YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69)

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Hlo everyone.....was getting bored due to no akshan on the weekends....thought of writing something and ended up writing this.....so without further this and thats....here we go...

Akshat was trying to do something on his laptop..sitting on sofa kept in their room....but all his thoughts were acquired by just one person....he lifted his head only to find her still unconsciuos.....and again his mind occupied the thoughts....

Akshat's pov...

Thank god....guddan thik h...mai darr hi gya tha.......kya zarurat thi....muje bachane k liye apni jaan jokhim mei dalne ki....agar use kuch ho jata to....kya zarurat thi aagey aane ki jb rocky ne muje marne k liye goli chalayi thi...wo to shukr h goli sirf ise chu kr nikli thi....agar aaj guddan ko kuch ho jata to mai apne aap ko kbi maaf nhi kr pata.......sb kuch hua hi meri wajah se h....na hi mai guddan ki zid maanta angad ko ghr pr rkhne ki ....na hi wo muje kidnap krta...na guddan ko koi takleef hoti.....aur jb thik ho hi gya tha to kyo rocky bhaga jail se .....kyo meri guddan ko jhutha fone call krke bulaya khandar k pass....vo to sahi samay pr mai uth gya nhi go aaj ....nhi....ab uske bina rhna akshat jindal se na ho paega......pta nhi konsa rishta h hmara.....ladte jhagadte.....pta hi nhi chla ki kb vo mere liye sirf ek bojh se...meri patni ban gai...aur aaj jb maine usko sbke saamne mangalsutra pehnaya to aisa lga ki....pta nhi kya h ye ...pr jb mangalsutra pehnane k baad lga ki sb thik h to.............

Flashback........

Everything got settled....they rescued angad from rocky.....given angad and saru bahu one chance more......and the most important....he accepted her wholeheartedly as his wife.....they both were on the cloud nine after hearing the true promises made by each other ........... Everyone went to their respective rooms......he gifted her data pack....but the first call she recieved after recharging her fone ....non of them knew would be soo dangerous....she pickwd up the call....and just ran outside the house....getting afraid he also followed her car in his car....only to see her car getting stopped in front of an old khander....she get off the car ...so he...only to see rocky coming out of the khander.. He escaped from the jail so.he called her ........he knew why....after a fiasco.....getting fed up rocky fired the bullet to shoot akshat...but she was she...she came in front and bullet shot her...she was quickly takent to hospital whereas police arrived and caught him again...but the tjing which was bothering him now was his wife....doctors did their job..and told him the bullet just went touchnig her and hv dressed her small wound.....she was perfevtly fine ...thing was that she just got an anxiety attack...so she got fainted.........she was brought back home.....but she was still unconcious.....he made her sleep on the bed..and settled himself on sofa to work..but ended up.....by (akshats pov 😃)

Flashback over....

Pov continued...

Har baar khatre mei meri guddan ka ana hi myo jaruri hota h...kyo problems uski life se khatam nhi ho jati...agar problems uski life se khatam nhi ho skti to bhagwan uske hissa ka har dukh ..har takleef muje de do....pta nhi kyo nhi dwkh pata hu guddan ko toot te hue..rote hue..kyo ..kya ho rha h muje.......kuch smajh nhi aa rha........

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How was that.....well this was not ghe first chapter this was just a pov......which i thouvht would be necessary for the story line.....chapter 1 would be updated tonight......

Plz share ur precious views.....and igonre the typos😃...luv ...................viditian aka shaina❤️

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INDEX :

PROLOGUE...PG 1

CHAPTER1...PG 2

CHAPTER2...PG 4

CHAPTER3...PG5

CHAPTER4...PG7

CHAPTER5...PG8

CHAPTER6...PG10

CHAPTER7...PG12

CHAPTER8...PG15

CHAPTER9...PG17

CHAPTER10...PG19

CHAPTER11...PG21

CHAPTER12...PG 23

CHAPTER13...PG 25

CHAPTER14...PG 27

CHAPTER15...PG 29

CHAPTER16...PG 31

CHAPTER17...PG 33

CHAPTER 18...PG 35

CHAPTER19...PG37

CHAPTER 20...PG39

CHAPTER 21...PG42

CHAPTER 22...PG44

CHAPTER23...PG46

CHAPTER24...PG47

CHAPTER25...PG 50

CHAPTER26...PG 52

CHAPTER 27...PG 55

CHAPTER 28...PG 57

CHAPTER 29...PG 60

CHAPTER 30...PG 64

CHAPTER 31...PG 66

CHAPTER32... PG69

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank u thank u Ye ts likhne ke liye main v bahut bore ho rhi thi

Will be waiting for the update

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thank u thank u Ye ts likhne ke liye main v bahut bore ho rhi thi

Will be waiting for the update

wlcm....its diff to cope up without akshan for two days....will uodate soon😃
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thanku...will surely uldate soon
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surely... will uodate soon
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Amazing

It 's different and nice

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Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Amazing

It 's different and nice

Update soon

thanku soo much...will update soo ...actually the work is in progress..hopefully will update till midnight😃
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Nice start

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice start

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Well this ts is two shots....for now....will think to make it ss or ff..as per the comments....so plz comment....and plz tell whether i should make its as ff ;ss or let it be ts only.........

