Akshan ff:tum ko paaya part 11 23/7/2020 updated

“Shadi karna Chatham hu tumse thali ek hath se bagthi tumhara behen ko bachaya ab uske badalne mei tumse shadi karna chatha hu”.....

Guddan was walking aimlessly aj’s words ringing in her mind she don’t know what to do she never back of from her promise know what will she do.......at gupta house aj invite them for a party kaushalya tell guddan about this she know what will happend next.....they entered jb guddan just aj not tell her name but when she was leaving he tell everyone that he is going to marry her........everyone become bahu’s want a saas but they never think in her wild dream aj will marry who will know only mistakes dadi was happy guddan just look at her father who is so much angry he shouted at guddan(bushan is not same as in serial)yeh kya bachpana hai guddan yeh aj kya bol rahi hu tum kuch bolthi kyun nahi bolo unhe ki tumhe aisa ek shadi nahi karna hai......

Guddan:vo papa vo......

Bushan:guddan kahi letter vo sab tumhe aj me tho nahi diya bol guddan kya yeh hai vo insaan

Guddan don’t know what to say she just look at her father and aj and shouted

Guddan:ha yeh bahu hai Jose hum pyaar karthi hai ....yeh shadi hamri marzi se horahi hai vo letter sab I inhone diya

Bushan slaped her hard because that force guddan back off aj hold her in his arms

All gust where bad things about their relation ship ......,,,,are apni papa ki umar ko parayam isne sab kehtha hai use kuch nahi ho payega par yeh tho indore ki masoor chef ko pathaya...kya milieu use aisa rishthy mei....are aj ki needs poori karugi tho aj jindal bavan malik jo banaugi....sharam nam ka koyi cheese nahi inlogo ko ...aj ko hi deku Jose beti jaisa dekna tha use kis najar we dekha yeh...Chii..muje tho bolne mei ji sharam arahi hai......ladies started to gossiping about them

Durga:bas bahuth hogaya ab aj ki bare mei ek shabd nahi are poora indore jantha hai aj antra maji ko kithna pyaar karthi hu fir app logo ki himmatg kaise huyi aisa bolne ki

Lady:ab tum chup rahi beta tumhara sasur ka asli chehra sab ki samne aya iska pyaar sirf ek Dikava hai

Bushan:ab tum kush guddan apni papa ki sar sharam we juka kar tumse mera yeh umeed nahi thi aj we mera or tumhara sari ristha katham bushan vahan se jatha hai kaushalya:are ji Rukeyser.....also run behind him

Revati:di mere liye apne....yeh kya......but before revati could say anything guddan faint aj hold her in his arm and lay down her in his bed

Aj:kishore vardan jaldi Doctor ko bulao

Dadi guddan ki hath pakadtha hai or uski sihath keliye pry karthi hai

Revati aj ko pakadtha hai or kehtha:its all because of you meri di is galati ki jimidar ap hu kyun kiya ap aisa....aj just look at her shocked doctor came

Sometimes later

Aj:doctor guddan jaisa hai

Doctor:vo teek hai stress ki vajah se behosh hua mei be davayi logs hai ap I ka dyaan rakiye

Guddan ko his atha hai dadi use pani detha hai guddan:revati tum yaham....gar chali jao papa ki tumhari zaroorath hai.

Revati:di mei apko aisa Chod kar

Guddan :mei teek hu tum jao

Revati:di apka kya ap khan jaugi......

Dadi:daro math beta guddan meri hole vali bahu hai vo yahi rahugi

Durga Lakshmi saru burns par dadi......

Dadi:yeh mera disicion hai.....revati left dadi give guddan medicine make her sleep

At night

Saru:durga di yeh kya hogaya guddan hamara saas......

Lakshmi:ha durga di hum use saas kaise manugi

Durga:hum aj se bath karugi

Aj was in hall Durga Lakshmi saru kishore vardan standing

Aj:agaya ap sab kig bina bulaye cahlo yeh file lo ismei invitation card hai jin logo ko shadi mei bulana thayari suri karo do din mei shadi hai

Durga:par aj guddan kaise hamara saas banugi

Kishore:ha aj hum unhe maa kaise vo humse choti hai....

Aj :yeh mera akiri Faisal’s hai tumlogoka ma saas guddan ki banugi

Aj room when he entered he saw guddan sleeping

Aj:tum yaham tum gust room jao

Guddan:kyun ab thi mei yahi rahugi ab yeh mera kamra home vala hai

Aj:fine Mei hi bahar jatha hu

After 2 days they married..........

Part 2

Guddan feeling realy sad because her father didn’t come for marriage nor the bahu’s accept her as saas only dadi is with her aj’s son also meting towards her

Aj came his bedroom saw guddan he sit with her in bed

Aj:iam sorry guddan.....

