Teri Yaad Saath Hai (SS) Part 13 on pg15 below - Page 2

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So guys here is the third part .Hope you all like it.


As soon as the door bell rang Akshat went to open the door. He saw a delivery boy with some parcel.

DB- Sir, parcel.

A- Kya h iss parcel mein? Aur kisne order kiya h??

Before delivery boy could speak anything Lakshmi interrupted from behind,

L- AJ! Yeh parcel meine order kiya h! Bhaiya laiye dijiye mujhe.

DB- Ji Ma'am. Aap yaha sign kar dijiye.

L- Hmmm.

She signs and collects the parcel. Before she could move further Akshat asked her,

A- Lakshmi bahu! Kya h iss parcel mein??Aap itni jldi kyu kar rhi thi isse lene ke liye?

L- voh..voh..haa..AJ voh isme mera makeup ka samaan h jo meine aur Sasumaa ne saath mein order kiya tha!

A- Okay! Vaise aap itni jldi mein Guddan ke piche ja rhi thi. Sab thik he naa, aur Guddan kaha h?

G- (from behind) Hum yaha h Jindal Sahab. Voh hum yeh cake lene gye the kitchen se issi liye Lakshmi bahu humari isse lane mein madad karne aa rhi thi.

A- thik he.

G- Chaliye ab sara parivaar milkar cake cut karte h.

A- Chalo!😊

Akshat went from their with cake. Lakshmi came to Guddan,

L- Sasumaa aap ki medicines. Aaj agar AJ ne yeh parcel dekh liya hota toh unhe sab pata chal jata!

G- Thank you Lakshmi bahu. Aap ki wajah se aaj hum bach gye. Galti se bhi yeh baat kissi ko bhi pata na chale iska hume khayal rkhna hoga.

L- Aur ek baat Sasumaa voh aapki kal subah 7 baje ki ticket aa chuki h!😢😢

G-(with a fake smile) Lakshmi bahu aap humare baad sab ka acche se khayal rkhiye ga! Bas itna ehsaan aap apni iss dost par kijiye ga.

L- Shhhh..(sobbing) Yeh aap kya keh rhi h Sasumaa. Ehsaan nhi adhikaar h aapka. Aur mein chahe lakh koshish karlu par aap ki tarah iss ghar ka khayal nhi rkh paungi.

Guddan wiped her tears and asked her to be strong for family. Both of them then went from their but unknown to them someone overheard their conversation.

Whole of the family gathered. Anvati cut the cake and fed to each other and also to whole family. Akshan also fed cake to eachother. All of them clicked many photos together but best photo was clicked by Lakshmi of Akshan unknown to them when they were dancing.

After that everyone had dinner together.Anvati together decided to play a game.(Same game played during Christmas).

Everyone who lose the game performed different tasks. Dadi shared her memory with Akshat's dad, Bhushan and Kaushalya performed a couple dance, Siddhi and Saru performed a skit and Vardan proposed Lakshmi in a romantic way.

Now it was Guddan's turn, she pick up a chit. It was written to sing a song for your better half. Everyone cheered her and even Akshat requested her. She stood up and sit on the chair near , Vardan played guitar and she started singing, (In my SS Guddan sings very well)


Aaa...

Aati hai saans mein saans

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(She looks lovingly at him. He smiles.)(She remembers how he saved her various time from falling)


Main jeeti hoon mere paas

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(She remembers moments when he smiles becoz of her cute antics and also when he consoles her)(She also remembered how he always supported her and became her pillar of strength)


Mera hasna pagal jaisa

Mera rona badal jaisa

Sab lagta hain mujhe khaas

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(She stood up and sit next to him)(She remembers their cute nokjhok)(A beautiful smile starts playing on her lips)


Aati hai saans mein saans

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(She remembers moments when he was torchered in mental asylum and she was unable to do anything for him)(She also remembered their date moments when he told her things which he likes in her and their dance)(Tears starts forming in her eyes)


Rehte ho honthon pe, zikr ban ke

Dil mein ho tum hi, fikr ban ke

Tumse hi toh mila pyaar saara

Kya mujhme hai mera, sab tumhara


(She remembered how he saved her from Rocky and his special 7 vachans and also how he made her wear mangalsutra in front of whole family)(Her heart skips a beat on remembering this)


Mera hasna pagal jaisa

Mera rona badal jaisa

Sab lagta hain mujhe khaas

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(He was just adoring her but soon he saw a lone tear escaping her eyes)


Aati hai saans mein saans

Jab tum hote ho

Jab tum hote ho


(He hold that tear before it could fall down and wiped her tears)


Hmmm...

Everyone clapped for her. Soon the game was over and everyone left for their respective room . Bhushan and Kaushalya stayed their at night. Lakshmi fed medicines to Guddan and went to her room.

Akshan's Room

Akshat came out of washroom after changing in night wear. He saw that Guddan was not there in room.


How is it?

Where did Guddan went?

Who heard her conversation with Lakshmi?

Edited by riddy254 - 5 years ago
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It was amazing though it was short

I wish ye convo Akshat ne suna ho

Plz continue soon if possible update it today itself

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Amazing

Plz continue soon

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I read both parts it is said to see Guddan in such state is heart wrenching😭

Very well written

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Amazing update😳

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1st thing i read in mrng

Read all d 3 parts in 1 go

Well written

Loved it

Update soon

Can't wait to read d next part

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Update soon it's written really nice

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