YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69) - Page 11

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Hey i m back....

CHAPTER 8

(Next morning guddan woke up first...andand went to washroom...after that akshat woke up and wemt to washroom...and after bath ..he opened the door...only to find one cute petite guddan..struggling witb her pallu..).(same as in show)

He came out and made her face him...all while she was blabbering that how men have made their clothing as per thier choice...but womens..poor womens!!..

Blabbering..and blabbering..and blabbering...this cont.so akshat out of choices just smashed his lips on hers to make her silent..with this a battle started..pallu just dropped at the floor and akshat attacked the newly revealed area starting from her lips..moving down her neck..going further to shoulders..he was tasting her in every possible way he liked the taste of her shoulders that he bite that corner..making her moan..al tge while guddan just start to open his shirt to participate..

But before she could do anything further..

"Guddan darwaza kholo..bua g tumhe neeche bula rhi h"

The couple who was in other worls just came out by durga bahus voice..

Unable to speak..breathing heavily she tried to.."ji dur..ga... ba....hu hm..m aate h..h abi"

(All tge while aj just back hugged her and started nipping her ears...jawline..neck..making her task more difficult)

"Chodiye na.."

"Chod dunga...pr mann abi bhara nhi"..

" Apka mann to kbi nhi bharta"said she coming out of his iron grip..and walking out ..

"Arey ruko..phele khud ko dekh to lo ..aise jaogi??"

(She looks in the mirror..her lipstick smuged..hairs ruffked..swollen lips..and what not she made herself presentable..and finally went out)

"Pati ko dost nhi pati ki tarah rkhte h"

"Pati hi to ek patni ka sabse acha dost hota h.."

(Well if anyone would hear their conversation would feel as if "arthashastra" Of maha pandits is going on..)

(Akshat comes down)

"Maa woh kl hmko virohi ki shadi mei jana h "

"Arey wah..sb chlenge "

"Bhabi aap bhi.."

"Didi hm bi chlenge"

"To thik h fir..chlo guddan hm chlte h restrau"

..all the day wemt like this..with akshan mostly busy with themselves..and guddan humiliated by bua g..but not to fear when akshat is here...

(NEXT DAY)

(MORNING)

"guddan...lalla..darwaza kholo.."

"Arey yarr..kon aa gya ab..koi muje chain se rhne hi nhi deta" Said aj being fed up

Leaving a blushing guddan back..he went to open tge door..

"Haan maa"

"Chlo acha h tum ready ho..aaj shadi pr bi to jana h"

"Haan..ap log chahilye hm abi aate h"

...they all leave for venue..

Virohi were looking damn stunning..everone went there and wished them..

After having a giggling and heartful chat with Arohi she finally left for searching akshat.Before she could go a distance she saw a man in his suit coming near her.

"Hi main Ayaan hoon and aap bahut beautiful hain...kya main iss beauty ka naam jaan sakta hoon??"guddan knew flirting was a normal thing in marriages...but before she could brush him off she felt strong arms gripping her waist in a protective gesture and then she recognized the voice.

"Yeh guddan hain...meri beautiful wife."guddan was shocked but was thankful when she saw the Ayaan literally runnig away.

Before she could say something akshat again took her with him to congratulate Virohi.

He was just going towards her aftrr finishing a chat with virat her when he found that Ayaan coming close to his guddan.He was happy though that he had shown the men that she was off limits.

Soon it was announced that there was going to be a couple dance.Romantic song started playing and Virohi looked damn cute.They were joined by couples. Akshat turned around towards guddan just to find a hand in front of her and a voice asking her to dance.

"Kya mein aapke saath dance kar sakta hoon??"

Akshat could never forget that voice...it had haunted him in the craziest of nightmares.

"Majnu tu yahan???"

"Haan Virat mera dost hai...waise tumne jawab nahi diya."

"Haan"guddan wouldnt have commited this mistake if she would have seen the pure rage in akshats eyes.

(IN THE DANCE FLOOR)

"Toh finally tumne Neha ko propose kar diya!!"guddan had got the news from Neha...her friend...that majnu had proposed her.

"Haan jab yeh realize hua ki woh meri zindagi hai...toh use apna sab kuch bana diya."majnu replied sincierly

"Aww thats cute.."She was geniunly happy for them.

"Well cute toh hai...per lagta hai soon yahan kuch not soo cute hone wala hai."chuckled majnu.

"Matlab???"She didnt get it what he was speaking about.

"Zara apne jindal saab ko toh dekhiye."with that mahnu turned gyddan and she was finally able to see the bloodshed eyes of akshat with pure rage.The man didnt need to scream...his calm anger was far more scary.She had to confess that She was quiet terrified with his angry expression.Shit!She hadnt informed akshat about majnu engagement.

The song ended and akshat moved towards guddan.He had never been this angry in his life.He had to show the world...especially guddani...That she was his and only his.He grabbed guddans hand and started walking out of the hall.

Guddan didnt speak anything.It was better to be quiet...akshat looked hell angry.It started raining and soon both were drenched.They finally reached the car and he made her sit and started driving.

Guddan could feel his anger with the way his muscles were tense and the way he drove the car.She was scared.She didnt know where he was taking her.But she knew he would never hurt her.

They finally reached jindal bhawan.

NEXT:CHAPTER 9"YOU ARE MINE...GUDDAN"

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