MG FF - For One Night / Chp 5 - 22.11.2024 / Pg 14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: muskanp

What a beautifully intense update! You’ve captured Geet’s inner turmoil so vividly that I could almost feel the storm within her. The description of the vast, cold halls perfectly mirrors her feelings of isolation and the weight she carries due to her father’s debt. The way you’ve built up Maan’s character is incredible—his gaze, his commanding voice, and his steady, deliberate movements make him both intriguing and formidable. The tension between Geet and Maan is palpable, and the slow, careful pacing adds to the suspense. This update truly leaves me on the edge, eager for what happens next. Well done! Waiting

Thank you so much Muskan...Reviews like this really make my day

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wow wow geet was shocked to know maan knew about each and everything and geet s dad wanna give him money waiting for next update 💝

Thanks dear 🌸

Will update soon.

Originally posted by: Floweebee

Maan knew her family from starting. He trapped her very well. Geet is right now high on emotions after knowing the truth. I just feel that Maan is in love with her or he is planning something big.

Stay tuned to know what really Maan feels.

Thank you for commenting...I appreciate it

Nice update..

Maan told geet that she is not the first one to ask for help, her father also asked for his help..

Geet came to know it was not for one night but it is game for power..

Waiting for next update..

Thanks for updating....

love your writing style

Chapter 2

Dynamic update... brilliantly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she is a tough situation

great that she is aware of Maan's intentions

but she cannot turn back

sad that she has no choice in the matter

of cos Maan was waiting for her

well she has made her decision

as expected she was there to fulfill her part of the bargain

at least Maan was honest with Geet

so he revealed that he knows her for a while

Geet's reaction was justified

oh no her dad owes Maan a large sum of money

Geet's was indeed shocked....

finally Maan revealed everything

oh her dad was unable to repay Maan with interest

hmm she puts the pieces together and realised what happened

Gosh she already signed the contract and is now Maan's mine

Geet's anger was understandable

now she knows what Maan did!

her inner turmoil well portrayed

hate that Maan tried to justify his actions

not surprised that it was all Maan's cold and calculative plan

innocent and helpless Geet fell into it

blissfully unaware of reality

Maan played his cards well

however its too late for her to change her decision

Maan is clearly ruthless

Geet now understands what she got herself into

one night is just the beginning!!!

what has Geet gotten herself into!!

wonder what Maan's real motive is?

update asap!

Amazing update...

Maan know geet and her family for a while and her father owes maan large amount of money... Maan is calculative and cunning but I feel he have a soft corner for geet.... Or is there any alternative motive behind his one night agreement with geet? What is maan planning using geet?

Very curious to know what happened next..

Update soon

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Maan told geet that she is not the first one to ask for help, her father also asked for his help..

Geet came to know it was not for one night but it is game for power..

Waiting for next update..

Thank you 💕

Will update soon

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for updating....

love your writing style

Chapter 2

Dynamic update... brilliantly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she is a tough situation

great that she is aware of Maan's intentions

but she cannot turn back

sad that she has no choice in the matter

of cos Maan was waiting for her

well she has made her decision

as expected she was there to fulfill her part of the bargain

at least Maan was honest with Geet

so he revealed that he knows her for a while

Geet's reaction was justified

oh no her dad owes Maan a large sum of money

Geet's was indeed shocked....

finally Maan revealed everything

oh her dad was unable to repay Maan with interest

hmm she puts the pieces together and realised what happened

Gosh she already signed the contract and is now Maan's mine

Geet's anger was understandable

now she knows what Maan did!

her inner turmoil well portrayed

hate that Maan tried to justify his actions

not surprised that it was all Maan's cold and calculative plan

innocent and helpless Geet fell into it

blissfully unaware of reality

Maan played his cards well

however its too late for her to change her decision

Maan is clearly ruthless

Geet now understands what she got herself into

one night is just the beginning!!!

what has Geet gotten herself into!!

wonder what Maan's real motive is?

update asap!

My god thank you soo much for the wonderful comment 🫶💕

Yes will update soon 🤍

Originally posted by: Athuathulya

Amazing update...

Maan know geet and her family for a while and her father owes maan large amount of money... Maan is calculative and cunning but I feel he have a soft corner for geet.... Or is there any alternative motive behind his one night agreement with geet? What is maan planning using geet?

Very curious to know what happened next..

Update soon

Thank youuuu 🌸

Will update soon...till then, keep thinking

Interesting update. This is what happens when things are hidden from the family. Geet father has taken Loan from Maan and unable to pay and Maan knew everything including her family and that is why he came to her place of work and gave his card. Geet to save her family meets him not knowing what will be the outcome. Why is Maan such a cold man.