was in no mood to go to school and she wouldn't do so but for now she wanted to just go away from AJ's anger as she was in no mood to again face the wrath of AJ, so she decided to go to school.


MUMBAI,
Guddan felt asleep crying holding the photo. She wakes up only to find herself on the bed holding the photo close to her heart. She keeps the photo on the bed keeping the back of the frame in sight. She goes to the washroom to wash her face. As it was late, Revati and Ahaan were already up and Ahaan was playing in his room just when he decides to have a check on his mother. He goes to her room only to find the room empty. He then sees a photo frame on the bed and picks it up to see the photo. As he was about to turn the frame he hears a loud voice and the frames fall down and breaks.
AK: Ahaaan!!!!!(She shouts).
Ahaan: Mumma.
Revati enters the room.
Revati: Di.
AK: Ahaan ham aap se kuchh pooch rahe hai kya kar rahe hai aap yahan.
Ahaan: Mumma mai wo...
AK: Kya mai... aap...keh rahe hai. Boliye Ahaan..
Revati: Di, shaant ho jaaiye bacha hai wo,galti ho gayi jaane dijiye.
AK: Haan to dhyaan rakhe ki aage se aisi galati doobara na kare. Ahaan leave.
Ahaan: Lekin Mumma!
AK : I said leave Ahaan!

Ahaan leaves the room and goes towards his room crying.
Revati was about to say something when AK stops her by showing her hand. Revati also leaves.

AK picks up the frame and the broken glass pieces. A glass piece makes a cut in her hand and it starts bleeding and there AJ winces in pain as if he has shared the pain with loved ones.

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