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Posted: 4 years ago

Heyaa everyone...😃

Sorry for being late.....

Missed me??😛

If not...its okay...but i m back with the sneak peak of...second last part of this ff...and i m really feeling nostalgic...as my fisrt ever piece of writing is soon going to end...i will miss this ff a lot...who else would..pls raise ur hand...??

Chlo now enough of my bakwaas...lets move to the writing...

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Sneaky....


Skip to 5 yrs...


"Papaa mere baal baandh do... " Requested a 5 yr girl...


"Nahi papa phle mere shoes... Baandhdo... " Requested a boy of 5....


"He bhagwaan aisa kyu kiya tune... " Akshat wiped his freshly formed set of tears... And first tied the laces... And followed by the hairs..


"Mumma hume chodh kr kyu chalii gyii?? " Aksed aryan crying.... To which akshat just hugged him...


"Haan papa aaj agr mumma hoti to aisaa nhi hotaa ... "Cried both the twins hugging their father...


" Beta shayad bhagwaan jo yhi manzoor tha.... Meri guddan.... " Cried trio in each others embrace....

Edited by Viditian1 - 4 years ago
Mishti24 thumbnail
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Posted: 4 years ago

I am gonna miss this story its one of my favourite

Continue writing even after this

And yes will waitt for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

hey dear how r u after so long u are updating.and the sneak peak seems intresting but why sad ending i think there is some twist write ? its gona end soon and its one of my most favourate ffs i read it again and ain but plz continue ur writings and stories dont stop.ok take care stay safe stay home.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Heyyaa everyone...

First of all a hearty sorru for all who missed my ff....

But now i m back with the updates...

So lets see...oops read😉

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Jindal bhawan...

5 years skip.....


"Guddan aaj 15 din ho gye tumhe gye huye.... Pls vapis aa jaavo... " Akshat said while standing in front of her portrait.... "Pls aa javo... Bache bhi chote hai.... Tumhare bina rehne ki aadat nhi hai inhe.... Mujse to ab sambhala bhi nhi jaa rha indono ko.... "He ended up with tears....


" Papa" He turned to see aryan standing there at the door.... He quickly rubbed his eyes...and opened his arms for him...


The little kid jumped on his father.... Nd asked...


"Papa mumma kyu chalii gyi... "


"Mera bacha... " This was only he was able to say at the moment... As tears gathered his eyes....


"Papa meri show lace baandh do... "Aryan aksed.... And he put him down....


" Bacha ready ho aap schl k liye... "


"Haan papa bss laces bandhne nhi aate... Phle bumma baandhti thi.... "And with that akshat tied his laces...


"Mumma ko bulao naa" They heard aksjara speaking... Who entered with frown on her face at the same time holding comb in one hand and messed hairs in other hand....


"Kya hua angel... "


"Papa mere baal.... "


"Arey papa hai naaa vo bna dengey aapke baal... " Akshat chipped...


"Nahi bilkul nahi.... Kl banaye the baal aapne.... Tofirst period mei hi khul gye... "


"Acha to lakshmi bahu nahi vo laksh ko sambhal rhi hongi... Aapdurga bahu se keh do... "


"Haan rhik hai... " And with that little girl turned back to leave but returned back...


"Papa mumma kb aayengiii.... Merko mumma pass jana hai... "And with that she started crying....


Both the mens unable to control themselves hugged her and also started crying....


" Lalla... Bachoo kyu ro rhe hooo"dadi aksed on entering the room....


"Maa vo guddann" He sobbed...


"Lalla vo to bache hai tu kyu bacha bna hua haii aise kaise chalega agr tu aise royega.... Bacho ko kon sambhalega akshat.... "


"Haan maa pr guddan ki yaad aa rhi h... "


"Lalla aise kaose chalegaa.... Mayke hi to gyi haii vo... Pr yaad to merko bhi aa rhi hai.... Inn dono k hone k baad ohli baar hai jb guddan ne inhe kahi akela chodha hai... "


"Hn maa"


"Haan... " And she left...


He was going to say further but his fone rang...


Fone convo...


"Guddan.... Kaisiho.... Thik ho tum.... Bacheidhar bhaut yaad kr rhe hai rumhe aur vaise bhi inke exams aaj khatam hai to aaj aa rhe hai hum... Vaha... " He went im a breathe....


"Haan jindal saab hum thik hai ....vahan kaise hao sab.... Aur hum bhi bavho ko bhauy yaad kr rhe hai.... Auraaj aap roye to nhi naa haan aaiyr hum bhi wait kr rhe hai bacho kaa. " She answered from. The other side...


"Haan yr lo bacho se baat kto... "And gavr them fone...


