New FF: A Love Called Hatred-Ch.5 Part 2 Page 8-2/11/19 - Page 2

lina

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Posted: 5 years ago

#11

AsesAwe update

I really loved it

The dark side of AJ

Iam sure like revti said her future husband will love her to the power of infinity

Plzzz do continue

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nahtani88

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Posted: 5 years ago

#12

fantastic

update soon

please add me to your pm list

thank you

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Candid_Blossom

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Posted: 5 years ago

#13

What an interesting story!

It reminds me a beauty & beast story.

You hooked me from the first line.i was imagining all the scene.

Fantastic...Continue soon

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Gill_24

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Posted: 5 years ago

#14

Awesome start to the story please please continue.

😊

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Jo

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Posted: 5 years ago

#15

Wow this is really a different and unique story!
AJ's character is quite dark and interesting here.
Poor Guddan is facing all the consequences of her brother's action.
U r a really good writer

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Jasmine457

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Posted: 5 years ago

#16

Thank you everyone for the lovely comments!❤️ I am happy you liked the introductory chapter. I will be working on the next chapter and hopefully post it this week. *fingers crossed* 😃Please keep reading and let me know what you want to see in the story moving forward. Hopefully, more people read this FF and like it as well. 😊

-Jasmine ⭐️

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Jasmine457

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Posted: 5 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: KajalTiwari
Wow you have written it so perfectly
I really loved it
Plz continue the next part soon...

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and hopefully I continue to write according to your expectations 😊

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Jasmine457

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Posted: 5 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan
Oh my god. Oh my god dear where was u since last three months. 😆

Kya Likha h I mean I love it pls pls do continue soon.
Welcome to the forum😳😳

N one more thing as a writer I m telling u maybe u get few no of comments but pls don't think about that. 😳

Thank you so much 😃 . Yes ever since I saw the show I was thinking about writing an FF, but never got the time to write one until now. I am happy you liked the story and continue to read and comment. Hopefully, more people will comment and let me know how they like the story as well. ⭐️

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Jasmine457

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Posted: 5 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shena07
I never read much of ff's in here.went through this and loved it..do continue..eagerly waiting for the next chapter 😊

Awww...thank you so much and please do continue to read and comment as well. Hopefully I update much sooner and not fall behind. 😊

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Jasmine457

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Posted: 5 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nish_vir
Shit! This is so exciting😲
I imagined a Akshat jindal so dark that it was outright terriffic
Update soon

Thank you. I am happy you liked a darker version of Akshat. I was aiming to portray him in such manner and I am happy you understood his characterization as well. A darker version of Akshat will exist for some time before everything improves.😆

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