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Posted: 4 years ago

Hii everyone🤗

Happy republic day...jai hind

So i m back with the 3rd last chapter of my ff....

So lets see did u liked it??

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CHAPTER 31...

Guddan went to the kitchen as to help her dils....but ....


"Arey sasu ma....aap yaha kyu aaye??"


Asked all three of them in unison....


Yes all three...


Well a lot changed in these couple of months...

Her bahus were her best friend...guddan didnt took a lot much time to change durga and saru's mind...

Well they were now bester friends...and not only guddan was pregnant but durga was also expecting for her first...hence...


"Arey arey durga ji hum to aapko hi elene aye the...aap bhi to maa ban ne wali hai...aur apka to 3rd month hai...apko careful rhna chaiye"

It was all fairytale....yes a fairytale...offcourse fairytale do exist when u have such a cute and caring family...a protective brother....and a carong husband....its a bliss....


Guddan was now almost 9 months pregnant...her due date was near...hence everyone in the house only had one name on the mouth...everyone was super excited...for new additions in the family....

She still remember the day when she went for her first sonography with akshat...


.he was in tears...and their joy just doubled when they came to know they are going to welcome twins in their family....everyone was dancing happily...


Could life be happier than this???for her the answer is no...a big NO....


She could not even imagine any singke breathe without her husband and her familu....they were her life lines.....and now the twins...were added...


How perfectly akshat handled her every moodswing...and how perfectly he tacked every tantrums of her....she even forget the count when she had threw him out of her room....and he had to sleep in hall....


She was blessed....


And everytime she glance at her family it always left her with tears....


"Arey guddan fir ro rhi ho tum" Akshat aksed while removing fhe teardrops...


"Ye to bass khushi ke aansu hai..." She replied while hugging him...


"Haan to muje tab bhi ye ansu nahi chahiye...muje silky aur laddoo to rotlu nahi banana..." He ciped while hugging her back...but careful enough to not hurt her belly...


He knelt down and kissed her full sized grown belly...meanwhile she was again in tears....

But suddenly her happiness changed into pain...she kmew it was the time ....she clutched her belly...and...


"Aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" She screamed at the top of her voice...thus grabbing evryone s attention...


"Kya hua guddan..." He was confused by sudden turn of events....


"Aah....jind...jjnda....saa....hospitallll...caarrrr nikalllooo" She managed to utter these ....


He imidiately took out car...and carrued her in his arms followed by dadi...lakshmi....amd evryone else...


"Lalla jdli kr...." She shouted while massaging guddan


"Haan maa" He accelerated the car...


"Plz jaldi kriye ...aj" Lakshmi asked almost panickibg...


They reached hospital and guddan was rushed to ot...meanwhile muttering curses for akshat at top of ber voice....


"Jindal....san teri vajah se hua hai...." She shouted....and everyone present there had amusing expression on thier faces...expect him...who had embarressed expression...

She was taken in the ot...while he was left standing outside....in tension....almost after 15 doctor came outside running to him...he was confused...operation jaldi nahi ho gya...?? He thought...and rushed to doctor...


"Kya hua..." He was stopped in the middle by the doc..


"Delhiye mr. Jindal...we need u in...mrs. Jindal is not at all responding us...she is crying meanwhile doing all the weird things..." The doc chipped terribly...


"Weird things....??"


"Yes...first of all she is not ready to take injections...and secondly she just scratched one of the nurse who tried to control her...and kicked one compounder that too where the sun never rises...and all in that she just cursing you...."

As soo as the doc completed his sentence...everyone broke into fits of laughter....on guddan who was bit at all behaving normal....even at this time....


Offcourse no doubt she is guddan!!


Akshat rushed in the ot...only to find everyone at the corner of the room....and guddan muttering curses .


"Jindal sab teri vajah se hua hai....sab....ek baar bahar aane de haath nahi lagane dungi....dekh lena..." She shouted and he was scared as hell... But still he dared to go near him..and kissed her forehead..well that was enough to calme her a bit...he held her hand...and said...


"Haan baby..but abhi plz push...and try to calm urself...u have to do this.."he cipped while kissing her forehaed again and again...


