~~ PunarVivaah~~ || Akshan FF || Last Part updated on pg 39 - Page 10

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Posted: 5 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: srain10

Very romantic update😳 loved it👏

Please show Guddan's tadap also...

Thank you so much dear for liking😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Will try to update tomorrow

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Part 5

Guddan reaches her house and goes to her room and settles down her luggage.

In Jindal bhawan,AJ is feeling so incomplete and restless without his Guddan. He goes to him room but there also he is seeing Guddan smiling in every corner of his room but when he goes to touch her, she gets disappeared everytime.

AJ(holding Guddan's pic in his hand)- Guddan yeh tumne mujhe Kya bana Diya hai. Bilkul paagal ho Gaya Hoon main tumahre liye. Har jagah bus tumhe dekh raha Hoon. Kisi bhi kaam par focus nahi Kar par Raha Hoon. I had never thought that I could love someone even more than Antra.Antra taught me about love but I have learnt to uphold this love from you only. You have become my life and an important part of my body without whom I feel so incomplete. I just can't even imagine my life without you. I love you Guddan,I love you so so much.

In Gupta house

Guddan is also having a restless night. She is also thinking about her Jindal Saab only and looking at pics of her love in her Mobile phone and reminding the moments between them.

Guddan (holding her phone) - Aaj hum bahut khush Hain. Humein toh iss baat ka yakeen hi nahi aa Raha ki koi humse itna zyaada pyaar Kar sakta hai. Kabhi kabhi toh Hume lagta hai ki jaise yeh koi khwaab hai but ab hum Jaan chuke Hain ki yeh khwaab nahi balki haqeeqat hai. Aap hamari zindagi mein pyaar lekar aaye Hain. Hume toh aaj Tak pata hi nahi tha ki yeh pyaar Kya hota hai. But jabse AAP hamari zindagi mein aaye Hain tab Hume mehsoos ho Raha ki Humari zindagi mein bhi koi aisa Insaan hai Jo hamari itni fikr karta hai,humare liye kuch bhi Kar sakta hai and hum jaisi jhalli se itna pyaar Kar sakta hai. Thank you jindal Saab for coming in to my life and making it worth it. I love you Jindal Saab,I love you so so much.

Both are lost in each other's memories and then both decides to call each other. Both dial each other's number at the same time but due to this phone gets engaged.

AJ(in mind) - Yeh Guddan ka number busy kyun aa Raha hai??

On the other side

Guddan (in mind)- Yeh Jindal Saab iss waqt kisse baat Kar rahe Hain Jo unka phone busy aa Raha hai??

Both wait for some time and then Akshat dials Guddan's number and it gets connected.

AJ- Hello Guddan. Kaisi ho tum ?? Kya Kar rahi ho??

Guddan(in teasing mood)- Hum toh bilkul theek Hain Jindal Saab,bus sone ki tyaari Kar rahe. Yahaan bahut mazaa aa Raha hai.

AJ gets irritated.

AJ(mind talks) - Yahaan neend Meri aankhon se gaayab hai aur inn madam ko sone ki padhi hai.

Guddan- Kahaan kho Gaye Jindal Saab?

AJ- Kahin nahi. Waise tum apne maayke jaate hi change ho gayi ho. Wahaan jaate hi tum toh mujhe bhool gayi.Jaakar ek phone Tak nahi Kiya mujhe 😏.

Guddan- Woh Kya hai na Jindal Saab, yahaan itne log the aur mummy Papa se bhi itni der baad mil rahe the toh hum aapko phone karna bhool hi Gaye. Achha toh ab hum phone rakhte Hain ,Hume neend AA rahi hai 😉

AJ- Tumhe neend AA jaayegi mere bagair??

Guddan- Bahut achhi neend AA jaayegi 😜.

AJ- Guddan tum bahut zaalim ho 😏. Meri feelings ki koi parwaah nahi hai tumhe.

Guddan (laughing in her mind)- Achha ab hum phone rakh rahein hai bahut der ho gayi hai.

AJ- Nahi,tum bilkul phone nahi rakhogi. Baat kaar yaar mujhse.

Guddan- Itni baatein toh ki humne.