Chapter1.....

"Jindal saab" his trance of deep thought was broken when he heard his name...he lift his head only to find guddan gaining conscious...and trying to wake up....

"'Guddan"saying so he went her and sat beside her and started carressing her hair 'koi ni tum safe ho, ghr pr ho...sb k saath'..

It killed him to see her in this state..so weak...tears ..shoulder dressed up due to small but injury...he sweard to punish rocky for this....but fir now he was just glad to find guddan near him...

"Guddan '" saying this he just hugged her...the hug brought a warmth to their hearts....the hug was of assurance to both of them that they are together...and brought sense of relief to both the hearts who have missed each other terribly since past few days.

She had never felt this much safe in any ones arms except her dad. Both the souls had faced a lot passed few weeks..for a second she just wanted to forget everything execpt the warmth of hug..suddenly she felt hands wrapped around her...which made her relieved and happy that he didnt pushed her away from him but was making her comfortable...

He also felt the same warmth...but he knew that she was way too weak..so he broke the hug and gave her orange juice to drink...after when he was assured that guddan was feeling well...he enquired what rocky just said to her...with this he could see her restlessness increasing....so he just decided to wrap up the topic..to make her comfortable..he continued '"chlo koi ni,tum thik ho aur kuch nhi chahiye"' ..

Listening this guddan lifted her head..only to find akshat soo close to her face.

Aj realised that he sitting quite close to guddan...with his hand on her cheek and her hand holding his wrist......he knew that he should move and maintain the mutual distance...but his hand didnt seemed to take the right signals...and started caressing her cheeks.

Guddan felt herself coming alive with the each caress of his . Every nerve didnt want comfort but wanted something she didnt had any idea . She was lost in akshats eyes and saw them darkening. Akshat saw guddans eyes darkening and her cheeks turning a good shade of red with each caress of his . He did not knew who moved first but he could feel guddans hot ,fresh and soft breath on his face now.

Akshat couldnt take it anymore and crushed his rough lips on her soft ones. The kiss brought a burst of life in each ones heart. It was a gentle kiss which soon turned out to be a passionate one with need and dominance.

Akshat loved every second of the kiss and as soon as he kissed her he grabed her by her waist and brought her on his laps and deepended the kiss..guddan had never felt so alive before and to her the world seemed to be vanishing and with this she forgot everything. She could feel her hands tangled in his hairs and her legs on yhe either side of akshats legs. She could feel akshat dominating her in the best possible way and then a shiver ran down her spine when she felt his hands travelling inside her kurta and tracing the smooth path of her back and feeling his warm and desire . She couldnt help but moan his name which only resulted in igniting his desire to have her.

Akshat was loving the kiss...the way her hands exploring his back and her fingers tangled in his wavy hairs and small passion filled breathing and moans of guddan . He was almost near to make her lie on bed and forget everything except him when he heard a knock on the door.

He broked the kiss and saw the passion filled eyes of guddan looking at him with confusion .

Guddan had no idea why he stopped until she herself heard the door knock.

"Guddan...lalla....mai andar aa jau......." Came the familiar voice of dadi..

Realisation dawned upon them ...and they soon realised what they had done... Guddan moved from his laps..and sat on the bed while he just stood up. They both were shock that they had crossed the line which they had build by mutual accord. He looked up at the mirror to find the shades of guddans lipstick on his lips and his hair all mushed up because of guddans hand . He set his hair and rubbed his lips finally to open the door...but he stopped in between looking up at the mirror to find guddans state..her mushed up hairs.. Swollen lips ..lipstick smuged and her cheeks blush..for a second he was lost in her ..how beautiful she was looking and was mesmerised by the sight in front of him..but then came back to the reality after hearing the knock. He knew he had to tell guddan to make herself presentable but the problem was she was not meeting his eyes.

Finally as if she had read his mind ..she looked at the mirror and quickly ran to washroom.

(Akshat opens the door and dadi gets in with slight curiosity on her face)

" Lalla itni der lagadi darwaza kholne mei....kya hua ...aur guddan kaha h?"

"Maa ..woh ...guddan washroom mei h....aur ..aur..mai so gya tha isliye door kholne mei der lg gai" Well he was not good at lying that too in front of dadi.. But thankful the old woman didnt caught up..

Well dadi knew that akshat was hiding something from him. she knew that akshat was not able to hide everything from her but akshat didnt know was that dadi saw slight lipstick mark on the corner of his lips..

NEXT: CHAPTER 2( probably the last chapter..depends on the comments..that what u guys want this to be a ts/ff/ss).....LIL FUNNY AHEAD......AND AHEM☺️

..plz comment how was that ..ignore the typos and tell me that what u guys want this to be an ts /ff/ ss .............till then...a very goodnight with akshan dream ....luv ........viditian❤️

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