Teri Yaad Saath Hai (SS) Part 13 on pg15 below

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Hey guys! This is first time I'm writing any SS so please ignore my mistakes. I just gotta random thought and try to write something on it.

Index on pg1 below part1


All things were sorted out. Perv was handed to police, Anvati got married, sons realised their mistake and apologised Akshan for it. Whole of the family was reunited.

It was beautiful morning after such a havoc but soon this morning was gonna change into the darkest morning of Jindal family.

After all had breakfast together all of the men left for restaurant. Ladies were busy in household and gossiping, but something strange was about Guddan Today.

She was not feeling well since few days, feeling nauseous, loss of appetite, loss of weight, lack of energy and much more weird things were happening with her , but she didn't shared it with anyone neither anyone in the family noticed it. But today it was just when she through out blood. It was when she realised something serious has happened to her and she need to check out about it.

She took doctor's appointment and went there alone informing everyone that she has gone to visit one of her friend. After all the test performed , doctor came to a conclusion that she was suffering from last stage of blood cancer. Guddan was shocked after knowing that but she composed herself and asked

G- Doctor humare bachne koi tarika, koi illaj nhi h ๐Ÿ˜ข

D- No Mrs.Jindal . Apka blood group AB-ve h jo ki bohot h rare h . Aur agar apko koi donor mil bhi jata h toh bhi it's not confirmed ki uska aur aapka bone marrow same ho. Aur apko appki iss bimari ke baare mein bohot der se pata chala h isliye apke pass time bhi bohot kam h. I'M SORRY MRS. JINDAL .

Guddan's heart was shattered after listening to the doctor's words, flashback of her life started in her mind, moments with her family, her mistakes, her struggle to prove herself and the most important her moments with her one and only "Jindal Sahab" .Her heart was falling down on remembering the vachans given by her Jindal Sahab. That was the moment when she realised why her Jindal Sahab was not ready to take 7th vachan of life time togetherness. She was the one who took a promises from him and now she is the only one who's gonna break all of them. But still she composed herself and asked

G- Doctor humare pass kitna time bacha h??

D- Medicines ka asar rehne ke hissab se around 3 months. ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž

G- Thank you doctor. Ab hum chalte h.

On her way back to home she decided something and she called....

How was it??

Should I continue??



Index:-

  • Part1:-page 1
  • Part2:-page 2
  • Part3:-page 3
  • Part4:-page 4
  • Part5:-page 5
  • Part6:-page 6
  • Part7:-page 7
  • Part8:-page 8
  • Part9:-page 10
  • Part10:-page 11
  • Part11:-page 13
  • Part12:-page 15
  • Part13:-page 15 below
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Kajal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Plz continue soon seems interesting if possible continue it today itself

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Yes plz do continue but i wont be able to see akshan separation๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Thanks for your response

I'll continue soon

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Nice OS

Ohh Guddan has blood cancer it is really sad๐Ÿ˜ญ

Please update soon

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It is different and interesting..continue soon dear..

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Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

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Thankyou guys for such a positive response

Here is the second part. Must share how is it!


She called Lakshmi.

L- Hello Sasumaa. Kahiye kya baat he aakhir aaj aapne AJ ki jagah khi galti se toh mujhe phone nhi kar diya?? Aakhir aaj aapne mujhe kaise yaad kiya??Bataiye Bataiye ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

G- Haa Lakshmi bahu ! Aaj hume aapki bohot zaroorat h bohot zyada (sobbing)

L- Kya hua Sasumaa. Aap ro kyu ho? Sab thik he naa. Please bataiye ne.. Mera mann bohot ghabra rha h ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

G- (crying vigorously)Sab khatam ho gya Lakshmi bahu sab khatam ho gya !!(and she narrated everything to her)๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

L-(sobbing) Sasumaa aap kaha h?? Aap please jldi se ghar aa jayee? Hum AJ ko sab batate h vo kuch na kuch zaaroor karenge aap fikr mat kijiye aap bas jldi se ghar aa jayee. ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

G- Nhi Lakshmi bahu! Hum Jindal Sahab ko kuch nhi batayenge. Aap bhi unhe kuch nhi batayengi aapko humari kasam he!!

L- par kyu Sasumaa??