Guddan:app......or sorry......

Aj:meri vajah se tumhara life spoil hua I know its difficult for to marry an old man just like me l know what you are going trough but I have no other option antra want to marry in 15days and you are the only one whom I felt genuine Baki sab meri paise keliye muje karna chathi thi tum hu jo jab mei shadi ki bath kiya tho pagal Kane ka number diya so muje patha chala tumhe mera paisa power ki zaroorath nahi or tumne apni behen keliye apni zindagi dav par lagaya tho muje laga tumhi hu jo is gar ko hameesha jod kar rak saktha hu meri jane ka bad .........

Before he could complete guddan put her hand in his mouth.....she don’t why she can’t listen about his death

Guddan:bas kariye app meri samne yeh marne vali bath math kariye jab hum jinda hai apbhi jinda hogi jindal saab.......

Aj:jindal saab????

Guddu:ha ajj se mei apko jindal saab bulaugi acha laga....

Aj:acha hai tumne nahi bola tum muje maaf kiya

Guddu:kisliye........

Aj:meine tumhe shadi keliye force kiya

Guddu:maaf kiya ek sharth par ap muje bilcul nahi datugi smiles ....

Aj smiled....bilcul nahi tumhe haneesha princess ki tharah dekugi I promise........

She hug him because after her dad someone is calling her princess.....

He make her sleep don’t know he also sleep well after long 15 years next morning aj wake up saw guddau sleep Hugging him he felt happy inside he make guddan woke up

Guddu become upset kya pehnugi hum jinda saab....aj make her wear saari.....

Guddu:hameesha yeh pehnna hoga.....

Aj:nahi tum ji chahe pehen sakshi hu aj function hogi na mug dikayi so yeh pehno ab chalo neeche guddu become nervous aj hold her hand....

everyone saw aj coming they shocked to saw aj holding guddan’s hand dadi become happy....they do pooka together dadi tell guddan to make something sweet she become scared because she don’t know how to cook aj understand her mind he tell kishore vardan to go office he will be on leave today....dadi smiled...other open their mouth in o shape because it’s first time aj didn’t go office soon everyone started to do their work guddan bahu’s in kitchen they are making guddan more scared aj came there

Durga:aj ap yaham....kuch kam tha

Aj:nahi kuch nahi ....guddan kheer banaya kya

Guddu:nahi jindal saab....hame nahi kaise bana hai

Aj:jab tumhara pathi indore ka masoor chef tumhara saath hai kyun dar rahi hu mei tumhe sikaugi

Guddan:nahi jindal saab hum as na ho payega

Aj:guddan tumse ho payega

Aj was helping guddan to prepare kheer

Saru:durga di yeh mei kya deck Kari hu sapna hai kya.... aj ithna sweetly bath kar rahi hai

Lakshmi:bahu tho saru aj ko yeh ab iski javani mei fida hogaya hai......

Durga:hua kya hai aj ko galthiyon we nafrath Kane vala aj yeh galthiyon ki dukan ko sikarahi hai???

Saru:are durga di ab muje yakeen hogaya inki relationship chap rahi thi..,,,,

Durga :chalo yahan se challah hai

After sometime guddan prepare kheer everyone praise her aj also dadi give her shakun...

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Part 3

Aj evenings bajarans came they where pricing guddan aj dadi give payak to aj

Dadi:lalla guddan ko pehanao aj did same the day went on next day aj go to office bahu’s started to create problems for guddan but she managed Diwali came

Aj guddan ko diya banana sikatha hai vo guddan keliye bahuth sara nayi kapade bhi kareed tha hai guddan ka special dishes bana tha hai bahu ‘s ko bahuth gussa atha hai aj ki ajeeb behavior se guddu dil kolkar pathake podthe hai vo aj ko bhi pattake podne se kehtha hai par aj na kartha hai guddan was bahuth mayoos hotha hai use dek kar aj bhi divali celibrate kartha hai

After somedays guddan ko fever hotha hai aj Doctor ko bukatha hau dadi bhi bahuth tense hotha hai ....

Doctor: inhe bahuth bad I bukar hai inki achi dyaan rakna mei inhe davayi dethi hu.....agar kuch problem hotho muje bula leejiye Doctor leaves

Aj caressing her hair

Kishor:aj meeting ka time ho rahi hai jald chaliye

Aj:kahire guddan ki halath ithni karab hai or tumhe meeting ki padi hai

Kishore:par aj yeh bahuth badinage hai agar yeh cancel hua thi hamara lakhon ka nukeaas hogi

Aj:tho kya hua guddan se bad kar nahi hai vo cancell kari vo

Everyone shocked

Durga:par aj ithni bad I meeting app cancel kaise.....

