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Posted: 7 years ago
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Even though current track of Amma truth was supposed to be the most awaited one..but I feel something is lacking in execution..from bagawat track to suddenly changed to a family fight..Moreover the 'dhamaka' factor , intrigueness are missing..Episodes seem sometimes emotionless..
Better it would be proper continuation of Bagawat track and truth revealation in proper climax..They could have shown good family moments between Rangeela Shivani Amma and others with gradual build up...
Rangeela had more emotions while going for hanging..his interaction with everyone were good
Last week all the episodes had repeat value with impactful dialogues, sequences and enjoyable..Actors are doing good but..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Agree!
For me, impact is missing in this track. I guess the reason might be change in direction as there is new director. Other factors might also be responsible for it. Honestly I enjoyed it till the moment Rangeela and shiavni walked out of the haweli..after that, i couldn't enjoy. Dialogues got repetitive. Rangeela's character has that much in this track that his actions and he, himself is enough to speak for his stand but still every other character in the show is speaking for his goodness i.e. Shiavni, Manmeet, balam, fantom etc which is not at all required. Facilitation has been shown for the character when it is not required. It is killing the beauty. For example- today, Manmeet spoke for Rangeela's Right after knowing Rngeela being sarkar's son instead of speaking for his own mother first.
Veer's character has been turned complete negative but his impact is not coming on screen. Shivani's scenes have been reduced for no reason. They used shivani's character to bring the show to the point where Rangeela could revolt and then they chose not to give her much relevant scenes. Similarly, amma's truth has been out but they didn't show us much scenes of amma especially after change in Rangeela's stand. They didn't show how she is feeling or any significant scene of hers. I don't know what's wrong with the back end team. For central character to work, other characters are also required to create impact especially amma and shiavni as they are Rangeela's family. Yes, something is missing and team needs to work on various levels. Actors are doing good but back end team also needs to buckle up.
Sorry for such long comment๐Ÿ˜†. I got carried away.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the comment..glad that you agree..
I was thinking the same..where is real 'bagawat' in action? If we see carefully, whole of last week was focused on one day only..monday swayamvar and walking off, doctor drama, then evening light disconnection and Rangeela going haveli, coming back with food..The very next morning Veer making amma dance and truth coming out? There was so much potential to show the build up for Amma..her reflections, actions..Shivani Manju bhabi could be used..
After knowing about truth, today Rangeela had no flashbacks of his childhood? No emotional breakdown? He had oodles of emotions while going away from Haveli..where is it now? Only shouting about aurat samman to Sarkar.. His maternal uncle did no good to his mother by keeping her as a bet nor did he came to enquire about her..
Now Rangeela's prime concern is getting Amma married?
If I were in Rangy's place I would have despised outright my origin and be happy to be self made..and never let evil shadow fall on her
Veer has no reactions knowing Rangy is his brother? Only previous copied scene of self whipping?
As villain Jagir is more convincing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dialogues are surely becoming repititive
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tota17

Thanks for the comment..glad that you agree..

I was thinking the same..where is real 'bagawat' in action? If we see carefully, whole of last week was focused on one day only..monday swayamvar and walking off, doctor drama, then evening light disconnection and Rangeela going haveli, coming back with food..The very next morning Veer making amma dance and truth coming out? There was so much potential to show the build up for Amma..her reflections, actions..Shivani Manju bhabi could be used..
After knowing about truth, today Rangeela had no flashbacks of his childhood? No emotional breakdown? He had oodles of emotions while going away from Haveli..where is it now? Only shouting about aurat samman to Sarkar.. His maternal uncle did no good to his mother by keeping her as a bet nor did he came to enquire about her..
Now Rangeela's prime concern is getting Amma married?
If I were in Rangy's place I would have despised outright my origin and be happy to be self made..and never let evil shadow fall on her
Veer has no reactions knowing Rangy is his brother? Only previous copied scene of self whipping?
As villain Jagir is more convincing

@bold, can't agree more! There was lot of potential in this track. A lot could be shown in between but I don't know what was the need to rush especially in your main track. Build ups, transitions, turmoils, break down..a lot could be shown.
How can I forget Veer?! His reaction on Ranggela being his brother was ๐Ÿฅฑ.. actually he had no reaction at all. ๐Ÿ˜†He was neither shocked nor angry on revelation . His character is complete ruined.
Jagir is actually making the whole Chaudhary clan dance on his fingers .๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tota17

Even though current track of Amma truth was supposed to be the most awaited one..but I feel something is lacking in execution..from bagawat track to suddenly changed to a family fight..Moreover the 'dhamaka' factor , intrigueness are missing..Episodes seem sometimes emotionless..

Better it would be proper continuation of Bagawat track and truth revealation in proper climax..They could have shown good family moments between Rangeela Shivani Amma and others with gradual build up...
Rangeela had more emotions while going for hanging..his interaction with everyone were good
Last week all the episodes had repeat value with impactful dialogues, sequences and enjoyable..Actors are doing good but..


Not something everything is missing in current track !! There are no emotions, talks between characters !! Things happen so randomly !! Bhagawat track was suppose to be something where Rangeela behaves mature and handles Veer and Chaudhry's with his street smartness and brings in the change in Berehampur !! But yaha tho he is more concerned about getting a husband and identity to his Amma , that too from a person who is solely responsible for his Amma's condition today ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Last week also except the 2 episodes of his Bhagawat , others were stretched beyond necessary !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The latest diagnosis of all the disadvantages of the show is: "Brain from a producer, writer and other responsible, has been on vacation since the beginning of this show"!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Let me summarise
Day 1 bhagawat
Day 2 Amma truth
Day 3 Sarkar changed
Day 4 Sarkar gayab / dead
Omg๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tota17

Let me summarise

Day 1 bhagawat
Day 2 Amma truth
Day 3 Sarkar changed
Day 4 Sarkar gayab / dead
Omg๐Ÿคฃ


U forgot Veer's pagalpanti ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: danceismyworld

Agree!

For me, impact is missing in this track. I guess the reason might be change in direction as there is new director. Other factors might also be responsible for it. Honestly I enjoyed it till the moment Rangeela and shiavni walked out of the haweli..after that, i couldn't enjoy. Dialogues got repetitive. Rangeela's character has that much in this track that his actions and he, himself is enough to speak for his stand but still every other character in the show is speaking for his goodness i.e. Shiavni, Manmeet, balam, fantom etc which is not at all required. Facilitation has been shown for the character when it is not required. It is killing the beauty. For example- today, Manmeet spoke for Rangeela's Right after knowing Rngeela being sarkar's son instead of speaking for his own mother first.
Veer's character has been turned complete negative but his impact is not coming on screen. Shivani's scenes have been reduced for no reason. They used shivani's character to bring the show to the point where Rangeela could revolt and then they chose not to give her much relevant scenes. Similarly, amma's truth has been out but they didn't show us much scenes of amma especially after change in Rangeela's stand. They didn't show how she is feeling or any significant scene of hers. I don't know what's wrong with the back end team. For central character to work, other characters are also required to create impact especially amma and shiavni as they are Rangeela's family. Yes, something is missing and team needs to work on various levels. Actors are doing good but back end team also needs to buckle up.
Sorry for such long comment๐Ÿ˜†. I got carried away.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†


Disha, as usual u very nicely pointed out the issues ๐Ÿ˜Š agree to everything u said but yeh log badalne nahi wale ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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