~~ PunarVivaah~~ || Akshan FF || Last Part updated on pg 39 - Page 7

Part - 4

Engagement function has been over. Guests have been gone back to their homes. Only Guddan's family is there talking with Jindal family. Guddan is also with them. But AJ is very desperate to talk to Guddan but gharwale Guddan ko chhod hi nahi rahe.

AJ decides to message Guddan so that he could talk with her.

AJ(typing on phone)- Guddan, please mujhe kitchen mein aakar Milo.

Guddan's phone beeps and everyone starts looking at her.

Dadi- Guddan,Kya hua beta ?? Kiska message hai?

Guddan- Dadi wo.. woh kisi ka nahi bus aise hi. Hum bus abhi aate Hain kitchen se.

Guddan leaves for kitchen and everyone starts laughing at her shyness.

In kitchen

AJ is desperately waiting for Guddan

Guddan- Boliye, Jindal Saab kyaa baat karni hai aapko??

AJ hugs her tightly like there is no tomorrow. Guddan also reciprocates the hug.

AJ(still holding Guddan in his arms)- Main kabse tumahra wait Kar Raha tha aur tum ho ki aa hi nahi rahi thi. Pata hai kitna bechain ho Raha tha main tumse Milne ke liye. Par tumhe gharwalon se hi fursat nahi hai.

Guddan(in a teasing mood)- Arey Jindal Saab aap toh Bache hi ban Gaye Hain. Bahut ziddi ho Gaye Hain. Hum toh bus aa hi rahe the. Aisi bhi Kya bechaini,hum yahin toh Hain iss Ghar mein aapke paas hai. Agar kuch time gharwalon ke saath baith bhi Gaye toh Kya ho Gaya. Aapke paas toh Roz hi hote Hain 😉

AJ makes an irritated face and turns his face away from Guddan😆

Guddan- Arey jindal Saab ab humne aisa bhi Kya keh Diya Jo aapne mooh bana liya😉

AJ- Tumhe koi parwaah hi nahi hai Meri. Aur main yahaan tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi na dekhoon toh Marne wali haalat ho jaati hai Meri. Meri aankhein sirf tumhe dekhna chahti Hain.Tum kareeb na ho toh bechaini ho jaati aur jab tum paas hoti ho toh sab bhool jaata hoon. Par tumhe Kya,tum toh bus saara din daadi,Laxmi bahu,saru bahu karti rehti ho. Mera number toh pata nahi kab aata 😏.

Guddan is laughing secretly listening to his talks as he is looking in the opposite direction.

Guddan- Haaye Mera bacha😘,gussa ho Gaye humse. Achha boliye aapko manane ke liye Kya karein.

AJ gets excited listening this.

AJ- Jo main kahunga woh tum karogi😉.

Guddan- Aap Jo kahenge hum woh karenge.

AJ- Soch lo Guddan,baad mein mukarne nahi doonga.

Guddan- Soch liya,aap boliye.

AJ- So,kiss me right now.

Guddan gets shocked at his request and starts looking downwards due to shyness.

Guddan- Yeh kaisi wish hai,koi aa jaayega yahaan.

AJ- Guddan,tum ab apni baat se palat nahi sakti. You have to kiss me now.

Guddan- Par..., achha theek hai hum tyaar hain.

Guddan moves her face close to Akshat. Their lips are just inches apart. She is about to touch his lips and bang... Here comes Laxmi bahu clearing her throat so that both could come back to their senses.

Laxmi- AJ and saasu maa agar aap logo ka romance session over ho Gaya ho toh aap log baahar aayeinge,daadi ko koi zaroori baat karni hai.

Both get embarrassed and start looking here and there.

Laxmi- Chaliye na ab aap dono.

Guddan- Theek hai Laxmi bahu chalte Hain and she starts moving towards the door.

AJ gets sad as wish remained unfulfilled. But to his surprise , Guddan comes back to kitchen, pecks his lips and runs away.

AJ gets shocked but smiles at her gesture.

In the hall

Dadi- Arey Lalla aur Guddan tum dono itni der se Kya Kar rahe the kitchen mein??

