Hey! I'm back with eighth part of my SS. Hope you all like it. It's a short one.
After promising both of them to complete her all wishes, Akshat was about to go back to living room to take all the stuff and Guddan back to their room, but he heard Durga screaming his name on top of her voice.
D- AJ! AJ! Jldi se aaye, dekhiye Sasumaa ko kya ho rha h.😢😢
Akshat sprinted out of his room and went to living room. He was shaken up on looking Guddan in such state.
She was shivering, her nose was continuesly bleeding, her body was cold and she was not able to speak anything. Tears were rolling down her cheeks, she lifted her hand in his direction slowly with difficulty. He went near her and started rubbing her hands. He took out his handkerchief and cleaned her bleeding nose.
A- (sobbing) Gu..Guddan.. ku..kuch.. nhi ho..hoga.. tumhe. Mein tu..tumhe.. kuch nhi hone du..dunga..
He lifted her in his arms and ran towards his room. Meanwhile Revati called doctor.
Akshan's Room
Akshat and Durga were rubbing her hands, while Saru and Lakshmi were rubbing her feet. Her body was getting cold but still she was sweating, she was losing her consciousness.
Dadi, Angad and Revati were praying for her downstairs in temple. Meanwhile doctor arrived, Vardan and Kishore took her to Akshan's Room.
Doctor asked everyone to leave the room, but Akshat was not ready to leave her. Doctor with difficulty send him out of the room.
Everyone was waiting for doctor in living room. After sometime doctor came out of the room.
A- Doctor, voh Guddan thik he naa? Achanak se kya hua usse.
D- Mr. Jindal calm down, Mrs. Jindal ab thik h. Yeh sab last stage ke symptoms hai. Now you all need to be careful as ab aisa sab unke saath aksar hota rahega. And jab bhi koi aisi situation ho pehle aap unhe shant rakhne ki aur jagaye rakhne ki koshish kijiye and also immediately call me. Medicines time to time dete rhiye and be strong for her. Hum donor dhundhne ki poori koshish kar rhe h, aap bhi try kijiye. Take care of her.
A- Hmmm. Thank you Doctor!
After Doctor leaved everyone went back to Akshan's Room.
Dadi and Akshat sit next to her holding her hand carefully. Rest everyone were standing their looking at her with tears in their eyes.
D- Yeh kya kiya tumne Kanha! Mera phool si hasti khelti bacchi ko kya kar diya. Voh toh tumhe apna dost manti thi aur ussi ke saath tumne itna galat kaise kiya?
A- Maa! Aap aise haar nhi maan skti. Aur naa hi hum mein se koi bhi haar manega, hume iss waqt Guddan ko himmat dekr uske saath yeh jung ladni hogi.
D- Sahi kaha AJ ne, hume Sasumaa ke saath milkar yeh musibat ka datt ke saamna karna hoga.
L- Aur iss musibat se bina dare, bina haar maane ladkr Sasumaa ka sahara banna hoga.
S- Aur iss musibat ko harakar jitna bhi hoga.
Everyone agreed to it and decided to fight against this situation with Guddan.
After sometime everyone leaved the room. Guddan was still unconscious. Akshat was next to her holding her hand,
(It's male version song by Jubin Nautiyal)
{movie-Baaghi2}
Hmmm...
Hmmm...
He slowly slided her behind her ears and was adoring her.
Tumne jo hai maanga toh
Dil ye haazir ho gaya
Tumko maana manzil aur
Musafir ho gaya
He remembered each and every words of letter and his promise to Antra and his mother in law. He slowly held her hand in his and promised her to fulfil all her wishes.
Tumne jo hai maanga toh
Dil ye haazir ho gaya
Tumko maana manzil aur
Musafir ho gaya
She slowly opened her eyes and saw him. His happiness was out of control so he quickly pulled her in a hug, she also reciprocated it.
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Humsafar tu ho gaya
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Mera humsafar tu ho gaya
He slowly pulled her out of hug and kissed her forehead.
hmm... ho...
He brought soup for her while she changed herself in night wear. He slowly started feeding her soup. She was happily having it and was continuesly adoring him. She took spoon from his hand fed him soup as he also didn't have anything whole day. He took a sip and a smile of satisfaction was on both the faces.
Dil ki bechaini ko aaya
Ab kahin aaraam hai
Tu na ho to sochta dil
Tujhko subaho shaam hai
Iss kadar tu har ik pal mein
Mere shaamil ho gaya...