G- Aap ek kaam kijiye. Jldi se ghar ke pass waale Krishna Mandir pahuchye. Vahi par hum aapko aapke sawaal ka jawab denge..Aur haa ghar mein se kisi ko bhi kuch mat batayega...please...

L- Thik h Sasumaa. Mein abhi Krishna Mandir pahuchti hu.


At Mandir

Guddan and Lakshmi together did pooja and after that distributed prashad to beggars outside. One of the beggar blessed Guddan by saying that "Beti bhagwaan tujhe zindagi ki saari khushiyaan de". Guddan was wordless after listening his words. At that moment Lakshmi cornered Guddan and asked her

L-(with tears) Sasumaa kyu aap AJ ko batane se mana kar rhi h??

G-(wiping her tears) Jindal Sahab ke chehre par aaj kal jo khushi hoti wo hum kaise barbaad kar skte h?? Aur waise bhi Lakshmi bahu ab Jindal Sahab phirse muskurana aur zindagi jeena seekh chuke h. Hum unse unki zindagi bhala kaise cheen le??Isliye hum ne ek faisla kiya h ki hum iss ghar, parivaar aur Jindal Sahab sab se hamesha hamesha ke liye bohot durr chale jayenge!!๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”

L- Yeh aap kya keh rhi Sasumaa. Aap aisa kuch nhi karogi...

G- Nhi Lakshmi bahu ab Jindal Sahab ko humare bina jeene ki aadat daalni padegi.Please aap humara saath dijiye..Kya aap apni dost ki aakhri iccha poori nhi karegi..

Lakshmi hugged her and cried her heart out Guddan also cried but she hide her tears with her eversmiling face. Soon with help of Lakshmi Guddan booked her ticket and took a house on rent in Mumbai and decided to leave Indore forever.

For evening she kept a small party giving a reason to celebrate Anvati's marraige but only Lakshmi and She was knowing that this was her farewell party.

In evening she got ready wearing a blue saare with beautiful golden blouse and her hair tied in bun. Today she wore each and every ornaments which were gifted by her Jindal Sahab.

Akshat came out of washroom after getting ready in his 3 piece suit having blue blazer. He saw Guddan was mesmerized by her beauty.

A- Aaj tum bohot acchi dikh rhi ho.

Guddan was wordless and shocked after listening to his words but she was very happy that before her death she was praised by her Jindal Sahab for her beauty.

G- Thank you Jindal Sahab

He noticed some change in her behaviour so he asked,

A- Kya hua Guddan tum aaj kuch udaas lag rhi ho? Sab thik he naa?

G- Areee bhala hum kyu udaas honge!! vo vo toh hum party ki tayari krte krte thak gye hum isliye.

A- thik h . Chalo ab hum niche chalte h.

G- Hmmm. Chaliye..

Soon both of them joined the party.

Guddan and Revati's family was also present there. Guddan met each of the family member and took blessings of every elder from family.

Soon Vardan gathered everyone and announced for a couple dance. Everyone couple from family joined in the dance..

Soon the song played...

(It's the unplugged version by shraddha kapoor)

O.. Yahin doobe din mere

Yahin hote hain savere

Yahin marna aur jeena

Yahin Mandir aur Madeena

(They both were dancing without disturbing their eyelock)

Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan

Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan

Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan

Yun hi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

(She was twirling around him)

Aa.. aa.. aa..

Tu meri neendo me sota hai

Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai

Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein

Tu na ho phir bhi tu hota hai

Hai sila tu mere dard ka

(He took her hands in his and pull her close to him)

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..

Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan

Teri galiyan galiyaan teri galliyan..

Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

(He lift her and both of them were sharing a beautiful eyelock)

Aa..aa..aa..

They broke their eyelock due to sound of clapping. Akshat carefully kept her and was smiling looking at her .Soon everyone started congratulating newly wedded couple. Suddenly Guddan felt her nose bleeding she left from their without informing anyone. Lakshmi saw this and she followed her.

Akshat saw Lakshmi in hurry following Guddan, he was about to follow her but suddenly the door bell rang...

What do you think guys?

Are akshan gonna face separation or something else??

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Beutifull update Laxmi knows about guddu's illness plz dont create any mu btw them and plz update soonish๐Ÿ˜Š

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Wow.... amazing ๐Ÿ‘

please... continue soonโค๏ธ

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