Suddenly Laxmi bahu speaks, romance Kar rahe the dono aur Kya and chuckles.

Both AJ and Guddan looking at each other's face getting embarrassed.

Everyone starts laughing.

Dadi- Achha Lalla mujhe tum dono ko ek baat batani thi.

AJ- Kaunsi baat maa??

Dadi- Jaisa ki tum logon ko pata hi hai ki do din baad tum dono ki Shaadi hai,toh hum logon ne decide Kiya hai ki Guddan aaj hi bhushan ji aur kaushlaya ji ke saath apne maayke Chali jaayegi. Aur jab tak tum dono ki Shaadi nahi ho jaati,tum dono ek doosre se nahi miloge.

(AJ gets shocked )

AJ- Maa,yeh aap Kya keh rahi Hain?? Guddan ko maayke jaane ki Kya zaroorat hai. Aur waise bhi hum dono toh already Shaadi shuda Hain toh yeh sab formalities ki Kya zaroorat hai.

AJ (in mind) - Yeh gharwalon ka dimaag khraab ho Gaya hai Kya Jo Guddan ko mujhse door bhej rahe Hain. Yahaan mujhse ek pal uske bagair guzaarna mushkil hai aur yeh log poore 2 din ke liye uski bhej rahe Hain. 2 din Tak use naa dekha toh main toh zinda hi nahi reh paayunga,waise hi mar jaaunga.

Dadi- Kya hua Lalla,kin khyaalon mein kho Gaya ??

AJ(with a sad face)- Kuch nahi maa. Kya Guddan ko bhejna zaroori hai. I mean yeh saari rasmein toh yahaan par bhi toh ho sakti Hain na. Toh Guddan ko maayke bhejne ki Kya zaroorat?

Dadi- Lalla,jab sab kuch reeti riwaaz se ho Raha hai toh Shaadi bhi toh poore reeti riwaaz se hogi na aur riwaaz yahi hai ki Shaadi se pehle dulha aur dulhan ek doosre se nahi milte .

AJ(disheartened)- Theek hai maa ,jaisa aap theek samjhe.

Daadi- Guddan beta aisa Karo,tum apne kamre mein jaakar apna saamaan pack Kar lo ,kaafi der ho rahi hai.

Guddan- Ji daadi

Daadi- Daadi nahi ab se tum mujhe maa bulaogi

Guddan- Ji maa ji and goes to her room for packing.

AJ also follows her by excusing everyone.

In Akshan's room

Guddan is packing her stuff. AJ comes there and back hugs her.

AJ(placing his chin on her shoulder)- Guddan, please mat jao na. Main kaise rahunga tumahre Bina woh bhi do din ke liye. Main toh mar..

Guddan moves towards him and keeps her finger on his lips.

Guddan- Yeh aap kaisi baatein Kar rahe Hain Jindal Saab.Aainda aap aisa kuch nahi kahenge warna humse Bura koi nahi hoga. Aur sirf 2 din ki toh baat hai,2 din baad toh hum apne itne bade Bache ke pass waapis aa hi jaayeinge na. Aur maa ji ki baat bhi toh sahi hai na. Hume saare rituals follow karne chahiye. Isme hamari hi bhalai hai na.

AJ(with a heavy heart)- Okay jaisa tum kaho. Tum Jao apne papa ke Ghar,main reh loonga 2 din tumahre bagair. Saying this he hugs her tightly leaving no space between them. She also hugs him back. She pecks his forehead and says hum jaldi aa jaayeinge aapke paas and leaves the room.

Akshat stands there in his room. A lone tear rolls down from his eye.

AJ- Guddan,Maine tumhe keh toh Diya ki main tumahre Bina reh loonga par Sach baat toh yeh hai ki tumahre Bina rehna ab iss Akshat Jindal se na ho Paayega. And then he leaves his room and go downstairs.

Everyone is waiting for him as Gupta family is about to leave. Guddan takes dadi's blessing and goes with her family. AJ is just looking at her leaving the house with teary eyes 😭

Part 4 ends.

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