Dadi:koyi bath nahi lalla tum jao mei huna guddan keliye uska dyaan mei rakugi jaldi jakar aa beta

Aj:paise mera hai business mera hai nuksaan hoga tho muje na muje problem nahi hai mei ek bar ek bath bolatho use nahi hathugi dekha aplogo me vo mera hath jaisa pakada hai(everyone saw guddan tightly holding aj hand)use meri zaroorath hai mei kahi nahi jaugi koyi bhi meeting guddan she bad kar nahi samjiiiii app log..,,,,,

Everyone leave from their dadi become happy because aj ko apni restaurants sab we zyaada important thi par ajj vo guddan keliye vo bhi chod rahi hai antra keliye bhi usne aisa nahi kartha dadi was on clound nine.......

Saru :dekha durga di aj poori tharah pagal hogay hai us guddan keliye ithna badi important meeting miss kar rahi hu jab unhe achi se patha hai kithna loss hogi

Lakshmi:hua kya aj ko

Durga:patha nahi aj ki man mei kya chal rahi hai

Ajshan’s Bedroom

Aj guddan ki kayak rak rahi hai par guddan ki thabiyath bigadthi jarahi hai vo bukkar se jam rahi hai or saas bhi ke a mushkil horahi hai aj scream kishore vardan......everyone gathered inside room everyone shocked when they saw guddan was breathing hard in bed and aj calling her name dadi try to calm guddan beta kya hua guddan.....yeh kya hogaya meri bache ko bagwan uski Rajshahi karna....

Aj :kishore....Doctor....kishore call doctor doctor arrive

Doctor :me jindal apki biwi ki halath karab hothe jarahi hame hospital sift karna hoga...aj lift her in his arms

At hospital guddan was in icu with lot of wires and many things aj look at her trough glass door he pry for her safety he can so his guddan like this she is too small just like a kid how can god do this to her if god want to snach someone life just give his death please save her......

Doctor:vo medicine she respond nahi kar rahi hai kon hai unki papa vo apni papa she mafi puch rahi hai....shyd unki papa hamara madad kar saktha hai I ka has a bachane mei....

Dadi m: vo yaham nahi hai

Doctor:jaldi unhe bulayiye......

Aj felt pain in his heart she is missing her family because of him she lost her family nooo...i can’t loss her mei unhe lekar augi unke liye kuch bhi karna pade

Aj:mei inhe lekar augi

Dadi:kya vo augi lalla.....

Aj:unki beti is halath mei hai unhe Ana hi hoga.....kuch bhi karna pade mei unhe lekar augi....yeh meri guddan ki jinda hu ki sawal hai.....

Meri guddan????shock everyone

Dadi in mind patha tha muje lala tuje pyaar horahi hai bagwan tumhari guddan ko kuch nahi honi dugi

Saru:meri guddan???kahi aj ko...

Lakshmi:pyaar thi nahi hua guddan se?????

Durga:nahi aisa nahi hoga....chalo is bare mei hum bad mei bath karugi pehle guddan ki jan bachaye bagwan hum use nafrath karthe hai par kisi ki jan kathre mei hai tho hame bhi pry karna chaiye uske liye......

Aj at gupta house

Bushan:kyun aya hu tum yaham apni biwi ki vakalath karne.....

Revati:jiju ap yaham apkiyeh halth kya hua

Kaushalya:revati andar jao tumari papa bath kar rahi hai

Revati:nahi maa...mei kahi nahi jaugi...

Bushan:sunayi nahi detha kya kyun ayi hu yahan indore ki masoor chef meri gar par...

Aj:ajj indore ki masoor chef nahi ek pathi bankar aya hu apni biwi ki jan ki been magne apki samne......

Revati:kya hua di ko?????

Aj:please mere sath ayiye guddan ki halth bhuth karab hai use apko zaroorath hai please ayiye....

Kaushalya:va ya acting hai guddan ke saath rehkar ap bhi aisa ban gaya......guddan was ki birthday hai so hame ustak pahuchane ka kya rastha chuna was apne damad ji

Kya guddan ki birthday hai ajj or apni jindagi or mount ke beech ladrahi is his hospital mei.....yeh kya horahi hai aj thought

Bushan:apki faltu ki bath nahi suna chatha hum nikaliye yahan se or aisa ek beti nahi hai mere liye guddan merchi hai........