"Nahi ho rha jindal saab bahut dard ho rha ha..." She was red by this this...

"Nahi guddan...tumhe ye krna hoga...for me...for u...for silky...for ladoo...for us....remember u r my guddan...jisse san ho pta hai...to tumne aaj kaise kaha ki humse nahi ho pa rha...u have to do this...prove it u r my guddan jisse sab ho pata hai...do it....guddan...jaan...." And with that....


The doctor rushed to her...and she tried and finally after almost two hours....she laid fully exhausted on thebed...with no energy left...but only after hearing the cries...of her life lines...


"Its a boy...." The dictor exclaimed....givong the husband and wife tears of ecastacy...



"Its a girl....." He said after a couple of moments...was enough to double their bliss....he lovingly kissed her forehead..while she closed her eyes...being totally exhausted...with no energy left...


The doc left the room givinv privacy to the couple...


"I love you guddan..." He was about to kiss her...when...


"Ohh sorry sorry..." Said virkant....closing his eyes....and agian moving out ...while his voice was not at all sorry...


"Its ok..." He forced a smile...but still he cannot stop himself grinning widely while lookibg at the bundlw of the joys...wrapped in blue and pink cloth....

He picked the girl and kissed her forehead...and gave boy to her...


"She is soo tiny...amd pink..." He exclaimed...

While she smiled...


"Haan...she hes got mine eyes...guddanexclaimed...while adoring her prince...


" Yups...and see her eyes amd nose totally like me..." He chipped...


"Haan..."


Tears fell dowm from his eyes when the lil girl held his finger in his sleep..and smiled...at him...the feeling of fatherhood...the feeling of holding ur felsh in ur hand is something acmnit be described in words....he was now feeling on top of the world...he thanked millions...no...billions...no....trillions...no infinity time to god for sending guddan in his life...and givibg him such a bundle of joy...and making his lfe a livibg heaven....


"Jindal saab kaha lho gye..."


"Hum...kahi nahi....vaise ye btao...tum ab muje apne pass nahi aane dogi??" He aksed with sheer naughtiness in his eyes...


"Dhat...lya aap bji...." She was red by now...


"Gudiya..." Vik amd veryone exclaimed while lookinh at her....

Evryone came inside...meanwhile showering the family their love and wishes.....and the cuties just smiled when ever anyone kissed their forehead..making rest of them awwwww!!!


Everyone had a gala time while talking and kissing the munchkins...when viditi asked...


"Bua inka kya naam hai??"


"Akshara and aryan" Said bith the newly been parents in unison...thus again giving a kodak momemt.....

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This was it for last 3rd chapter of the ff....



So this is it for the chaoter...and thsi chaoter is left with 2 more parts...and after that with epilogue....



Plz guys doo share ur views..and vote....shower ur love on this cahpter as always...hiw was it...plz doo share guys....😃


Love ❤️

Shaina❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti24

hum intezaar krenge ,but m expecting a long one😊

chaoter up dear...plz do share ur views...long hai ya nahk plz aap hi decide kriye😆 well koshish to hai...long ki....😆
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: smanisha

thanku so much dear for replying no problem dear we will wait

chapter up dear...plz do share ur precious views on the chapter...and shower ur love...😃if u liked it😃
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Hlo everyone.....was getting bored due to no akshan on the weekends....thought of writing something and ended up writing this.....so without further this and thats....here we go...

Akshat was trying to do something on his laptop..sitting on sofa kept in their room....but all his thoughts were acquired by just one person....he lifted his head only to find her still unconsciuos.....and again his mind occupied the thoughts....

Akshat's pov...