" Mumma.... "


"Mera bachaa... Kaisa hai.... Laddooo.... "


"Mumma mai thik hu.... Aul silky bhi thik hai.... Papa lo lhe hai... Hum aapko yaad kl lhe hai.... Papa se silky k baal bhi nhi bhaandhe jaate... "He completed...


"Haan mumma hum aapko yaad mr rhe hai.... " Slky overtook the fone and put it on speaker...and started....


"Silku beta mumma bhi aap sb ko bhaut yaad kr rhi hai.... Aur laksh aur harshi kaise hai?? "


"Mumma sb thik hai.... Laksh bhaut naughty ho gya hai... Aur harshi bhi bhaut shaitaan ho gyi hai...aur adirant kaisa hai...... "


"Achaa hai aapko yaad krta hai...aur viditi didi bhi...acha aap aao jldi se aajj aur mill lo dono se...pr abhi aap dono... Baaki sb ko tang to nahi ma krte.... "


"No mumma hum. Goodbabies hai... "Aryan said...


"Yes my babies.. Acha chlo papa ko fone do aur aap schl jaao aur all the best aaj ke liye... "


"Thank u mumma... "The kids chipped and handed the fone to akshat... And went downstairs....the vouple soom engrossed over their lovey dovey talks...


Well confused no??

The 5 years with kids was a bliss... Jindal bhawan welcomed two other cuties after their birth.... Durga gavr birth to a baby girl whom was named as harshita... And lakshmi gave a birth to a boy and named laksh...


Harsji was now 4 and laksh was 1 year old....


Vikrant and aditi welcomed their cute baby boy adirant... Who was only months elder to the twins.... And was now 5 and half... Viditi was noe 10...


Thus everyone had a beautiful life due to bundles of joy... Who had never failed to make everyone smile.... And to add happiness revati and angad are soon to be tied in a marital bond.... Hence guddan had went to her maternal house which was now in delhi....... But due to exams kids had to stay in indore along with father jindal.... Butas u saw... How miserably theu all passd to survive witjout guddan....


Well. This was the jindals.... 😳


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So this is it for the chapter... I know its a bit short so but i had to show tje anvatis marriage in next chapter... So had to end here only... As the next chappy would be somehow hot😳☺️as last chapter....

So sorry for getting late everyone....

But their would be romance in the next chapy... ☺️ stay tuned... 😉


Btw raise ur hands who thought guddan is dead and a sad ending😆 pls do share ur views🤗tjrougj comments... 😃

Love

Shaina❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
part updated dear😉
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti24

I am gonna miss this story its one of my favourite

Continue writing even after this

And yes will waitt for update

awwwieeee 😭 *khushi k ansu* thanksdear fkr ur pyaare pyaare comments i m really happy that its one of ur fav story.... Readingthese comments make my hardwork payss off....

Will write stories... But on wattpad... Itsa bit diff to get them here also....


Part updated dear😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: smanisha

hey dear how r u after so long u are updating.and the sneak peak seems intresting but why sad ending i think there is some twist write ? its gona end soon and its one of my most favourate ffs i read it again and ain but plz continue ur writings and stories dont stop.ok take care stay safe stay home.

heya dear... Glad to know that u liked my writings.... Thankssoo much for ur payare pyaare comments.... Part is updated... Plscheck the mystery... 😉

Will wrute more stories... But on wattpad... I m not sure that i would write here also😭.... Butu can read my stories on wattpad....

Thanks again...

And yeah... Stay home stay safe... ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

I thought it's a sad ending but u r naughty dear pls update next part soon😉😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

heya dear... Glad to know that u liked my writings.... Thankssoo much for ur payare pyaare comments.... Part is updated... Plscheck the mystery... 😉

Will wrute more stories... But on wattpad... I m not sure that i would write here also😭.... Butu can read my stories on wattpad....

Thanks again...

And yeah... Stay home stay safe... ❤️

yaar wt an update it was so cutee and suspense of guddan dead it was funny to me maine toh socha guddan dead.really and it was so cute and amazing.funny was senior jindal also crying wlth junior jindals.''waise jindalsaab pheli bar i think guddu se dur hai nai ?''and offcourse iwill pakka read ur stories on wattpad.continue soon with next part jaldi update karna.ok stay safe.
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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi ,

Miss your story

After long time you updated your story ,



When I read teaser and aj and children crying i think it's some sad turn of your story and also shoking what happens but as usual you gave a dhamekedar surprise 👏

It's really funny and unbelievable akshar jindle cried lile a child because just his wife goes to her mayka 😉

It's happens only your story 🥳

Next part update soon

Add some fun takda with romance


Stay home stay safe

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