After meal he kept plates in kitchen, came back to his room and gave her medicines.
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Humsafar tu ho gaya
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Mera humsafar tu ho gaya
She was shivering so he brought a shawl and covered her with it. He started massaging her hands and legs gently with hot oil. Guddan was feeling awkward but she wasn't able to deny him. He started talking with her about his childhood memories. She was laughing whole heartedly due to which a beautiful smile was playing on his lips.
Jab se tumne baah thaami
Raaste aasaan hai
Khushnuma hai meri subahe
Dil nashin har shaam hai
Zindagi ke achepan se
Main bhi waaqif ho gaya
He slowly helped her to sleep on bed and went next to her on his side. He kept her head slowly on his shoulder. Guddan was feeling awkward but she was also liking it. He slowly patted her head and she drowned into a peaceful sleep holding his hand near to her heart.
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Humsafar tu ho gaya
Lo safar shuru ho gaya
Mera humsafar tu ho gaya
He kissed her forehead gently and, both of them drifted into a peaceful sleep holding eachother's hand.
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That's great....👍🏼👍🏼you are a fabulous writer......👏👏...but....
Please don't separate Akshan....🥺😭😭
I hope they can find the donor.......🤔🤔🤔
At last plz try to update soon dear......
Such a caring Aj...
Love Durga saru and Lakshmi ...
Everyone is trying to be strong and giving each other much needed Sahara...
Hope Sab thik ho jaldi....
Hey! I'm back with ninth part of my SS. Hope you all like it.
It was a beautiful morning. Guddan waked up with a smile on her lips reminding memories of last night but as she opened her eyes, She saw him in front of her holding a mug .
G- (in sleepy tone with a smile) Aap aaj phir aa gye humare sapne mein chai leke. Par iss baar hum buddhu nhi banange.
He was laughing at her antiques.
G- Aap sapne mein bhi humara mazaak uda rhe h. Rukiye hum abhi aapko mazaa chakhate h,
She was about to get up but her leg got slipped becoz of blanket. He holded her with one of his strong arm and holding mug in other hand. She realised that he was really there, it wasn't her dream.
G- Aa..aap.. sa..sach.. mei..mein.. yaha the.
He nodded his head and carefully placed her on bed.
A- (offering her mug) Kyu? Tumhe kya laga?
G- (taking mug and sipping tea) Ku..kuch.. nhi! Bas aise hi..
A- Tum fresh ho jao, phir hum niche chalte h. Sab breakfast ke liye wait kar rhe h. Aur tumhari appointment h doctor ki isliye jldi se fresh ho jao.
G- thike. (Giving him mug back ) Thanks.
A- Uss ki koi zaroorat nhi h. Mein mug rkhke aata hu.
G- Hmmm.
After sometime he came back to room and frozed on door. She was getting ready, her beautiful pink anarkali was indeed adding more beauty to her.
He went near her and stand behind her. She saw him from mirror but without responding to him, she took her mangalsutra to wear but he holded her hand in mid way. She was confusedly looking at him. He took mangalsutra from her hand and asked her,
A- May I?
(It's male version song by Arijit Singh)
{Movie- Half Girlfriend}
( music)
Her heartbeats increased, a beautiful smile was playing on her lips. She simply nodded her head in agreement. He made her seat on a stool nearby and he himself sit on his knees next to her,
Tum mere ho iss pal mere ho
Kal shayad yeh aalam na rahe
Kuch aisa ho tum tum na raho
Kuch aisa ho hum, hum na rahein…
Yeh raaste alag ho jaaye
Chalte chalte hum kho jaayein…
A- ( while making her wear mangalsutra) Mein jaanta hu Guddan ki tum kal se yhi soch rhi hogi ki aakhir Jindal Sahab ko kya ho gya h, itna ajeeb kyu behave kar rhe h? Kai mere bimari ke baare mein jaankar toh mujhse yeh lagav nhi ho rha na unhe?
(Paused for a while and then again started speaking)
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga…
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga…
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga…
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga…
Iss chahat mein marr jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
A- Par aisa kuch nhi h, Haaa yeh zaroor h ki tumhari bimari ki wajah se hi mujhe kuch pata chla ?
G- ( slowly in low voice) Kyaaa?
Meri jaan mein har khamoshi le
Tere pyaar ke naghme gaaunga
Mmm…
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chahat mein marr jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
A- Yahi ki mein akela nhi hu jo tumse pyaar kar baitha...