Aj shouted shut up just shut up.........vo jinda hai kuch nahi hoga use ek bar bhi ab math bolo vo margaya varna mei yeh bolugi ap uski papa hu are buddu thi mei jo yahan aya vi aplogo ko kithna pyaar kartha hai or ek ap log hai jo....kair chodo ab kabhi bhi meri guddan ke ass paas najar math auo uskeliye mei hu guddan ko aplogo se bahuth dur rakugi. He leaves...revati:app log yeh kya kiya meri di kuch hua tho mei bhi mar jaugi she started to cry

At hospital

Dadi:lalla vo log khan hai

Aj:vo ma vo....

Dadi:koyi apni beti ke saath aisa jaisa kar sakthi hai. Lalla meri bachi ka kya hoga

Aj:kuch nahi hoga maa....meri guddan ko mei vapas lekar augi.........

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Aj enter inside icu he can’t saw his guddu’s like this tears rolling from his eyes

Aj:guddan udjauo ab or math sathuo tumari jindal saab ko tumhe patha haina mera umar muje attack augi desh udjauo she don’t respond he tightly hold her hand guddan mere liye please.....muje tumari zaroorath hai unhe aisa chod tum nahi ja saktha mere liye vapas augi tum jo chathi hai vo sab mei tume dugi tum jaise chathi hai vaise mei badalugi please udon......guddu feeels her jindal saab no she can’t keave her jindal saab she needs her she try to open her eys jinda...lll sa....bbbb

Aj :guddan tum udgaya Doctor jaldi ayiye Doctor cane and check her

Doctor:don’t worry mr jindal she is out off danger....

Aj feels happy

Next day

Guddan woke up dadi bless her aj pampering her she felt happy to get a loving hubby and mother in law

Sorry guys i know small undate I will update tomorrow today know iam on 😴 mode i can’t type much because I can’t saw anything properly because of my sleep😇will update tomorrow good night sweet dreams

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Part 5

Aj taking care of guddan

Guddan:jindal saab muje yahan se kana nahi kana sab ke saath kana hai please muje neeche lekar jayiye

Aj:par guddan......

Guddu:please jindal saab

Aj:chalo he take her in his arm everyone look at them aj guddu ko Godi mei udakar arahi hai vo use chair par bait tha hai and apni hathon she use kilatha hai

Kishaore:aj app office ajj bhi app office nhai augi

Before aj answer guddu:kyun nahi ab mei teek mere kayak rakne keliye dadi hai sab hai app jayiye jindal saab

Aj:nahi jab tak poori tharah teek nahi hotha mei kahi nahi jaugi

Guddu:jindal saab zid math kariye jayiye

Dadi:guddan vo nahi jane vala usne bussiness meeting bhi cancel kiya tha tumareliye

Vardan smiles ha guddan ma isliye hame lakon ki nuksaan bhi hua

Guddu:kya????ap ithni laparava kaise hosaktha hai jindal saab

Aj:tum bad kar koyi meeting nahi she felt happy knowing aj consider her more then anything

After breakfast aj taking guddan to their room guddan felt sad thinking her dad didn’t come to meet her

Aj :kya hua chehra kyun utra

Guddu:kuch nahi......

Aj hug her bolu kya hua

Guddu started to cry:jindal saab hamara papa...maa nahi aya hame dekne keliye kya hum ithna buri hai ki vi hame dekna bhi nahi chatha

Aj felt hurt guddan mei huna tumare liye jis logo ko tumari parva nahi tum unki bare mei kyun soch rahi hu chodo vo sab bath mei tume beech lekar jatha hj

Guddu:sachiiiiii....par mei tho binary hu dadi muje kahi jane nahi dugi.....

Aj:mei huna mei manaugi chalo mei tumari madad karthi hu Thayer home mei

She wear a salwar aj help her to tie her hair and don simple makeup

Downstairs he cane with guddan

Dadi:lalla tu guddu ko yahn lekar aya use aram karne do

Aj:maa mei guddan ko bahar lekar jarahi hu

Durga:kyaa???

Saru:is halath par????

Dadi:pagal hogaya hu teek de chal bhi nahi paranin vo or tum use bahar lekar jarahi hu guddan putative mere saath aa tume aram ki zaroorath hai dadi tume stories sun athi hu guddan didn’t move she hold aj’s hand dadi understood guddu also want to go with aj but her health

Durga:aj ab vo teek nahi jab teek hogi ab lekar Jana app tho samjthar hai ap aisa kaise kar saktha hai

Aj:maa guddan ko bahar lekar jaugi tho use kuch nahi hogi uske saath mei hu bahar ki Jawa uski mind teek karugi

Dadi:chalo jauo jaldi vapas Ana uski kayaaal rakna dadi saw guddan face she is ko w very much dadi felt guddan want to spend time with aj

Lakshmi:durga di yeh sab kyaa hoahi

Saru:is guddan ke saath reh kar aj bhi uski tharah bachkane harkat kar rahi hai....