YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69) - Page 17

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Congrats for becoming senior member shaina🥳

So treat to banta hai next part v aaj hi update krdo plz😛

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thanksss..for the wishes.❤️..chlo fir isi khushi mei aapko treat☺️..will update one more part today..😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Soo..i m back..really fast ..i guess...with another chapter...here we go!!

CHAPTER 12..

(THE CHAPTER STARTS WHEN..BUA G CHALLENGED GUDDAN FOR MANGO MILKSHAKES COMPETITION)

"Ye b kahi natak to nhi??..nhi h to chlo bnate h aamrass..lekin do team hongi..ek teri team..ek merii.."

"Bua g hmara aur apka aapas ka matbhed h..isme bacho k liye kiye jane wale nek kaam nhi aane chahiye"

"Nhi guddan..hmko harao..aur saabit kr do...skhti nhi..dosti hi achi h..."gosh what an adamant she was..

Guddan was about to say something when..akshat interrupted

" Sahi keh rhi h bua g....agar nek kaam krte hue tunhe apni baat rkhne ka mauka mill rha hto tumhe ye chunauti maan leni chahiye...aur mai iss mei tumhare saath hu gudda" Said he ..leaving a shocked guddan behind...how could he..how could he just..give affirmation to an adamant talk of bua g..she never thought that he would go with bua g...leaving her..she was soooo angry with him that...

(AKSHAT ENTRRS HIS ROOM TO GET A BIGGGG SHOCK)

"Ye kya kr hi ho..tum achi tarah jaanti ho muje ye sab pasand nhi h"..gosh what was god thinking while making this antique piece..she found her murdering the innocent pillows...then came the turn to tge flower vase..then the plates...well he felt like as if cbi raid was tgier....well he knew why..her cute petite guddan was in queen if jhansis mood..

But for now he needed to calm her down..so....he just hold her..made her face him..and put his rough lips on hers...well she was in anger...as if tge way she was kissing him was any proof..but guddan !!oh guddan!!how could she be angry on her jindal saab..and started to respond..when he felt her calming down..he broke tge kiss only to attack on her neck. She wanted to speak to him but he was in no mood to speak. And started giving open mouth kisses to her . After some time..he compossed himself.and made her understand . Well she found herselg a fool who thought that he was not with her.

(GUDDAN PREPARING MILKSHAKE..AKHSAT CONES WITH MANGO IN THE KITCHEN)

"aam itni badi fan ho kar tumne abi tk ek bi aam nhi khaya" Said he.

"Nhi jindal saab abi nbi...baad mei kha lenge"

But he was he..he made her finish the mango with his hands.

It was when he noticed the mango still on her lower lip. To help her to remove that he started licking her lower lip..soo tasty..he could taste mango very well. He loved mango sunce childhood bht now he pledged to eat mango like this always..he tasted mango..biting..sucking..kissing..taking her in battle of tongues..

"Lalla" This was when he got separated..

(GUDDAN SERVES MANGO SHAKE IN ORPHANAGE)

(THEY RETURN HOME)

"thanku guddan aaj tumharu vajah se....he gonna complete the sentnce when he found her using his trick on him to make her shut.

She kissed him..but he was he..took away the lead and took her in bed..and slept peacefully...


Guess this was a bit short ..but it was needed..just to make my some fav.scenes in show..in my way..hope u all liked it...olz share ur views...promise next oart would be a longer one..❤️ and would surely uodate tom..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Man av bhara nhi😃

Mereko next part bhi jaldi chahiye is ss ka ek ek chap main 3-4 baar parh liya hai😈

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Man av bhara nhi😃

Mereko next part bhi jaldi chahiye is ss ka ek ek chap main 3-4 baar parh liya hai😈

awwwww....just overwhelmed by ur sweeet comments..........kl pakka update kr dungi..along with a surprise of romance...❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago

awesome

thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: nahtani88

awesome

thanks for the pm

thanks...will cont soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
guddan is indeed an antique piece 🤣only made for her jindal saab☺️
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