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Part 6

After haldi ,dadi,laxmi bahu,durga and saru return from Gupta house to jindal bhawan.AJ is desperately waiting for his mother so that he could learn from her about guddan.

AJ- Maa,toh kaisa raha function? I hope you all enjoyed it.

Laxmi -Haan AJ,bahut mazaa aaya.Hum logon ne bahut enjoy kiya.Aur saasu maa toh kya lag rahi thi aaj.Ek dum qahar dhaa rahi thi.

After listening to laxmi's talks,Aj becomes more desperate to see guddan.He goes to his room and plans something to meet his guddan.

AJ(with a grin)- Ab toh chahe jo marzi ho marzi ho jaaye,main toh kal guddan se milkar hi rahunga and goes to sleep .

Next day,mehandi function has been arranged.

AJ(making an excuse)-Maa,mujhe abhi restaurant ke liye nikalna hoga,its an important meeting and i have to go there but i'll come back soon and leaves from there.

Maa- Yeh lalla bhi na,har waqt kaam kaam hi karta rehta.Shaadi ke baad bechari guddan pata nahi kaise nibhayegi iss workaholic ke saath

AJ disguises as a waiter and reaches Gupta house.

Guddan is getting ready for mehandi function.She has worn green lehenga and looking damn gorgeous.

kaushalaya and revti are taking her downstairs for the function and AJ is secretly looking at her,completely lost.

AJ(in mind)-Yaar yeh kya kamaal lag rahi .Kisiki nazar na lage.Saying this,he again gets lost in her beauty.

Revti-Chaliye ab di ko mehandi lagan start karte hain.

Kaushalaya applies some mehandi on guddan's hands which had come from jindal bhawan.

Kaushalaya-Chalo ab shagun ho gaya hai.Ab aap logo mehendi lagana start kar sakte hain

The girls who came from parlour starts applying mehandi on guddan's hands.One of the girls asks guddan for husband's name so that she could write his initial in her hands.Guddan gets shy but then she tells her his husband's name. AJ is secretly watching all this and getting happy.

Revti(to the parlour girls)- Jiju ka naam aisi jagah likhna ki woh dhoondh hi na paayein 😆. Di dekh Lena mehendi ka rang bahut dark hoga,jiju aapse pyaar hi itna karte Hain.😉.

Guddan gets shy and gives a look to revti

AJ goes to guddan's room and starts waiting for her in her room.Guddan is done with her mehandi and decides to take some rest as she is very tired after sitting in a same position for two hours.

Guddan-Maa,hum apne kamre mein jaa rahe hain thoda rest karne.

Kaushalaya-Theek hai beta,tum jaakar aaraam karo .Tumhe kal shaadi ke din ek dum fresh dikhna hai

Guddan-Ji maa☺️and goes to her room where AJ is desperately waiting for her.

Guddan locks the door from inside and gets shock to see an unknown person in front of her.She is about to scream just then AJ keeps his hand on her mouth.

AJ(removing his hand)- Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum guddan.Don't scream otherwise all will come here .

Guddan-Who are you and what are you doing in my room??

AJ removes his fake beard.Ab pata chal gaya kaun hoon main??

Guddan gets shock and happy at the same time and hugs him in excitement.After realizing what was she doing,she gets shy and withdraw herself from his embrace.

Guddan-Jindal saab,aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain?? Kisi ne dekh liya toh musibat ho jaayegi.Aap jaayiye yahaan se,please.

AJ- Matlab hadh hai,main itni mushkilon se yahaan tumhe milne aaya hoon aur tum mujhe jaane ke liye keh rahi ho.This is not fair.I have come here to see you and you are asking me to leave😒

Guddan-But jindal saab,Maa ji ne shaadi se pehle milne se mana kiya hai.Achha shagun nahi hota aise shaadi se pehle milna and i don't want anything bad happening in our lives especially with you.You know that you are very precious to me and I can't let anything happen to you.

AJ- Tum kyun aisi baatein karke Mera Mann khraab Kar rahi ho. Theek hai main Chala jaata hoon , mujhe tumse koi baat hi nahi karni hai.

Guddan-Arey mera bacha,phir se naraaz ho gaya.Achha baba ,i'm sorry. Please forgive me(holding her ears)

AJ- Theek hai maaf kiya and hugs her.

Arey apni mehandi toh dikhao, mujhe dekhna hai kaisi lagi hai mere naam ki mehendi.

Guddan shows her hands to him and asks him to find his name. He successfully finds his name and kisses her hands. Guddan chuckles at this and goes from there to her balcony.AJ follows her and holds her from her waist. Guddan place her head on his chest. They remain in that position for some time.

Guddan- Jindal Saab sab bahut achha chal Raha hai par Mann mein ek Ajeeb si bechaini hai. Kahin kuch galat na ho jaaye.

AJ(turning Guddan towards himself)- Shush,aisa kuch nahi hoga Guddan. Ab hum dono ke beech koi nahi aa sakta. Hume zindagi bhar saath rehna hai aur side hi ek doosre se pyaar karna hai aur thoda ladhna jagadhna bhi hai and winks.

Guddan hits his chest making a angry face. Aap bhi na Jindal Saab,Hume sataane ka mauka nahi chhodte and hugs him again.

Guddan- Achha ab jaayiye yahaan se kisi ne dekh liya toh gadbad ho jaayegi.

AJ- Arey aise kaise, pehle main Jo lene aaya tha woh toh de do.

Guddan- Kya lene aaye the aap??

AJ- wahi jise tum Dene mein har baar katrati ho.A kiss 😉

Guddan- Jindal Saab aap aaj Kal bahut naughty ho Gaye Hain. Koi kiss viss nahi milegi aapko.Aap please jaayein yahaan se.

In the meantime Kaushlaya calls Guddan from the outside.

Kaushlaya- Kisse baat Kar rahi ho beta??

Guddan- Dekhiye Jindal Saab,maa bhi aa gayi Hain. Aap please jaayein.

AJ- Tum kiss kardo main Chala jaunga.

Guddan- Kya blackmailing hai yeh. Achha theek hai pehle apni aankhein bandh Kare.

AJ closed his eyes and Guddan gives a peck on his lips. AJ feels her touch on his lips and gets surprised.

Guddan- Ab theek hai,ab jaayein please.

AJ- Theek hai abhi toh jaa Raha Hoon,par Kal aaunga tumhe lene poori baarat ke saath aur humesha humesha ke liye tumhe apna bana loonga.

The end.

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