AJ- Zyaada baatein Karo yaar.Atleast ek baar I love you hi bol do. I want to listen it very badly.

Guddan (shyly)- Jindal Saab,aap bhi na aaj Kal bahut naughty ho Gaye Hain aur ziddi bhi.

AJ- Yeh sab tumahra hi asar hai.Now please say those three magical words so that I could sleep peacefully.

Guddan- Jindal Saab,Kya aap bhi,Hume sharam aa rahi hai. Chhutki bhi hai iss kamre mein.

AJ- I don't know anything, you have to say it.

Guddan- Toh aap nahi maaneinge na

AJ- No 😈

Guddan- Achha baba theek hai Bolte Hain and she slowly whispers in the phone- I love you my big baby

AJ- And I love you more,my love 😘

And finally they disconnect the call and try to sleep which was almost impossible for them.

Next Morning-Haldi function.

In Jindal bhawan

Preparations for the function are going on.

Laxmi bahu is mixing haldi for AJ. Dadi is so excited as finally her wish is coming true. Her Lalla has finally got his happiness.

In Akshan's room, AJ is getting ready for the function.

He is wearing yellow kurta and looking so handsome. Dadi comes to his room.

Dadi- Lalla,tyaar ho Gaya tu??

AJ- Haan maa,bus main neeche hi aa Raha tha.

Dadi- Bahut hi handsome lag Raha hai aaj Mera bacha,kisi ki Nazar na lage and puts kaala teeka behind his ear.

AJ- Kya maa aap bhi ,itni bhi kuch achha nahi lag Raha. Chalein neeche chalte Hain.

Everyone gets so happy seeing Akshat in the colorful kurta except Durga and saru.

Saru- Dekh rahi hain Durga di. AJ par toh Guddan ke pyaar ka aisa rang chadha hai ki woh toh bilkul hi rangeen ho Gaye Hain.

Durga- Rangeen kapde pehene se kuch nahi hoga 😈,main inke rishte ko kabhi rangeen nahi hone doongi .Tum bus dekhti Jao saru,main Kya karti Hoon.

Haldi function starts.

AJ sits on his seat and everyone starts applying haldi on his face. They also apply haldi on each other's face as if they are celebrating Holi.

Dadi- Chalo ab Lalla ko toh haldi lag gayi,ab Hume jaldi se jaldi Gupta house bhi jaana hoga . Guddan ki haldi bhi toh start karni hai. Jab tak AKshat ki lagi huyi haldi Guddan ko nahi lagegi tab Tak rasam poori nahi hogi.

Akshat gets excited as he thinks that he will also go with them but gets dad when Dadi tells him to stay at home only.

Leaving AJ at home, they all leave for Gupta house.

In Gupta house

Guddan is ready for the function. She is wearing a yellow colour suit. She is looking so beautiful.She tooks her maa ji's blessings and then function gets started.

First,Dadi applies haldi on Guddan's face and then turn by turn Durga ,Laxmi and saru apply haldi on Guddan.Guddan is very happy .

Durga(in her mind)- Jitna khush hona hai Guddan ho jao ,kyun baad mein toh tumhe Rona hi hai kyunki main yeh Shaadi nahi hone doongi,aur AJ aur tumhe ek nahi hone doongi.😈

Part 5 ends

So, how's it?? Do give your feedback😳

PS- Ignore the typos

Edited by TC_FA - 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago
#94

Awesome update dear❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#95

Amazing update

Both Akshan missing each other was cute and daayan kabhi nahi sudheregi

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Posted: 5 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: akshan

Awesome update dear❤️

Thank you for liking it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Amazing update

Both Akshan missing each other was cute and daayan kabhi nahi sudheregi

Thanks alot for liking it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#98

Amazing

Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai bt is aag mein jal dayan and chorni rhe hai bs ye dono jal kr khak v ho jaye

Continue asap😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#99

Awesome update

I don't understand a one thing that Dayan is their bahu Or guddan's sautan 🙄🙄

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing

Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai bt is aag mein jal dayan and chorni rhe hai bs ye dono jal kr khak v ho jaye

Continue asap😃

Thank you so much partner for liking🤗

Jaldi update karne ki koshish karenge

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