Her happiness was on ninth cloud. She was adoring him keenly. He took sindoor from the table and started filling her vermillion.
Aise zaroori ho mujhko tum
Jaise hawayein saanson ko
Aise talashun main tumko
Jaise ki per zameeno ko
Hansna ya rona ho mujhe
Paagal sa dhoondu main tumhe
Kal mujhse mohabbat ho na ho
Kal mujhko ijazat ho na ho
Toote dil ke tukde lekar
Tere darr pe hi reh jaaunga
Mmm…
A- Haa Guddan! Pata nhi kab par tumhari naadaniyan mujhe muskurane ki wajah deti rhi, tumhari khushi thoda aur jeene ki wajah deti rhi, tumhare aansoon mere liye mere dil mein khanjar se chubhne lage aur tumhara saath mere liye meri aakhri khwahish ban gya. Guddan mein bhi tumse bohot pyaar krta hu par batane ke liye himmat nhi juta paya , par ab jab mujhe pata chal chuka h ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar krti ho toh aapne aap ko rok nhi paya.
He helded her both hands in his.
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chahat mein marr jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
A- Jaanta hu mein Guddan ki tumhare liye meri khushi kitni mayne rkhti h, par ek baat jaan lo tum ki meri khushi sirf tumme h. Promise me Guddan ki aaj ke baad tum mujhe kabhi chhodkar nhi jaogi, kyunki agar ab tum bhi mujhe chhodkar chli gyi toh mein ji nhi paunga Guddan.
She covered his mouth with her hand and nodded her head in disagreement. Tears were streaming down from her eyes.
Tum yun mile ho jabse mujhe
Aur sunehari main lagti hoon
Sirf labon se nahi ab toh
Poore badan se hansti hoon
Mere din raat salone se
Sab hai tere hi hone se
Yeh saath hamesha hoga nahin
Tum aur kahin main aur kahin
G- Nhi Jindal Sahab! Aaj ke baad galti se bhi iska zikr mat kijiye ga warna humare pass shayad jitna time bacha h, hum utna bhi nhi ji aayenge.
He hugged her tight, she also reciprocated it.
Lekin jab yaad karoge tum
Main banke hawaa aa jaaunga
O…
A- I Love You Guddan! I love you, please aaj ke baad kabhi aisa kuch mat karna jisse mere jeene ki wajah mujhse cheen jaaye.
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chahat mein marr jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
G-(sobbing) I love you too Jindal Sahab! Hum vada krte h ki aaj ke baad kabhi aisa kuch nhi karenge.
A- Sach.....
G- Much....
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga..
He pulled her out of hug slowly and wiped her tears. She was smiling looking at him with love. He kissed her forehead gently .
After such a beautiful confession both of them went downstairs with their fingers entangled with each other and a smile of satisfaction on their lips.
Everyone assembled over temple. Akshan did aarti together and seek blessings from God as well as Dadi. After breakfast Akshan went for Guddan's checkup.
At Hospital:
After checkup doctor called both of them in cabin.
D- Mr. Jindal we have a good news for you. Humne Mrs. Jindal ke reports Mumbai ke ek well known doctor, Ms. Naina Agrawal ko bataye h, and according to her analysis Mrs. Jindal ke bachne ke chances 5% h.
Akshan's happiness was out of their control.
A- Doctor, Thank you so much. Aap nhi jaanti ki aapne mujhe kitni zyada badi khushkhabri sunayi h.
D- Ur welcome Mr. Jindal, Dr. Naina do din baad Indore aa rhi h. Isliye Mrs. Jindal ko aapko do din baad phir se checkup ke liye laiye ga. Well I need to leave, take care Mrs. Jindal and once again CONGRATULATIONS!
Akshan hugged each other.
A- Kaha tha na maine, dekhna sab jldi se thik ho jayega.
G- Hmmm.
They went back to home and informed everyone about the news. Everyone became happy after listening to it. Durga ordered ice cream. They had an ice cream party for celebrating such a good news.
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Well is this happiness gonna be for long time?
What changes in Akshan's life are gonna take due to Dr. Naina Agrawal?
Must Think🤔
Loved the beautiful convo between Akshan
Yr naina agarwal kuch v kre bt plz dont seperate Akshan plz
And continue soon
Fabulous update
Akshan confession was so cute and sweet. New entry dekhe kya twist laati hai
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