Thank god....guddan thik h...mai darr hi gya tha.......kya zarurat thi....muje bachane k liye apni jaan jokhim mei dalne ki....agar use kuch ho jata to....kya zarurat thi aagey aane ki jb rocky ne muje marne k liye goli chalayi thi...wo to shukr h goli sirf ise chu kr nikli thi....agar aaj guddan ko kuch ho jata to mai apne aap ko kbi maaf nhi kr pata.......sb kuch hua hi meri wajah se h....na hi mai guddan ki zid maanta angad ko ghr pr rkhne ki ....na hi wo muje kidnap krta...na guddan ko koi takleef hoti.....aur jb thik ho hi gya tha to kyo rocky bhaga jail se .....kyo meri guddan ko jhutha fone call krke bulaya khandar k pass....vo to sahi samay pr mai uth gya nhi go aaj ....nhi....ab uske bina rhna akshat jindal se na ho paega......pta nhi konsa rishta h hmara.....ladte jhagadte.....pta hi nhi chla ki kb vo mere liye sirf ek bojh se...meri patni ban gai...aur aaj jb maine usko sbke saamne mangalsutra pehnaya to aisa lga ki....pta nhi kya h ye ...pr jb mangalsutra pehnane k baad lga ki sb thik h to.............

Flashback........

Everything got settled....they rescued angad from rocky.....given angad and saru bahu one chance more......and the most important....he accepted her wholeheartedly as his wife.....they both were on the cloud nine after hearing the true promises made by each other ........... Everyone went to their respective rooms......he gifted her data pack....but the first call she recieved after recharging her fone ....non of them knew would be soo dangerous....she pickwd up the call....and just ran outside the house....getting afraid he also followed her car in his car....only to see her car getting stopped in front of an old khander....she get off the car ...so he...only to see rocky coming out of the khander.. He escaped from the jail so.he called her ........he knew why....after a fiasco.....getting fed up rocky fired the bullet to shoot akshat...but she was she...she came in front and bullet shot her...she was quickly takent to hospital whereas police arrived and caught him again...but the tjing which was bothering him now was his wife....doctors did their job..and told him the bullet just went touchnig her and hv dressed her small wound.....she was perfevtly fine ...thing was that she just got an anxiety attack...so she got fainted.........she was brought back home.....but she was still unconcious.....he made her sleep on the bed..and settled himself on sofa to work..but ended up.....by (akshats pov 😃)

Flashback over....

Pov continued...

Har baar khatre mei meri guddan ka ana hi myo jaruri hota h...kyo problems uski life se khatam nhi ho jati...agar problems uski life se khatam nhi ho skti to bhagwan uske hissa ka har dukh ..har takleef muje de do....pta nhi kyo nhi dwkh pata hu guddan ko toot te hue..rote hue..kyo ..kya ho rha h muje.......kuch smajh nhi aa rha........

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How was that.....well this was not ghe first chapter this was just a pov......which i thouvht would be necessary for the story line.....chapter 1 would be updated tonight......

Plz share ur precious views.....and igonre the typos😃...luv ...................viditian aka shaina❤️

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INDEX :

PROLOGUE...PG 1

CHAPTER1...PG 2

CHAPTER2...PG 4

CHAPTER3...PG5

CHAPTER4...PG7

CHAPTER5...PG8

CHAPTER6...PG10

CHAPTER7...PG12

CHAPTER8...PG15

CHAPTER9...PG17

CHAPTER10...PG19

CHAPTER11...PG21

CHAPTER12...PG 23

CHAPTER13...PG 25

CHAPTER14...PG 27

CHAPTER15...PG 29

CHAPTER16...PG 31

CHAPTER17...PG 33

CHAPTER 18...PG 35

CHAPTER19...PG37

CHAPTER 20...PG39

CHAPTER 21...PG42

CHAPTER 22...PG44

CHAPTER23...PG46

CHAPTER24...PG47

CHAPTER25...PG 50

CHAPTER26...PG 52

CHAPTER 27...PG 55

CHAPTER 28...PG 57

CHAPTER 29...PG 60

CHAPTER 30...PG 64

CHAPTER 31...PG 66

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice one

Plz continue soon

Nd if possibke plz do write another story after this

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Posted: 4 years ago

Simply in love with the way you write,outstanding 👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Plz do update ,it has been soooo loooonggggg

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti24

Nice one

Plz continue soon

Nd if possibke plz do write another story after this

Thanks dear🤗

Will update it today...😃

Yes i will start with another story....really soon...but not here....it will be posted on wattpad...u can read my new story there😃

P. S. Sorry for late reply😔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sangitaluthra

Simply in love with the way you write,outstanding 👏👏

thanks dear❤️❤️

I m overwhelmed🤗🤗

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