Akshan ff:true love part 9 updated 2/6/2020 - Page 3

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Part 9

Dadi:Athe hu dono jadagna shuru kiya

Aj:nahi ma aisa kuch nahi hum tho aise hi

Guddu:maji aisa kuch nahi hai

Dadi:yeh lo juice peeyo or aram karo tab yak dinner ready hojaugu before going out she hug her son

Dadi:lalla tu teek tho hona

Aj:ma mei bilcul teek hu she goes outside guddan gets sad thinking she is cheating her maji

Aj:sambalo kudh ko hum jo bi kar rahi hai achayi keliye hai

Guddu:par mei maji ke dip ke saath kel rahi hai tume nahi patha ki dadi keliye unki lalla kya hai or jindal saab keliye unki ma

Aj:mei samaj saktha hu meri ma bhi muje aisa hi pyaar kartha hai

Guddu:tumari family ki bare mei kuch nahi jantha kon kon hai tumari family mei

Aj:ma papa bai and babhi

Guddu:smiles sab tume bahuth pyaar karthi hogi hai haina

Aj:ha bahuth

They hear Durga and Lakshmi ‘s voice

Kya hum andar asakthi hai.......

Guddu:ji ayiyena Durga bahu Lakshmi bahu

Durga:aj apko dekkar hum bahuth kush hai

Lakshmi:ha aj ap vapas agaya huna ab is gar ki roshni bhi vapas augi avinash papa jo andagar is gar mei failaya ap use fur karugi hume barosa hai

Durga:hame tho yakeen nahi horahi hai ki hum fir se apko dek rahi hu mei me kishore ji vardan rahul ko informe kiya hai vo abhi athe hogi

Lakshmi hug him akshat gets shocked ab yeh kya hai (here aj have beautiful relationship with his bahu’s and all Durga Lakshmi is more friendly with him)

Lakshmi started to cry hame abhi bhi yakeen nahi horahi aj ki ap vapas aya

Durga also hug him

Durga:aj apki favorite dish banaya apki tharah tast nahi hogi par hum koshish kiya hai aj hum chalthe hai ab apdono romance kariye they smiled and leave

Akshat is in shock what is happening

Aj:yaham bahu’s saru ko hug kartha hai yeh kon sa Reethi rivas hai mei ne tho suna hai blessing Letha hai

Guddu laugh:jindal saab unhe bahu nahi dost jantha hai is liye vo ithna friendly behave kar rahi hai is gar ko aj sab jindal saab ko yaad bhi isliye this kartha hai

Kishore vardan and rahul came they also hug aj

Kishor:yakeen hu nahi horahi ki ap hamare samne kada hai they hug him crying

Avinash:ab ithna kyun pyaar har Sarahi hu vo tumlogo ki dad nahi mei hu

They get angry

Vardan:janam dene se koyi baap nahi bansaktha

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome

Aj ko bahot mehnat bkarni padegi

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Awesome update

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Teaser

He look at her face she look like a baby how cute she is

He look around wall is filled with his pics nooo her jindal Saab’s pics he so lucky to get her love he felt why ?????kyun muje bura lagrahi hai??????he once again look at her is I am falling for her??????nooo this can’t happend........

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Interesting teaser

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Part 9

Next day

Guddan woke up early akshat was still sleeping dadi came there

Dadi:lalla Guddan jaldi ship puja karna haina

Aj sleep broke by her words

Aj:ithni jaldi unda hai

Guddan smiles:jindal saab ise pehle ustharaf mera mathlab suraj ke pehle ....she smiles

Aj:what the hell is this tumara pathi ko apna bhi pasand nahi

Guddan:Vo sirf todo der sothi hai ab jaldi Karo pooja mei patt lena hai

They came downstairs after bath

Akshat saw everyone gathered in hall avinash try to take pooja tali dadi stop him

Dad:mera lalla vapas agaya hai aj vo or uski pathi karugi pooja dadi give aj thali aj take it Guddan and akshat started to do pooja Guddan’s Mind flashing abou her jindal saab how they used to pooja together a long tear escape from her eyes after pooja kishore vardan and Rahul goes towards aj tell him about business problem how much loss they have after avinash’ entery

Akshat:don’t worry kal sr mei office augi kal meeting hai share workers sr kehna kal mei augi or he look at avinash

Akshat:I hope ab ap meri restorat na aye

Ganga:aisa kyun bol rahi hu devarji ap

Avinash:yeh sab mera bhi tho hai akshat

Akshat:nahiii....yeh sab meine banaya hai sab mera hai ise katham karne nahi dugi mei apko

Ganga:damad ji apki bai sr bath kar rahi hai app

Akshat:muje patha hai or mei sab kuch chuki hu ab apki manmani nahi chalegi

Bahus’s And Guddan get happy

Dadi:lalla trek kehrahi hai avinash tumne lalla ki moujoodagi mei is gar ko narak banaya ab or nahi

Avinash and Ganga angrily goes fromthere

Dadi and bahu’s go to kithchen

Guddu:thankyou

Akshat:hm yeh 1 step hai ithni asani se vo har nahi manugi

Guddu:hm chalo mei khana banathi hu tu yaham bait

She goes from there

Akshat was roaming around he like this house he saw dadi babhus and Guddan who where in kitchen making dishes they where gossiping smiling he smiles looking at happy family they are not looking like saas and bahu’s they look like friends or sisters he understood how much they love each other he roam around he saw kishore vardan and rahul who where pulling eachothers leg and smiling he look at them they do him call him

Kishore:aj yaham baitona he sit with them

They all chat long time their chat disturbed by guddan’s voice who call them for breakfast they eat breakfast after sometime akshat saw Guddan resting her pillow on bed post he look at her face how beautiful she look he thought he look around the room which have filled with his and guddan’s pic.....nooo her and her her jindal Saab’s pic how happy they are he felt bad thinking it’s not him who is with her why iam feeling bad???is she started to attack her noo this can’t happend she is affecting him but why???he look at akshat’s pic

Aj:you are lucky who got her life ...she is also luckiest who got a loving hubby you are not only loving hubby you are a grate human thats why everyone love you so much then why you left all of them???

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#28

Awesome

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