New FF: A Love Called Hatred-Ch.5 Part 2 Page 8-2/11/19 - Page 4

Thank you so much for your lovely comment 😃 Definitely was aiming to make AJ unique and he will stay dark for a while before he becomes good, but he will eventually 😆 I am happy you liked the storyline and please do continue to read and comment 😃

loved it continue the next part soon

Iwhat I love was

1. He doesn't trust woman easily which means ki uska koi past Hoga.

2. He trusts his sister blind folded.

Yani jab Lakshmi ki asaliyat khulegi to he will be broken.

I love it bcoz teeno hi situation me guddan will be brightness she will be the ray of hope for him.😳

Fantastic updates 👏

Waiting for more

Honestly I cant find words to describe just how engaging your story is.

The dark AJ is alluring in his own way. Those moments between him and Guddan were...umm...what to say, very stimulating. Their was nothing like romance but something on the level of a deadly fire that consumes all😆

I don't have enough words to do justice to the brilliance of your story👏

A question though, how is your vocab so damn good and writing style, so fine?🥱

I really loved it

Really felt bad for guddan because of her brother she is going through all these

Ok dadi caught them it will be interesting what AJ will cook up

Waiseh AJ was telling her nah Ur fianc didn't turn up if I was in his place he would have gone berserk

It's sort of beauty and beast type iam loving it

When this he devil AJ fall for guddan tab he will be passionate lover

Plzzz do continue soon